Anime Feature Script - Fragments of a Broken Heart

What do you think of the script?

Jan 4, 2015 12:15 PM

mmkp1990

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Oct 2013

Let me first say a big thank you to all those who have helped me from this site on reviewing a script I've been working on. Their input have been invaluable, I really appreciate it.

I've written a completed draft of my first anime feature screenplay titled "Fragments of a Broken Heart", A tragic drama set in Japan.

Logline: Having survived a devastating tsunami that claimed the lives of their parents, two school age siblings face hardships and unsettling consequences in their own lives.

The drive of this story is the UK based charity Aid for Japan (http://www.aidforjapan.org.uk) that helps orphans from Japan involved in tsunami and earthquake disasters. I have always stated that if this script does make it in the film industry, that I will personally give some of the financial proceeds I make to the charity to support them.

I want to showcase the script to my fellow MAL members to gain feedback on what they think of the script? Feel free to comment on your thoughts and I've provided a poll so I have knowledge statically on what you guys think.

Below are the links to the script and the illustrations of the characters a friend of mine has kindly drawn based on the character descriptions I gave her. The drawings are amazing.

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B32svqt43-9nUThNdVJZV3BGZUk/view?usp=sharing
Character Drawings: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B32svqt43-9nY2ZzUGh2VnI4QlE/view?usp=sharing

Just to note Chiyo is the unnamed woman on left page and near bottom of right page is Akari.

The hope is that if people from MAL like it, then I can show script to producers using this page as proof. If the script gets optioned (anime, animation or live action), then I will send proceeds to Aid for Japan.

Thank you very much for your time and looking forward to your views. If you prefer to send me a private message through MAL on your your views then feel free to do so.

Mayur

mmkp1990Jan 5, 2015 4:15 PM

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