| nice nice but you have to be more careful with the face structure nex time |
| I havent finished coloring this yet but here's the line art, tell me what you think. |
StiltyAug 13, 2008 11:58 PM
Setsunaku said: I havent finished coloring this yet but here's the line art, tell me what you think. i can't see anything =[ |
| Try this link then: http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg128/Setsunaku_album/Nakuna.png |
| I'm not to happy with my coloring too much, but I still like it. The first one was a quick sketch I colored so errors abound. They're kinda big. |
XahkiiAug 27, 2008 10:01 PM
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| @Xahkii:A less realistic, I mean thinner, neck would suit the middle drawing. I mean, wow, that would be great. First one is AWW, PANDA, but I wonder if you should've let the eyebrows show through the hair. A lot of manga artists do this, because the eyes are the parts that show most emotion. I feel that a lot more emotion can be read if you leave them visible. On the last one, I think the collar-bones are a bit... stiff. I know they're bones, but I mean they're very uniform, I just don't think they flow well with the rest of the drawing. Torso-shoulder shading makes her look really skinny, but I guess it works. Kinda. Let's see... The shading on her chest area also makes it look like her chest is bulging inwards. Her hand also seems a bit weird with that line on top, but whatever. The rest is WOW, I'M AIMING TO BEAT YOU. |
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| kk the drawings were pretty ok but you have to watch out if you are trying to add some wind effects |
Shinobigami said: Wha~ I really like your sketch^^ |
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icecreeaamm said: Wha~ I really like your sketch^^ Why thank you Here's a little more of my work. |
Ninja_ShinigamiAug 15, 2008 12:26 AM
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Shinobigami said: it would be interesting if those two did fight |
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| if that happened...i would've known who was the winner already |
Raidanzoup said: @Xahkii:A less realistic, I mean thinner, neck would suit the middle drawing. I mean, wow, that would be great. First one is AWW, PANDA, but I wonder if you should've let the eyebrows show through the hair. A lot of manga artists do this, because the eyes are the parts that show most emotion. I feel that a lot more emotion can be read if you leave them visible. On the last one, I think the collar-bones are a bit... stiff. I know they're bones, but I mean they're very uniform, I just don't think they flow well with the rest of the drawing. Torso-shoulder shading makes her look really skinny, but I guess it works. Kinda. Let's see... The shading on her chest area also makes it look like her chest is bulging inwards. Her hand also seems a bit weird with that line on top, but whatever. The rest is WOW, I'M AIMING TO BEAT YOU. Haha, it's nice to have actual critisizm once in a while XD And thanks. A thinner neck would probably be better, and it might look better if her eyebrows were still showing, but I don't usually do that with my style. Yeah, the third is a bit weird in retrospect. And a new sketch I did around the first three drawings These are a lot older, but I'll put them up anyway. |
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| The third drawing is kinda cute, like her tongue says, but it looks like her sweater/whatever folds inwards, since we can't see a border of any kind. Also, photobucket messed this on up, but whatever... |
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Xahkii said: Raidanzoup said: @Xahkii:A less realistic, I mean thinner, neck would suit the middle drawing. I mean, wow, that would be great. First one is AWW, PANDA, but I wonder if you should've let the eyebrows show through the hair. A lot of manga artists do this, because the eyes are the parts that show most emotion. I feel that a lot more emotion can be read if you leave them visible. On the last one, I think the collar-bones are a bit... stiff. I know they're bones, but I mean they're very uniform, I just don't think they flow well with the rest of the drawing. Torso-shoulder shading makes her look really skinny, but I guess it works. Kinda. Let's see... The shading on her chest area also makes it look like her chest is bulging inwards. Her hand also seems a bit weird with that line on top, but whatever. The rest is WOW, I'M AIMING TO BEAT YOU. Haha, it's nice to have actual critisizm once in a while XD And thanks. A thinner neck would probably be better, and it might look better if her eyebrows were still showing, but I don't usually do that with my style. Yeah, the third is a bit weird in retrospect. And a new sketch I did around the first three drawings These are a lot older, but I'll put them up anyway. These aren't that bad, I like the clothes design and poses on them. However, the fingers on the first one for the girl should be a bit longer the palm looks too big compared to her fingers lacing his. As for Raidanzoup's critique I agree on some of them.The wrinkle flow does clash a little bit but mostly because there are some unnecessary folds that interrupts the rest of the "flowy" effect, but you have the right idea. The Line detail on her left arm