lupadim said: that chapter wasn't so gay Its coming, like a building volcanic eruption but first I have to bring you lot a lot...closer to each other and to do that they need risk they need peril they need sexual aggression! Bring out the whips! |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: lupadim said: that chapter wasn't so gay Its coming, like a building volcanic eruption but first I have to bring you lot a lot...closer to each other and to do that they need risk they need peril they need sexual aggression! Bring out the whips! For some reason I read erection instead of eruption... huhu The focus on Jack and Lime_kun was pretty neat. Wonder who bandits are esp. the small dude in revealing clothing, he totally caught my attention. I would place my bet on either Korrvo or UnoPunto being the little one, but I might be wrong. Patiently waiting for the future lemon fest. |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
| Reading the history it seems JD is gay, not me. SO PLZ MAKE ME REJECT HIM. |
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lupadim said: Tsundere much?Reading the history it seems JD is gay, not me. SO PLZ MAKE ME REJECT HIM. |
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NeoAnkara said: lupadim said: Tsundere much?Reading the history it seems JD is gay, not me. SO PLZ MAKE ME REJECT HIM. Hes defiantly a Tsundere. |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: I AM NOT A TSUNDERE I HATE THEMNeoAnkara said: lupadim said: Tsundere much?Reading the history it seems JD is gay, not me. SO PLZ MAKE ME REJECT HIM. Hes defiantly a Tsundere. But some of them are cool BUT STILL, I AM NOT ONE OF THEM. |
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lupadim said: I AM NOT A TSUNDERE I HATE THEM . Now stamp your feet, blush and say BAKA! You know how to make me happy Lupa <3 |
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| RRRRR At least tsunderes aren't gay |
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Kibura said: spoke in a soft childish voice, it was a warm morning so even he had a blushing face. mm I'm so cute -- I wanna go cosplay as myself now :v |
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| And now we just wait and see whether the bandits are obnoxious, dangerous or both. Also... Kibura_Iburasa said: im such a tease, I will say this in the next few chapters, there will be violations... before romance.... Is this supposed to hint that there's going to be... how do I say it, a "rough" situation? |
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Sapewloth said: The focus on Jack and Lime_kun was pretty neat. Wonder who bandits are esp. the small dude in revealing clothing, he totally caught my attention. I would place my bet on either Korrvo or UnoPunto being the little one, but I might be wrong. Patiently waiting for the future lemon fest. Yeah, that UnoPuntoCinco guy is pretty hot |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: Dear god it's all going downhill so fast... I'll sue! I'll sue I tell ya!Same with Jack and Lime_ its going to take a little bit more. |
Jackrabb1t said: Kibura_Iburasa said: Dear god it's all going downhill so fast... I'll sue! I'll sue I tell ya!Same with Jack and Lime_ its going to take a little bit more. Come on you know you love been in this ;) Jack is such a genuine guy, handsome and honest and soon more a protector. What more can a manly man ask for? and Lime_ is kawaii nobody would blame Jack for falling for that ^_^ I'll admit Jack makes me swoon too ;) Kousoku11 said: Is this supposed to hint that there's going to be... how do I say it, a "rough" situation? I never said what they like to bandit on the side ;) |
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lupadim said: no chapter today, I am happy. I-It's not like I wanted a new chapter to come out or anything! Don't get any wrong ideas! Baka... I'm going to like this thread. |
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lupadim said: no chapter today, I am happy Yeah I know usually I write them the night before and upload in the morning but I was really tired last night but perhaps if I get time I'll write a double chapter to make up for it. |
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| Trying to find time to write up the next few chapters... As a side note what is my avatar? is it my normal one? because on my browser its showing my old one :0 |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: As a side note what is my avatar? http://i1281.photobucket.com/albums/a518/Maor666/imagejpg1_zpsfa1d9f9d.jpg |
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Pralando said: My browser shows this one http://i.imgur.com/l4cM6aQ.jpgKibura_Iburasa said: As a side note what is my avatar? http://i1281.photobucket.com/albums/a518/Maor666/imagejpg1_zpsfa1d9f9d.jpg |
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| Ok so we got three different people on three different browsers...showing three different avatars. Weird... and now mine is showing that one too, wth MAL system. Anyway still working on next chapter, its a difficult one to get right. |
