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Feb 3, 2015 11:32 AM
#1
I feel like a lot of people call a character 'badly-written' when they simply do not like them. What is your personal criteria when you call a character 'badly-written'? Also please do give examples of such characters and why that particular character is 'badly written'. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:33 AM
#2
Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality |
Nico- said: Conversations with people pinging/quoting me to argue about some old post I wrote years ago will not be entertained@Comic_Sans oh no y arnt ppl dieing i need more ppl dieing rly gud plot avansement jus liek tokyo ghoul if erbudy dies amirite |
Feb 3, 2015 11:33 AM
#3
Thank you so much for this thread :D this is GONNA BE GOLD!!! i really wanted to see several opinions on this!! ಠ‿ಠ |
Feb 3, 2015 11:34 AM
#4
Comic_Sans said: Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality lol ... kay :") |
Feb 3, 2015 11:34 AM
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WAD1992 said: Thank you so much for this thread :D this is GONNA BE GOLD!!! i really wanted to see several opinions on this!! ಠ‿ಠ me too. i'm actually really curious? because i get it when people dislike a character but it just sounds like they call a character badly-written to make their opinion seem more objective. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:35 AM
#6
yea ppl get confused easily |
Feb 3, 2015 11:35 AM
#7
The most poorly written character from the "Space☆Dandy" series is Honey. She is just the most uninteresting and bland character out of the colourful cast that she stands out as boring. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:36 AM
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Feb 3, 2015 11:36 AM
#9
StevenHu said: The most poorly written character from the "Space☆Dandy" series is Honey. She is just the most uninteresting and bland character out of the colourful cast that she stands out as boring. so you basically think when a character is boring he/she is 'badly-written'? |
Feb 3, 2015 11:38 AM
#10
the way i see it... a character is badly written when he/she changes drastically from one time to another with no actual character development. when they're just being a certain way for the convenience of the plot. i don't necessarily think a 'boring' character is badly written. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:39 AM
#11
When a character starts doing the opposite of what the story has told me, like "this character is very sweet because blah blah and also blah blah" and then they act very diferently because yes. Example Sakura Haruno she was a sasuke's fangirl at the beginning, in shippuden she has a slow development which was okey and well done and then, in the last chapters of the manga she starts acting like in the beginning because no reason. |
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Feb 3, 2015 11:42 AM
#12
badwolf45f said: When a character starts doing the opposite of what the story has told me, like "this character is very sweet because blah blah and also blah blah" and then they act very diferently because yes. Example Sakura Haruno she was a sasuke's fangirl at the beginning, in shippuden she has a slow development which was okey and well done and then, in the last chapters of the manga she starts acting like in the beginning because no reason. YES THANK YOU BLESS YOU. sakura haruno is my most disliked character of all time. and i agree with everything you'Ve said about her. she's so inconsistent. that's what i personally call badly-written. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:43 AM
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Feb 3, 2015 11:44 AM
#14
I don't really get it when people say that too. If it's 'badly drew' then I would understand but I don't know what is written about characters |
Feb 3, 2015 11:45 AM
#15
A badly written character is a character whose actions conflict with the personality he is given I think. |
I've been here way too long... |
Feb 3, 2015 11:47 AM
#16
chuuzenjis said: the way i see it... a character is badly written when he/she changes drastically from one time to another with no actual character development. when they're just being a certain way for the convenience of the plot. i don't necessarily think a 'boring' character is badly written. ^ this !!! |
Feb 3, 2015 11:47 AM
#17
TheConquerer said: A badly written character is a character whose actions conflict with the personality he is given I think. ^ also this |
Feb 3, 2015 11:48 AM
#18
chuuzenjis said: What is your personal criteria when you call a character 'badly-written'? Being "badly-written" truly isn't subjective. You must fit a lot of basic requirements while writing a storyline, and creating solid characters is part of it. Background story, situational depth, characteristics and personality, development, placement... all the writing 101. If it's badly-written it is because they fail at something. You can think of the examples yourself. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:48 AM
#19
A badly written character for me is when he his development is too rushed like from one episode to another |
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Feb 3, 2015 11:48 AM
#20