is actually semi-accurate, the only reason it looks strange is because we cant see the rest of the arm. If you can picture that her arm is raised slightly forward (facing you like as if you were about to point a gun) the line would make sense, know what i mean? (like right now it makes sense but it looks wrong because we cant see where the rest of the arm is facing) The wrinkle under her breast is passable I say, only for the sole reason that it could have been your intention for the design of the shirt(?) that the white intricate design underneath her breasts are holding the top part of the shirt together. Plus it does not look wrong at a glance and at full attention. So i say its a plausible and its fine the way that area looks. Opinions 1 and 2 i agree completely with Raidanzoup. Overall they are good not too far from complete accuracy and very small errors that are hardly noticeable at a glance. ^___^ |
ClamMongrelAug 16, 2008 2:34 AM
| Just a few old sketches from my stuff eh some of them turned out ok but I haven't drawn anything new in a while and MAL and these anime art clubs are inspiring me to go back to the drawing board. Thought I'd share my skill with you guys and then perhaps come up with new much better refined material xP "Abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is..."~ The Crow ~Wind~ from the Inuyasha "Wind" soundtrack cover. Another Inuyasha sketch (though i got bored of the series after a while) the characters were always fun to draw. ^^; He's all yours bounty hunter... ~ i know its not anime xD but i figured what the heck? gotta love Vader though i know there are a few mistakes but with the exception of the first one, the rest were just randomly drawn and half-assed (notice the procrastination involved in the last 3 weheheheheheh. >.< V) |
| got chapter 2 of my manga done: http://sonicspin2.deviantart.com/gallery/#kisuke-no-seitenkan-chapters |
| Line art of, yet another, drawing that I haven't got to coloring yet. Anyway tell what you think. Finished version: |
StiltyAug 18, 2008 12:27 PM
| Wow, you guys are pretty talented! ^_^ I haven't drawn something in a long time, but this is something I finished a while ago. The link takes you to the finished one over at deviantART.  By the way, it's an original character... |
| :D its great xD! |
Setsunaku said: Line art of, yet another, drawing that I haven't got to coloring yet. Anyway tell what you think. Finished version: Going by the colored version, I'd say it's very good. I like the clothes. For some critisizm (which just might be me): -his left sleeve is a little weird at the top -his left thumb is in his pocket right? I think the belt is in the way of a pocket there. -right hand is wonky -low pants are low -is the triangle above the belt part of the pants or undershirt? |
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ItachixSasuke |
Here's one from when I bought my tablet: And my latest: Wraithmare |
Et3rnalAbySsAug 25, 2008 1:42 PM
v3l3no-ansa said: That....is full of.......win.....ItachixSasuke |
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v3l3no-ansa said: ItachixSasuke Isn't that just a cropped manga page? |
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Konahi_chan said: v3l3no-ansa said: That....is full of.......win.....ItachixSasuke arigato gozaimashita^____^ |
Xahkii said: v3l3no-ansa said: ItachixSasuke Isn't that just a cropped manga page? it's just a re-drawing |
| lol o_O no stealing people's artwork now |
| "Cropped manga page" Take it as a compliment, lolrofl. Got anything else, v3l3no-ansa? |
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v3l3no-ansa said: Xahkii said: v3l3no-ansa said: ItachixSasuke Isn't that just a cropped manga page? it's just a re-drawing oooh I dig this one, you can tell its re-drawn by the black marker(?) strokes on the hair and maybe a little photoshop inking? cant be sure, but it is hand made. Awesome job. ^__^ |
| A work in progress that I'm slowly building up. Right now I'm at 2 characters, but I plan to have at least 6, all original characters from my own series |
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Raidanzoup said: "Cropped manga page" Take it as a compliment, lolrofl. Got anything else, v3l3no-ansa? Raidanzoup said: "Cropped manga page" Take it as a compliment, lolrofl. Got anything else, v3l3no-ansa? thanksss ^^u can see my work here -->http://v3l3no-ansa.deviantart.com/ |
ClamMongrel said: v3l3no-ansa said: Xahkii said: v3l3no-ansa said: ItachixSasuke Isn't that just a cropped manga page? it's just a re-drawing oooh I dig this one, you can tell its re-drawn by the black marker(?) strokes on the hair and maybe a little photoshop inking? cant be sure, but it is hand made. Awesome job. ^__^ thankssss it's all hand made i did'nt use photoshop ^__^ |
| A sketch coloured with Photoshop,not so awesome however ^^... |
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Xahkii said: A work in progress that I'm slowly building up. Right now I'm at 2 characters, but I plan to have at least 6, all original characters from my own series Now thats pro ^^ |
| Thanks ^^ I wanted to make my series a game if I ever got the chance, and here's a little sheet showing one character's, Daisuke's, simple specials. Two comics I did just for fun with a little pronounciation and here's the finished sketch of the picture I posted earlier. Right now, it's in the process of being inked then colored. |
