Shadowt5 said: 1. Chapter: The Sudden "Marriage"???
I shouted suddenly: "Which idiot left out that chair at..."
"Wait, where am I? That’s not the house I was in."
"Did I drink too much and walk out in the garden..."
"It’s really not a place I remember"
Those thoughts immediately ran through my head, as soon as I was able to stand up in the middle of nowhere.
"Let’s check it: I still have all of my parts, nothing hurts or missing."
"Well, it looks like I ended up somewhere I don’t know."
I wanted to pull out my mobile, to call someone and asking about what happened, I had to notice, there is nothing in my pocket.
"Looks like someone stole it from me, but in that case, why did he carried me here?"
"I felt I should not have to go to that party, 1st I almost fell at home, as I tried to dress up fast and then some idiot there started to fight, of course next to me, and I got a hit on my head..." "Wait, if I got hit, why isn't it hurt? I don’t think that happened to long ago"
As I touched my head, there was nothing there, not even a scratch.
"Something really must have happened, something unusual. Anyway those trees over there are look not familiar"
"I can think only 2 options: 1. I was carried to another continent. No way that happened, in that case I would be dead, because it would mean way too much time without drink and food, and injuries like that cant heal that fast."
"The other option is really more unbelievable: Being teleported to another world."
Without thinking more, I started to walk around, looking around.
"I have to find someone, I really have to, even if he or she is dangerous, I have to make contact with someone and getting some information about this place."
"No, no, I have to be careful, I can’t be killed immediately, and living without any knowledge about this place is still better than being on the wrong end of a knife."
"I need something to eat and drink, no matter which comes first."
I headed first to that little hill, and hoped I can look around from there and maybe find a town, a city, or something where people live.
"Hmmm, that hill looks like steps, even if its small, I can rest halfway."
I reached the top almost when I heard a shout "WATCH OUT!!!", I didn’t have any time, something hit me and rolled back with me until halfway.
"Nice, I’m in a new world and already fell twice and now something is on me, probably someone is on me."
I opened my eyes and I was surprised. A girl is sitting on me, a cute one, but something is definitely strange, big webbed hands and feet and scales on her legs, almost up to her hips and the same on her arms with something wing like parts and her ears are also webbed and she has a long tail.
I see she is almost as surprised as me, she breaks that awkward silence: "Are you a human?"
While I still tried to figure out what she is, almost forgot to answer: "Yes, I am. And you? What are you?"
She answered with a proud smile on her face: "I’m a Sahuagin, the best hunter in the waters."
"But we are definitely on land, not in water. But anyway, could you get off me? It starts to be uncomfortable."
She stood up and pulled me up, she was really careful, didn’t even scratch me with her little claws.
"I’m so sorry falling on you, I just heard someone is going up and I became excited to meet with someone and as I ran, I tripped on something."
"Well, I’m alive so it’s okay. What’s your name? I’m Tibor."
"I’m Seira."
I just noticed she is smiling since she pulled me up.
"You really have a cute smile."
"T-t-thanks."
"What are you doing here on land?"
"I wanted to discover the world, meet other species, going on adventures. Do you want to come with me?"
She asked that without thinking. "Do you trust me that much already to invite me?"
"You looks like a nice person, so why not."
"I accept your invitation, such a nice start for my arrive"
She didn’t care with the second part of my answer and suddenly asked: "What are those clothes? Those look weird to me."
As she asked that, I pointed it out: "You wear a swimsuit."
"It’s the normal cloth for a Sahuagin."
"You should fix it up there, I think I saw a bit more."
"Ooops, now you have to marry me." Told that to me, with the possibly biggest smile.
I froze, I didn’t know what to answer but she broke the silence: "Sorry, I’m just joking. Don’t worry about that, we, the Sahuagins used to see each other naked many times."
"If you want you can touch it." She winked and grabbed my hand and pulled to her chest.
She is really strong, I don’t have a chance to pull my hand away.
"You really don’t have shame."
"As I said, it’s normal between Sahuagins."
"But I’m human."
"From now it’s normal between humans and Sahuagins"
Finally she let my hand to pull away.
"Can we go?"
"Yes, but 1st let me grab my spear"
Right after she picked it up, we started to move, ready for exploring this world.
Is Tribor your real name or made up? Just wondering, since some people can recognize people by how they spell it, type/talk and etc? Also The grammar is almost perfect, with at least one word. However it is readable, and I enjoyed your color coding, and it is very helpful for the reading to keep track of the characters. Keep up the good work and I will continue reading it :D |