chuuzenjis said: badwolf45f said: When a character starts doing the opposite of what the story has told me, like "this character is very sweet because blah blah and also blah blah" and then they act very diferently because yes. Example Sakura Haruno she was a sasuke's fangirl at the beginning, in shippuden she has a slow development which was okey and well done and then, in the last chapters of the manga she starts acting like in the beginning because no reason. YES THANK YOU BLESS YOU. sakura haruno is my most disliked character of all time. and i agree with everything you'Ve said about her. she's so inconsistent. that's what i personally call badly-written. I used to like her in shippuden, I liked the development she was having but at the end it was for nothing so xD |
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Feb 3, 2015 11:49 AM
#21
chuuzenjis said: the way i see it... a character is badly written when he/she changes drastically from one time to another with no actual character development. when they're just being a certain way for the convenience of the plot. i don't necessarily think a 'boring' character is badly written. That's contradictive. If they changed, then they had character development. What you are describing in the first paragraph is bad character development. Being badly written, to my understanding, should not be about personal preferences and likes and dislikes, it should be about the writing of the character, and how it fits the story they are in. Their actions shouldn't be illogical or inconsistent, if they have character development, it shouldn't feel manipulative and unrealistic. They should have a well established personality, motives, and desires. They should be rounded characters, with well fleshed out dimensions of their being and personality. Monologues, backstories, thought process helps the viewer connect to them and understand them. But like most things it always depends on their role in the story, and their purpose. And yes some people basically treat the term as ''I dislike this character thus it's badly written'' and since people always strive to make their opinions feel more valid and ''correct'' than others due to their ego and what not, they will misuse a lot of terms like this. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:49 AM
#22
ninjastarforcex said: Comic_Sans said: more like his personality changed too sudden.Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality pussy > badass > now suddenly silent emo like sasuke WTH are you talking about??!!! XP they made an entire torture scene episode about this .... lol ... seriously just stick with cross ange :") leave the seinen stuff alone ...lawl |
Feb 3, 2015 11:54 AM
#23
>I feel like a lot of people call a character 'badly-written' when they simply do not like them. this is why i prefer to use like/dislike instead of good/bad, and have a better opinion of people who also do so >What is your personal criteria when you call a character 'badly-written'? i try not to call a character (or a story) 'badly-written' as it sounds pretentious, and if i tried to put it into more words, it would probably sum up to 'i don't like the character' or 'it was generic/forgettable' |
Feb 3, 2015 11:55 AM
#24
tsudecimo said: chuuzenjis said: the way i see it... a character is badly written when he/she changes drastically from one time to another with no actual character development. when they're just being a certain way for the convenience of the plot. i don't necessarily think a 'boring' character is badly written. That's contradictive. If they changed, then they had character development. What you are describing in the first paragraph is bad character development. Being badly written, to my understanding, should not be about personal preferences and likes and dislikes, it should be about the writing of the character, and how it fits the story they are in. Their actions shouldn't be illogical or inconsistent, if they have character development, it shouldn't feel manipulative and unrealistic. They should have a well established personality, motives, and desires. They should be rounded characters, with well fleshed out dimensions of their being and personality. Monologues, backstories, thought process helps the viewer connect to them and understand them. But like most things it always depends on their role in the story, and their purpose. And yes some people basically treat the term as ''I dislike this character thus it's badly written'' and since people always strive to make their opinions feel more valid and ''correct'' than others due to their ego and what not, they will misuse a lot of terms like this. yeah you're right i didn't phrase that properly. i guess what i was trying to say is that bad character development will also make the character 'badly-written'. when they're just being plot devices..you know? and yeah i totally agree. i don't think it should be something subjective. so many people misuse the phrase really often and it's irritating to me. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:57 AM
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romagia said: >I feel like a lot of people call a character 'badly-written' when they simply do not like them. this is why i prefer to use like/dislike instead of good/bad, and have a better opinion of people who also do so >What is your personal criteria when you call a character 'badly-written'? i try not to call a character (or a story) 'badly-written' as it sounds pretentious, and if i tried to put it into more words, it would probably sum up to 'i don't like the character' or 'it was generic/forgettable' i dont know i dont think that calling a character badly-written is pretentious. it's just that people are quick to put their own opinions above others. i personally don't mind people calling characters 'badly-written' when they really are. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:58 AM