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| Finally an update, check your characters. The crowd had kept their distance, the bandits stood centre square. Everyone knew something was going to go down, never do such users gather without some shitstorm happening or discussion heating up to flame war levels. The tall one stood in the middle, leaping up to the fountains side to get a higher elevation. He was clad in a rather revealing outfit, it looked military what was actually there, which wasn't much. "Alright so you know why we are here, we are on a mission of mercy. We are here to take away some trouble makers from this overcrowded casual section and take them away for a while" "Hey Heredity do we even know what they look like?" grumbled the one with the smiley symbol on their breast pocket "We don't need to, Korrvo" He nodded to him "Drawn them out for us will you, I'm already bored" "Quicker we get them, quicker I can have some fun too" Replied Korrvo licking his lips with greed. The shorter one was sat, dipping their toe into the cold water "and what am I supposed to be doing" "watching our backs, don't want the attention of any mods now" UnoPuntoCinco sighed, pulling a frowned face "We paid them off didn't we, we have our 15 minutes" he replied. " Never trust a mod" He replied, nodding to the blacksmiths, he had noticed Jack leaving his house and walking slowly towards the town square. "On it!" UnoPuntoCinco yelled, leaping up with inhuman speed, he had already cleared the crowds and with a low knee had dropped Jack to the floor before he could even figure out what had happened, he was grabbed from behind and held in place. "What the fuck is this all about?!" Jack yelled through gripped teeth as an arm hung around his neck. "yum yum" UnoPuntoCinco spoke softly, licking the side of Jacks neck "This one, I want this one for my own" "Maybe, it would be fun to watch" Heredity quipped as he sat crossed legs on the fountain as if watching a play. Meanwhile in the blacksmiths house Lime_ was trying to peer out the window and see what was happening, more importantly where was Jack? he began to slowly creep out the house He was small so he crawled along the ground, hoping to make it past the crowds and get into a good vantage spot to see what was happening. Unaware somebody had already seen him, a shadow from behind grinning with menace and venom "Swell...aren't you just adorable." Korrvo was upon him before he had turned, gripping his face in his hands, he pulled up Lime_ holding his face how an aggressive lover would "I like adorable things" Lime_ struggled to escape, this was not his idea of a good Yaoi fiction. "got another one!" Yelled Korrvo pushing Lime_ out into the open and down onto his face next to Jack "Hey leave him alone, whatever it is you want you leave him alone!" he yelled angry, staring down the two before him "Do you love him?" replied Heredity bringing his face directly in front of his. This took Jack by surprise "what no! why the hell would I ever long a guy?! especially not this one!" he turned to look at Lime_, his face was not easily disguising the look of hurt he felt in his chest after hearing that "Hey, I didn't mean it like that I-" Jack tried to say but Lime_ wasn't listening anymore. "We got two more gentlemen!" Heredity stood up from the fountain, stretching his long slender legs "Two more!" laughed Korrvo, "I'm sure we can sniff out a few lost lambs" "Come out, come out where ever you are. We are here to take you into custody" |
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| Someone better pick up that phone, 'cause I freaking called it ! One of the bandits was bound to be either Korrvo or UnoPunto, and we got the two of 'em. We didn't see much of those three yet, but compared with their respective users, their characters seem pretty spot on to me. |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
NarTaco said: I hate to admit it but I'm interested in seeing what happens next. YAY! Sapewloth said: Someone better pick up that phone, 'cause I freaking called it ! One of the bandits was bound to be either Korrvo or UnoPunto, and we got the two of 'em. We didn't see much of those three yet, but compared with their respective users, their characters seem pretty spot on to me. Glad you like it :) |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: Relatable."Quicker we get them, quicker I can have some fun too" Replied Korrvo licking his lips with greed. *will comment further after I'm done with my game* Tsundere Jack is Tsundere. 10 bucks Lime falls for me before Jack has time to confess. |
KorrvoApr 4, 2014 9:44 AM
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
Korrvo said: Tsundere Jack is Tsundere. 10 bucks Lime falls for me before Jack has time to confess. Anything is possible, perhaps Jack hurt his feeling enough to push him into the arms of another... Ive updated the first page with a character list so people can see if you are currently in the story. |
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| Part 6 is up and the stakes are raised. Why does it keep getting darker...Gotta try to lighten the story. "Who are they?" JD whispered sat down below the window. "I'm not sure, looks like some hired thugs" Lupa replied he was standing to the side of the window peering out a crack in the curtains. "Looks like they are distracted at the moment, we can sneak out the back and out of casual. Perhaps make it as far as Forum games, they will never find us in there. Place is a mess" he left the window and began packing up their gear. JD slinked out from the ground and made his way to Lupa's side "We can't just run away and let them walk on over this town, they have hostages" "Developing a conscious? could have used that back then huh" Lupa said, still packing not looking up "That's not fair and you know it" JD replied "All I do know is that this may be our only chance to get out of here" he turned grabbing JD by the arm "You willing to get perma'd or worse for some random users?" he was serious and cold. JD just returned his stare... Outside the bandits had grown impatient, Korrvo was tapping his foot with increased speed. Heredity was eyeing