Feb 27, 2024
It starts off good, but the moment the dog slug splits, the story suddenly has to juggle the obvious implication of an anti-slug breeding out in the wild, the redemption arc for a LOT of really shitty people, a romance arc, managing the original dog slug's reproduction, and wrapping all of this up in two volumes. And frankly, it falls flat on that front. The ending boils down to a Deus Ex Machina, and a "ooo, we're mysterious and beyond your comprehension".
Almost everyone kind of just sucks here. FMC is the least unlikeable out of the lot. But everyone around her is some variety of
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shit. Her "friends" constantly insult her, and leave her out, everyone in her club constantly abuses her, and her own brother is an annoying brat that eventually gets his own sister attacked by an old man, and their house burned down. At the story goes on, a couple of people apologize, and the mega bitch from the club actually has a redemption arc, but it sounds like the story wants us to lump individual characters atoning with everyone atoning. Like, if mega bitch is nice now, then all her problems in the club must be resolved. And if one of her bitch "friends" apologizes exactly once, then they must both be clean now. The story even has the audacity to have the second bitch friend call the first one out like she wasn't ALSO doing the exact same shit. And they're just "friends" in the end like nothing happened.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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