#26
chuuzenjis said: so you basically think when a character is boring he/she is 'badly-written'? That's only the half-truth. Honey was probably the only uninteresting character in the otherwise interesting show meant to be fun, meaning that she doesn't really fit well with the series. She also had no development compared to the rest of the recurring cast and her background as well as the role she played were laughably pathetic. |
Feb 3, 2015 11:59 AM
#27
Badly written is still subjective no matter the criteria or standard, it's just not personal like like and dislike. romagia said: this is why i prefer to use like/dislike instead of good/bad, and have a better opinion of people who also do so i try not to call a character (or a story) 'badly-written' as it sounds pretentious, and if i tried to put it into more words, it would probably sum up to 'i don't like the character' or 'it was generic/forgettable' I feel the same away. Read or typing''Badly written'' makes me cringe. I also always try to use ''I think''' and ''imo'' when talking about quality of anime/manga, I don't like people who don't, it makes them seem like arrogant and non-self aware idiots. |
Feb 3, 2015 12:05 PM
#28
WAD1992 said: ninjastarforcex said: Comic_Sans said: Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality pussy > badass > now suddenly silent emo like sasuke WTH are you talking about??!!! XP they made an entire torture scene episode about this .... lol ... seriously just stick with cross ange :") leave the seinen stuff alone ...lawl I also think the change of personality is too sudden, so he was tortured to the point he learned to kick ass that well? lol |
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Feb 3, 2015 12:06 PM
#29
tsudecimo said: Badly written [u]is still subjective[/u] no matter the criteria or standard, [u]it's just not personal[/u] like like and dislike. You are not making sense. Regardless, no. You can still "objectively" judge a character as badly-written based on the criteria I exemplified on this thread couple of posts ago: You must fit a lot of basic requirements while writing a storyline, and creating solid characters is part of it. Background story, situational depth, characteristics and personality, development, placement... all the writing 101. If it's badly-written it is because they fail at something. Sure there will be bias, but you will have proof. |
Feb 3, 2015 12:09 PM
#30
xbobx said: tsudecimo said: Badly written [u]is still subjective[/u] no matter the criteria or standard, [u]it's just not personal[/u] like like and dislike. You are not making sense. Regardless, no. You can still "objectively" judge a character as badly-written based on the criteria I exemplified on this thread couple of posts ago: You must fit a lot of basic requirements while writing a storyline, and creating solid characters is part of it. Background story, situational depth, characteristics and personality, development, placement... all the writing 101. If it's badly-written it is because they fail at something. Sure there will be bias, but you will have proof. yeah i agree with this. i think if it has basis to call a character 'badly-written' then it's not really going to be subjective. |
Feb 3, 2015 12:09 PM
#31
WAD1992 said: you should ignore all of my postninjastarforcex said: Comic_Sans said: Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality pussy > badass > now suddenly silent emo like sasuke WTH are you talking about??!!! XP they made an entire torture scene episode about this .... lol ... seriously just stick with cross ange :") leave the seinen stuff alone ...lawl your writing style is too much for me, im embarassed by just looking at your writing |
Feb 3, 2015 12:13 PM
#32
ninjastarforcex said: WAD1992 said: you should ignore all of my postninjastarforcex said: Comic_Sans said: more like his personality changed too sudden.Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality pussy > badass > now suddenly silent emo like sasuke WTH are you talking about??!!! XP they made an entire torture scene episode about this .... lol ... seriously just stick with cross ange :") leave the seinen stuff alone ...lawl your writing style is too much for me, im embarassed by just looking at your writing kay :) |
Feb 3, 2015 12:17 PM
#33
badwolf45f said: WAD1992 said: ninjastarforcex said: Comic_Sans said: more like his personality changed too sudden.Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality pussy > badass > now suddenly silent emo like sasuke WTH are you talking about??!!! XP they made an entire torture scene episode about this .... lol ... seriously just stick with cross ange :") leave the seinen stuff alone ...lawl I also think the change of personality is too sudden, so he was tortured to the point he learned to kick ass that well? lol There's two points here - one is specifically about Kaneki in the anime and the other is about him as a character in general. In the anime I would say that, due to pacing and cutting, he does change too quickly and it feels much less realistic than in the manga - or rather much less understandable. In the manga he does change during the torture scene - but he does not 'learn to kick ass': he gives in to his animalistic side. The rest of the series is focused on that and it's made pretty clear that he is not developing well because of it, his fight with Jason was two beings ripping each other apart, not a skillful fight. His improved movement etc. is more down to his reliance on his instincts rather than anything else - all of this was caused by his humanity systematically being broken down by Jason. |