up Jack like a hungry dog, he was returning an angry stare but would glance over to Lime_ now and again, who was still just looking at the floor. Jack could feel that he has said something wrong because he could feel the pain of causing him hurt. Funny that just the night before he didn't even know this person now here he was risking his neck for him. "I'm done waiting" Stepping up the tall Heredity began to walk towards the two by was quickly stopped by a flying bottle to the face, he was a tough cookie because it only left a small scratch on his forehead. He had a crazed look in his eyes "What the fuck was that supposed to be!" he yelled giving the random user a really fucked up stare "you wanna play little man" he walked over pushing the few users before him trying lightly to guard the one behind away. Grabbing this user by the neck Heredity pushed him up against the wall. "gotta a name boy?" Heredity said through his teeth, the user a youngish male squirmed in his grip "You have no right to mess with these people, leave them alone" he said through choked voice "I said your name not your opinions" The user looked Heredity in the eyes "Kousoku11" he replied more clearly as Heredity released his grip letting him drop to the ground "Here" crouching down to his side "Let me return the favour" Heredity pulled his finger along the side of Kousoku's face, turning it so the nail began to cut into the skin causing a little cut "Guess we have something in common now" Heredity whispered to him. He stood up, turning back to Korrvo and UnoPuntoCinco who both looked a little worried "They will come to us, even if we have to mess with the new play things to do it, take the small one!" he yelled, giving a look to the crowd as a don't even try to fuck with us, making them all take a step back. Korrvo piped up first "I get the small one remember" he quickly made his way over to Lime_ who peered up, korrvo had crouched to his level, holding his face in his delicate hands, slowly drawing it across his chin "I think I've fallen for you...Lime_" this surprised him, Jack piped up "you know him?!" "No! I don't I've never seen these people before" Lime_ responded with a panicked voice "he is right you know, we have never met before" he reached down slowly moving his cold hand down from Limes neck, slowly descending Lime_ began to uncontrollably blush as his body reacted to the cold touch, slowly Korrvo with a most wicked smile reached further down his stomach "I will love you like you have never known" Korrvo managed with a trembled voice. suddenly whilst his hand was cutting through the shirt buttons opening Limes chest up to the world to see Korrvo felt a large object plough into his side, knocking him to the floor. It was Jack who had managed to pull himself to his feet, he looked pissed "Jack...." Lime said, with tears in his eyes "You think you can fuck with anyone you want, you think I'm going to sit and watch this. You're not going to touch him ever again you get me fucker!" he yelled at him kicking out his foot and planting it into Korrvo's face, knocking him to his side. UnoPuntoCinco was about to jump up and stop him when he too was stopped by Heredity with a waved hand, he wanted to watch it unfold. "You think you can hurt me psh!" Korrvo spat, getting up onto his feet, Jack stood trying to be ready for a counter even with his hands tied behind his back but with a swift forward kick from Korrvo he was on his back unable to get up, like a turtle stranded. He let out a huff as Korrvo landed on his lap, both legs to either side as if riding him. "Then I'll have you" he half laughed, letting out a sigh of excitement and licking the side of Jacks face "What how about no you fucking lunatic! I-" he paused, looking back over at Lime_ he was covering himself best he could but his chest was still showing through the damaged shirt he wore and he had the widest eyes he had ever seen, suddenly it didn't matter. The only thing that mattered was keeping Lime_ safe but even Jack didn't want to admit that deep down the idea of someone else not himself getting to touch him like that made him angry, deep down he felt something that he had to make sure he never admitted to himself. "Yeah..." Jack said returning his focused gaze to Korrvo "You can have me instead." |
SpooksApr 4, 2014 3:46 PM
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| Started the fight, most likely on the spur of the moment? Check. Preferably with a sucker punch? Check. Opponent can fight back so you immediately lost? Check. All in all, that's a surprisingly accurate description on how most of my fights have gone down. Also: Aww, Jack finally realized his feelings towards Lime_ (although I'm not sure if it was being implied at the second to last sentence that he himself would like to go... "rough" on him. Not essentially to the same extend, but in some way regardless) Now we just gotta hope that he stalled them long enough for the protagonists to arrive. Otherwise this might turn into something that Jack can't simply walk out of unharmed. I'd imagine even the "walk" -part might be a challenge in and of itself. Am I being subtle enough? |
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Kousoku11 said: Also: Aww, Jack finally realized his feelings towards Lime_ (although I'm not sure if it was being implied at the second to last sentence that he himself would like to go... "rough" on him. Not essentially to the same extend, but in some way regardless) I think even though he is telling himself he only wants to protect him I think really really deep down a part of him is actually jealous of Korrvo for getting to be so intimate with Lime_ and thats probably part of the reason hes actually double pissed off because not only did Korrvo try to violate him but he did something Jack would never let himself do even though a part of him really wants to. Even though his manly side would never let him admit it. I'm also thinking of shipping you with Heredity, hes rather dominant and you seem like a good nice guy he would probably go for the good of heart wannabe hero types. |