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XahkiiAug 29, 2008 7:05 AM
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| I love the nosebleed comic. Seriously, it's funny. I once walked into the store I buy manga at, and I was really happy 'cause I feel complete happiness with those books surrounding me, and like... 2 minutes after I got to the shelves my nose started bleeding. err, lol. Let's see... The the top and bottom drawings in the first image look stiff compared to the two in the middle, where you captured their movement quite well. But dude, why does BURN FIRE also use the universal hadouken keys? liek, lol. |
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Raidanzoup said: I love the nosebleed comic. Seriously, it's funny. I once walked into the store I buy manga at, and I was really happy 'cause I feel complete happiness with those books surrounding me, and like... 2 minutes after I got to the shelves my nose started bleeding. err, lol. Let's see... The the top and bottom drawings in the first image look stiff compared to the two in the middle, where you captured their movement quite well. But dude, why does BURN FIRE also use the universal hadouken keys? liek, lol. i wasn't sure if that nosebleed thing was real XD I think I heard it was true and I guess so. Which are the top and bottom drawings? The one about the character attack sheet? If so, I can't really complain cause I did it quickly in class. And of course Burn, Fire! has 236. All fireballs have to be hadoukens =P Even Higher is the same as a shoryuken |
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Mireyu said: A sketch coloured with Photoshop,not so awesome however ^^... nice work Mireyu =P just don't be too rough with the colors next time |
Animator-Kite said: Mireyu said: A sketch coloured with Photoshop,not so awesome however ^^... nice work Mireyu =P just don't be too rough with the colors next time Thank you,I'm still looking for a good color tecnique with Photoshop...Does anyone know a good trainer or have some advice? |
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Mireyu said: Animator-Kite said: Mireyu said: A sketch coloured with Photoshop,not so awesome however ^^... nice work Mireyu =P just don't be too rough with the colors next time Thank you,I'm still looking for a good color tecnique with Photoshop...Does anyone know a good trainer or have some advice? u can find a lot of coloring tutorial on deviantart ^^ |
v3l3no-ansa said: Mireyu said: Animator-Kite said: Mireyu said: A sketch coloured with Photoshop,not so awesome however ^^... nice work Mireyu =P just don't be too rough with the colors next time Thank you,I'm still looking for a good color tecnique with Photoshop...Does anyone know a good trainer or have some advice? u can find a lot of coloring tutorial on deviantart ^^ http://www.good-tutorials.com/tutorials/photoshop/color heres one site I used for all my photoshop needs, and also V3l3no is right deviantart has loads of coloring tutorials. http://www.deviantart.com/#order=9&q=coloring+tutorials. hope that helps. ^__^ |
| Thanks everybody ^O^!!! |
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| Wow so many great artists here *__* Hmmm.......what would I dare to show you guys? XD Well I did this pic about Edward Elric little while ago^^ http://jeeppu.deviantart.com/art/I-have-been-waiting-for-you-95259390 |
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ClamMongrel said: Jeeppu said: Wow so many great artists here *__* Hmmm.......what would I dare to show you guys? XD Well I did this pic about Edward Elric little while ago^^ http://jeeppu.deviantart.com/art/I-have-been-waiting-for-you-95259390 oooh dig the coloring skills I like how Edward was drawn too and the floor pavement very nice touch. Great job. ^__^ aaww thank you!! *glomps* |
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Jeeppu said: ClamMongrel said: Jeeppu said: Wow so many great artists here *__* Hmmm.......what would I dare to show you guys? XD Well I did this pic about Edward Elric little while ago^^ http://jeeppu.deviantart.com/art/I-have-been-waiting-for-you-95259390 oooh dig the coloring skills I like how Edward was drawn too and the floor pavement very nice touch. Great job. ^__^ aaww thank you!! *glomps* x_x! lol you did a pretty good job, i bet if you showed the other pictures you made, we'd be impressed?may~be? |
MyOneMelancholy said: Jeeppu said: ClamMongrel said: Jeeppu said: Wow so many great artists here *__* Hmmm.......what would I dare to show you guys? XD Well I did this pic about Edward Elric little while ago^^ http://jeeppu.deviantart.com/art/I-have-been-waiting-for-you-95259390 oooh dig the coloring skills I like how Edward was drawn too and the floor pavement very nice touch. Great job. ^__^ aaww thank you!! *glomps* x_x! lol you did a pretty good job, i bet if you showed the other pictures you made, we'd be impressed?may~be? Haha actually I trying to make a pic right now....and I feel like giving up XD But if I manage to make it ready I will show to you guys ^^ |
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| lol show me O_o |
| i love L |
v3l3no-ansa said: i love L did you draw that? its uh-mazing :D |
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