Feb 3, 2015 12:17 PM
#34
xbobx said: tsudecimo said: Badly written [u]is still subjective[/u] no matter the criteria or standard, [u]it's just not personal[/u] like like and dislike. You are not making sense. Regardless, no. You can still "objectively" judge a character as badly-written based on the criteria Meh. he only objective things are the summary, the information about the characters, the cost of productions, the attributes of the characters and other factual things relating to the show. ob·jec·tive (b-jktv) adj. 1. Of or having to do with a material object. 2. Having actual existence or reality. 3. a. Uninfluenced by emotions or personal prejudices b. Based on observable phenomena; presented factually: an objective appraisal. Objectivity is a central philosophical concept, related to reality and truth, which has been variously defined by sources. Generally, objectivity means the state or quality of being true even outside of a subject's individual biases, interpretations, feelings, and imaginings. A proposition is generally considered objectively true (to have objective truth) when its truth conditions are met and are "mind-independent"—that is, existing freely or independently from a mind (from the thoughts, feelings, ideas, etc. of a sentient subject). And I doubt you will read the following but it might make you understand more A) Objective writing B) Objective animation C) Not everything is subjective let's debunk one at a time, but first establish what objective means or people will get confused. Objective means "inherent of the Object". Let's take a object: Water. Water above 0°C on normal pressure is liquid. It's the inherent property of water. Water below 0°C on normal pressure is solid. Everyone can test this, just pick up a piece of ice, it is solid. Water above 100°C is gas. People everywhere can test these things. There are no interpretations or opinions needed on this. These are inherent objective properties of water. Subjective means what a Subject (aka a MIND) interprets into these objective facts. "Icewater is good because you can ice skate on it" Is an subjective interpretation of an objective fact. Yes it is objectivity right that you can ice skate on solid water. but whether that is a good or bad thing is subjective, a mind created the value, or the subjective property of "goodness" for the solid water. Values are by definition subjective. So whatever purpose you see in an objective is always a subjective interpretation. The only way you can make values objective is within a framework, with a predefined purpose. Poison is by definition just poisonous, neither good or bad. Drinking poison therefor has no objective meaning. It will simply kill you. That is an objective fact. A person who wants to live (subjective framework = staying alive) is doing a mistake by drinking deadly poison. Hence, poison is bad. A person who wants to die (subjective framework = being dead) is doing the right thing by drinking deadly poison. Hence, poison is good. Let's apply this method to reviewing. "Objective" good writing. It is true that humanity came up with ways to tell a story and that our brain reacts to certain stimuli better than to others. But let's not forget every brain (mind) is different and has different values. We already see the framework. Mind Values Subjective things. Humans are by definition subjective when they judge. Depending on your culture, upbringing, education and personal experiences your value will be different to that of another person. That means there must be a form of writing that applies to all brains equally, like we can all identify liquid water and solid water. But that's not the case because the writing of a story is not objective. There are parts of it that are objective, but whether our subjective brains are stimulated by them or not can not be guarantied. However long humanity defined the way they tell stories, in the end it is just as subjective as taste in music, or art. Only under a framework we can talk about objectivity. A Hentai without sex is clearly a bad hentai because it defies it's own definition (framework). A show that aims to have no fanservice and yet offers plenty of nipple scenes and boobgrabs fails and thus defied it's own framework and hence is objectively bad. Yet fanservice in it self is neither good or bad. So are stories. A) has plotholes B) offers no clear ending C) is slow These are all objective facts, but how you interpret them is dependent not only on the given framework, but also on your values. Since all these frameworks are equally valid because no one can prove their objective purpose it's a matter of personal taste what you like and what not. Objective Animation Quality One might question if not animation can be stated in facts. No it cannot, for the same reason. There is always a subjective framework. We might see mistakes, or see how one show makes it more fluid, or more correct. But those things are all based on the assumption that there is an objective purpose. Yes under that framework animation quality can be good or bad, and we all use it. But since we gain new information every time our