There were just a few hiccups for me:
The romance was contrived and devalued some of the characters, though perhaps it's just personal preference.
The story could have been more detailed overall; perhaps more worldbuilding, character backgrounds and development, and more explanation for each of the happenings. It may have made the romance worthwhile.
Wish it had a mature feeling, but at least you get the feeling that the young adults/children are young adults/children.