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| It's here!!!! My Hero said: You're not going to touch him ever again you get me! My Hero said: "Yeah..." Jack said returning his focused gaze to Korrvo "You can have me instead." /Swoon |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: I think even though he is telling himself he only wants to protect him I think really really deep down a part of him is actually jealous of Korrvo for getting to be so intimate with Lime_ and thats probably part of the reason hes actually double pissed off because not only did Korrvo try to violate him but he did something Jack would never let himself do even though a part of him really wants to. Even though his manly side would never let him admit it. Or that. Which would be the less disturbing interpretation out of the two. Kibura_Iburasa said: I'm also thinking of shipping you with Heredity, hes rather dominant and you seem like a good nice guy he would probably go for the good of heart wannabe hero types. Interesting choice, gotta admit that. Especially so considering how their first meeting went... |
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Kousoku11 said: Or that. Which would be the less disturbing interpretation out of the two. What can I say I love romance, I still smile like an idiot and squee when characters in anime are having a moment. Two guys have their faces close in a scene *me sitting forward, smiling wildly, eyes wide" "No kiss!" Something interrupts the moment, usually a bossy female character *flips table* |
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| I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist. Talk about aggressive love thou. |
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
Korrvo said: I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist. Talk about aggressive love thou. Yes your character ended up basically writing himself, is he...too aggressive? I kinda like him, whilst the others are threats in their own rights I felt your character is more the wild cat let off a leash a much more immediate threat to the characters. |
SpooksApr 4, 2014 5:01 PM
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Kibura_Iburasa said: I wouldn't say too aggressiveKorrvo said: I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist. Talk about aggressive love thou. Yes your character ended up writing himself apparently, is he...too aggressive? I like him. I always pictured my rapist self as someone who is easily love struck at first sight, and then can't help his impulses for his prey victims lovers. Basically I'm French as fuck. Does that help? EDIT: A better explanation would be someone that is aggressive, yet caring for the people he has his eyes on, but is helpless to his impulses. |
KorrvoApr 4, 2014 5:06 PM
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
Korrvo said: Basically I'm French as fuck. Does that help? EDIT: A better explanation would be someone that is aggressive, yet caring, but is helpless to his impulses. haha XD also thats good, good that exactly where im taking the character anyway, glad to see we are on the same page. Just wait till you get Jack back to your room, funny enough its all decorated in french art nouveau and you offer him tea. |
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| Coffee > Tea dammit |
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
Korrvo said: Coffee > Tea dammit Nope -___- gotta be tea. "Tea? I hope you like it, it took me quite a while to find just the right ble-" "your fucking insane Korrvo" replies Jack tied to the chair Suddenly the whole tea set was casually flung out the open window, without missing a beat Korrvo turns to his Jack "You're right, its far too late for tea isn't it. So where were we my darling?" ".....actually I could go for a cup." Jack gulped. ;) |
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| LOL That scene in a nutshell And then I realize I've ran out of tea and I pull out the coffee. Right? Riiiiiiiight? |
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
| can i be in the story as a trap cant think of anything else though |
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Korrvo said: I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist. Korrvo said: Basically I'm French as fuck. LOOL So that really is how the world sees our men, huh ? Seems legit x). Anyway, this one chapter is so choke-full of fan-art material (approx. 70% of which including Korrvo, lol), I can't even begin to count. I'll definitely have to move my lazy bum and do something nice before we get to things get 'serious'. Keep up the good work, Kibura. |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
| sorry for the delays Ive not quit its just trying to find the time to write up the next few chapters. |
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Kousoku11 said: Well-made story comes before anything else. I'm a patient person. |
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| I like it, update now! |
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beavis2323 said: can i be in the story as a trap cant think of anything else though |
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