standards change. A kid who only watched pokemon might think this is totally fine, while someone who watched GitS thinks it's the worst shit ever (in animation). Our minds are by definition subjective, thus whatever we judge is only as valid as the information we had at that given time. It is limited and not complete, it relies on preconceived notions on how things ought to be. All artificial rules created by humanity. If reviews are objective then the purpose of Mountains is to climb them, because that's what people do. Just because fact A is true (you can climb mountains) you cannot say "therefor B is the right thing" (mountains are for climbing). tl;dr You cannot derive and IS from an OUGHT. How anime is supposed to be is based on the individual giving the framework in which the medium is judged. Every human being has a different framework thus, every judgement is inherently different => subjective. Things are just. We give them value based on our subjective minds that seek meaning. Things that come from a mind are subjective, because a SUBJECT is projecting them onto objects. Like Values, Meaning, Purpose and Morals. |
Feb 3, 2015 12:22 PM
#35
Kreion said: badwolf45f said: WAD1992 said: ninjastarforcex said: Comic_Sans said: more like his personality changed too sudden.Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality pussy > badass > now suddenly silent emo like sasuke WTH are you talking about??!!! XP they made an entire torture scene episode about this .... lol ... seriously just stick with cross ange :") leave the seinen stuff alone ...lawl I also think the change of personality is too sudden, so he was tortured to the point he learned to kick ass that well? lol There's two points here - one is specifically about Kaneki in the anime and the other is about him as a character in general. In the anime I would say that, due to pacing and cutting, he does change too quickly and it feels much less realistic than in the manga - or rather much less understandable. In the manga he does change during the torture scene - but he does not 'learn to kick ass': he gives in to his animalistic side. The rest of the series is focused on that and it's made pretty clear that he is not developing well because of it, his fight with Jason was two beings ripping each other apart, not a skillful fight. His improved movement etc. is more down to his reliance on his instincts rather than anything else - all of this was caused by his humanity systematically being broken down by Jason. THANK YOU !!! tbh, i had no intention of explaining this to someone who thinks cross ange is the best thing that happens to anime :") (not talking about you @badwolf , i haven't seen your list yet, but i hope this explanation made things a bit clearer about the whole anime/manga dilemma) |
Feb 3, 2015 12:32 PM
#36
tsudecimo said: xbobx said: tsudecimo said: Badly written [u]is still subjective[/u] no matter the criteria or standard, [u]it's just not personal[/u] like like and dislike. You are not making sense. Regardless, no. You can still "objectively" judge a character as badly-written based on the criteria Meh. he only objective things are the summary, the information about the characters, the cost of productions, the attributes of the characters and other factual things relating to the show. ob·jec·tive (b-jktv) adj. 1. Of or having to do with a material object. 2. Having actual existence or reality. 3. a. Uninfluenced by emotions or personal prejudices b. Based on observable phenomena; presented factually: an objective appraisal. Objectivity is a central philosophical concept, related to reality and truth, which has been variously defined by sources. Generally, objectivity means the state or quality of being true even outside of a subject's individual biases, interpretations, feelings, and imaginings. A proposition is generally considered objectively true (to have objective truth) when its truth conditions are met and are "mind-independent"—that is, existing freely or independently from a mind (from the thoughts, feelings, ideas, etc. of a sentient subject). And I doubt you will read the following but it might make you understand more A) Objective writing B) Objective animation C) Not everything is subjective let's debunk one at a time, but first establish what objective means or people will get confused. Objective means "inherent of the Object". Let's take a object: Water. Water above 0°C on normal pressure is liquid. It's the inherent property of water. Water below 0°C on normal pressure is solid. Everyone can test this, just pick up a piece of ice, it is solid. Water above 100°C is gas. People everywhere can test these things. There are no interpretations or opinions needed on this. These are inherent objective properties of water. Subjective means what a Subject (aka a MIND) interprets into these objective facts. "Icewater is good because you can ice skate on it" Is an subjective interpretation of an objective fact. Yes it is objectivity right that you can ice skate on solid water. but whether that is a good or bad thing is subjective, a mind created the value, or the subjective property of "goodness" for the solid water. Values are by definition subjective. So whatever purpose you see in an objective is always a subjective interpretation. The only way you can make values objective is within a framework, with a predefined purpose. Poison is by definition just poisonous, neither good or bad. Drinking poison therefor has no objective meaning. It will simply kill you. That is an objective fact. A person who wants to live (subjective framework = staying alive) is doing a mistake by drinking deadly poison. Hence, poison is bad. A person who wants to die (subjective framework = being dead) is doing the right thing by drinking deadly poison. Hence, poison is good. Let's apply this method to reviewing. "Objective" good writing. It is true that humanity came up with ways to tell a story and that our brain reacts to certain stimuli better than to others. But let's not forget every brain (mind) is different and has different values. We already see the framework. Mind Values Subjective things. Humans are by definition subjective when they judge. Depending on your culture, upbringing, education and personal experiences your value will be different to that of another person. That means there must be a form of writing that applies to all brains equally, like we can all identify liquid water and solid water. But that's not the case because the writing of a story is not objective. There are parts of it that are objective, but whether our subjective brains are stimulated by them or not can not be guarantied. However long humanity defined the way they tell stories, in the end it is just as subjective as taste in music, or art. Only under a framework we can talk about objectivity. A Hentai without sex is clearly a bad hentai because it defies it's own definition (framework). A show that aims to have no fanservice and yet offers plenty of nipple scenes and boobgrabs fails and thus defied it's own framework and hence is objectively bad. Yet fanservice in it self is neither good or bad. So are stories. A) has plotholes B) offers no clear ending C) is slow These are all objective facts, but how you interpret them is dependent not only on the given framework, but also on your values. Since all these frameworks are equally valid because no one can prove their objective purpose it's a matter of personal taste what you like and what not. Objective Animation Quality One might question if not animation can be stated in facts. No it cannot, for the same reason. There is always a subjective framework. We might see mistakes, or see how one show makes it more fluid, or more correct. But those things are all based on the assumption that there is an objective purpose. Yes under that framework animation quality can be good or bad, and we all use it. But since we gain new information every time our standards change. A kid who only watched pokemon might think this is totally fine, while someone who watched GitS thinks it's the worst shit ever (in animation). Our minds are by definition subjective, thus whatever we judge is only as valid as the information we had at that given time. It is limited and not complete, it relies on preconceived notions on how things ought to be. All artificial rules created by humanity. If reviews are objective then the purpose of Mountains is to climb them, because that's what people do. Just because fact A is true (you can climb mountains) you cannot say "therefor B is the right thing" (mountains are for climbing). tl;dr You cannot derive and IS from an OUGHT. How anime is supposed to be is based on the individual giving the framework in which the medium is judged. Every human being has a different framework thus, every judgement is inherently different => subjective. Things are just. We give them value based on our subjective minds that seek meaning. Things that come from a mind are subjective, because a SUBJECT is projecting them onto objects. Like Values, Meaning, Purpose and Morals. Jesus. This copypasta is STILL around? Okay. First things first. Next time you copy someone's work, do remember to credit them: http://origin.myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=606831&show=-40#msg22360509 I've been here longer than you, so thinking I'd fall for this is hilarious. Second, there's no need to link me to the freaking dictionary since, as you can see -I hope you can- I mentioned "objectively" between "quotation marks" because I was certain some turd would come and shove the subjective/objective discussion. Third but not last, let's break down the copypasta you used. What Orsonius is talking about on his text-wall is exactly what I was discussing. Here in this paragraph he says: A) has plotholes B) offers no clear ending C) is slow These are all objective facts, but how you interpret them is dependent not only on the given framework, but also on your values. Since all these frameworks are equally valid because no one can prove their objective purpose it's a matter of personal taste what you like and what not. He's absolutely right. HOWEVER, what I brought on MY post is the first half of his sentence. The objective part. Not me neither him is talking about enjoyment. What we're doing is evaluating character construction. Again: If a character lacks the basic attributes of a proper "character" on the plot and stands just as object and/or plot device. AND IF you can prove it. Then it's no longer an subjective matter whenever or not it's poorly written according to narrative/script construction terms. Go (try) to be an asshole somewhere else. |
Feb 3, 2015 12:34 PM
#37
lol |
Feb 3, 2015 12:35 PM
#38
^ well this is gonna be funn!!! :") there goes the rest of my day XD |
Feb 3, 2015 12:36 PM
#39
chuuzenjis said: lol lol indeed :") oh god imma gonna make some REAL popcorn for this :") |
Feb 3, 2015 12:36 PM
#40
Man, I don't even care. I paste that copy pasta because it's easier to make people understand what I mean (first person to try and argue back after this) The problem with the quotation objective you are using, is that standards are not universal and how to interpret the quality of literary terms isn't either. So a statement can be objective only by your own standards, which is completely pointless and worthless. Meh. |
Feb 3, 2015 12:37 PM
#41
WAD1992 said: chuuzenjis said: lol lol indeed :") oh god imma gonna make some REAL popcorn for this :") count me in |
Feb 3, 2015 12:40 PM
#42
TheConquerer said: A badly written character is a character whose actions conflict with the personality he is given I think. I've always found this definition weird. I know people whose personality is very contradictory with their actions. Would they be badly written in a story? |
Feb 3, 2015 12:41 PM
#43
xbobx said: what the hell is origin.myanimelist? why does that thread have negative pages? O_o is this some twilight zone website?tsudecimo said: xbobx said: tsudecimo said: Badly written [u]is still subjective[/u] no matter the criteria or standard, [u]it's just not personal[/u] like like and dislike. You are not making sense. Regardless, no. You can still "objectively" judge a character as badly-written based on the criteria Meh. he only objective things are the summary, the information about the characters, the cost of productions, the attributes of the characters and other factual things relating to the show. ob·jec·tive (b-jktv) adj. 1. Of or having to do with a material object. 2. Having actual existence or reality. 3. a. Uninfluenced by emotions or personal prejudices b. Based on observable phenomena; presented factually: an objective appraisal. Objectivity is a central philosophical concept, related to reality and truth, which has been variously defined by sources. Generally, objectivity means the state or quality of being true even outside of a subject's individual biases, interpretations, feelings, and imaginings. A proposition is generally considered objectively true (to have objective truth) when its truth conditions are met and are "mind-independent"—that is, existing freely or independently from a mind (from the thoughts, feelings, ideas, etc. of a sentient subject). And I doubt you will read the following but it might make you understand more A) Objective writing B) Objective animation C) Not everything is subjective let's debunk one at a time, but first establish what objective means or people will get confused. Objective means "inherent of the Object". Let's take a object: Water. Water above 0°C on normal pressure is liquid. It's the inherent property of water. Water below 0°C on normal pressure is solid. Everyone can test this, just pick up a piece of ice, it is solid. Water above 100°C is gas. People everywhere can test these things. There are no interpretations or opinions needed on this. These are inherent objective properties of water. Subjective means what a Subject (aka a MIND) interprets into these objective facts. "Icewater is good because you can ice skate on it" Is an subjective interpretation of an objective fact. Yes it is objectivity right that you can ice skate on solid water. but whether that is a good or bad thing is subjective, a mind created the value, or the subjective property of "goodness" for the solid water. Values are by definition subjective. So whatever purpose you see in an objective is always a subjective interpretation. The only way you can make values objective is within a framework, with a predefined purpose. Poison is by definition just poisonous, neither good or bad. Drinking poison therefor has no objective meaning. It will simply kill you. That is an objective fact. A person who wants to live (subjective framework = staying alive) is doing a mistake by drinking deadly poison. Hence, poison is bad. A person who wants to die (subjective framework = being dead) is doing the right thing by drinking deadly poison. Hence, poison is good. Let's apply this method to reviewing. "Objective" good writing. It is true that humanity came up with ways to tell a story and that our brain reacts to certain stimuli better than to others. But let's not forget every brain (mind) is different and has different values. We already see the framework. Mind Values Subjective things. Humans are by definition subjective when they judge. Depending on your culture, upbringing, education and personal experiences your value will be different to that of another person. That means there must be a form of writing that applies to all brains equally, like we can all identify liquid water and solid water. But that's not the case because the writing of a story is not objective. There are parts of it that are objective, but whether our subjective brains are stimulated by them or not can not be guarantied. However long humanity defined the way they tell stories, in the end it is just as subjective as taste in music, or art. Only under a framework we can talk about objectivity. A Hentai without sex is clearly a bad hentai because it defies it's own definition (framework). A show that aims to have no fanservice and yet offers plenty of nipple scenes and boobgrabs fails and thus defied it's own framework and hence is objectively bad. Yet fanservice in it self is neither good or bad. So are stories. A) has plotholes B) offers no clear ending C) is slow These are all objective facts, but how you interpret them is dependent not only on the given framework, but also on your values. Since all these frameworks are equally valid because no one can prove their objective purpose it's a matter of personal taste what you like and what not. Objective Animation Quality One might question if not animation can be stated in facts. No it cannot, for the same reason. There is always a subjective framework. We might see mistakes, or see how one show makes it more fluid, or more correct. But those things are all based on the assumption that there is an objective purpose. Yes under that framework animation quality can be good or bad, and we all use it. But since we gain new information every time our standards change. A kid who only watched pokemon might think this is totally fine, while someone who watched GitS thinks it's the worst shit ever (in animation). Our minds are by definition subjective, thus whatever we judge is only as valid as the information we had at that given time. It is limited and not complete, it relies on preconceived notions on how things ought to be. All artificial rules created by humanity. If reviews are objective then the purpose of Mountains is to climb them, because that's what people do. Just because fact A is true (you can climb mountains) you cannot say "therefor B is the right thing" (mountains are for climbing). tl;dr You cannot derive and IS from an OUGHT. How anime is supposed to be is based on the individual giving the framework in which the medium is judged. Every human being has a different framework thus, every judgement is inherently different => subjective. Things are just. We give them value based on our subjective minds that seek meaning. Things that come from a mind are subjective, because a SUBJECT is projecting them onto objects. Like Values, Meaning, Purpose and Morals. Jesus. This copypasta is STILL around? Okay. First things first. Next time you copy someone's work, do remember to credit them: http://origin.myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=606831&show=-40#msg22360509 |
Feb 3, 2015 12:42 PM
#45
sullynathan said: TheConquerer said: A badly written character is a character whose actions conflict with the personality he is given I think. I've always found this definition weird. I know people whose personality is very contradictory with their actions. Would they be badly written in a story? i think it's more about the fact that those characters usually only suddenly act a certain way because it's convenient for the plot |
Feb 3, 2015 12:45 PM
#46
tsudecimo said: now that you mention it, google brings up both the normal and origin.myanimelistHe probably found the thread through google. |
Feb 3, 2015 12:45 PM
#47
WAD1992 said: Kreion said: badwolf45f said: WAD1992 said: ninjastarforcex said: Comic_Sans said: more like his personality changed too sudden.Animuh Kaneki is a badly written character because he doesn't have any personality pussy > badass > now suddenly silent emo like sasuke WTH are you talking about??!!! XP they made an entire torture scene episode about this .... lol ... seriously just stick with cross ange :") leave the seinen stuff alone ...lawl I also think the change of personality is too sudden, so he was tortured to the point he learned to kick ass that well? lol There's two points here - one is specifically about Kaneki in the anime and the other is about him as a character in general. In the anime I would say that, due to pacing and cutting, he does change too quickly and it feels much less realistic than in the manga - or rather much less understandable. In the manga he does change during the torture scene - but he does not 'learn to kick ass': he gives in to his animalistic side. The rest of the series is focused on that and it's made pretty clear that he is not developing well because of it, his fight with Jason was two beings ripping each other apart, not a skillful fight. His improved movement etc. is more down to his reliance on his instincts rather than anything else - all of this was caused by his humanity systematically being broken down by Jason. THANK YOU !!! tbh, i had no intention of explaining this to someone who thinks cross ange is the best thing that happens to anime :") (not talking about you @badwolf , i haven't seen your list yet, but i hope this explanation made things a bit clearer about the whole anime/manga dilemma) Well, I was talking about the anime not the manga, we all know manga > anime |
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Feb 3, 2015 12:45 PM
#48
who cares about anime kaneki when manga kaneki exists though |
Feb 3, 2015 12:46 PM
#49
chuuzenjis said: I feel like a lot of people call a character 'badly-written' when they simply do not like them. What is your personal criteria when you call a character 'badly-written'? Also please do give examples of such characters and why that particular character is 'badly written'. I thought of this as well. Even if you show a person how much development a character gets, their opinion doesn't change. So Basically I don't like this character so he/she is badly written. Well most of the time that's the case. |
keragammingFeb 3, 2015 12:50 PM
Feb 3, 2015 12:46 PM
#50
tsudecimo said: The problem with the quotation objective you are using, is that standards are not universal and how to interpret the quality of literary terms isn't either. So a statement can be objective only by your own standards, which is completely pointless and worthless. Isnt this the same with what he stated? You guys have me confused here lol |
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