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May 14, 2016 1:08 PM
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I fixed it i think
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It still doesn't tell me anything important about the ability. Perhaps tell me up to what she can regenerate. And the ability being random is a bit...not good. Since you could conveniently make it activate.
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Alright. Much better now. Sorry for the trouble.
May 14, 2016 1:42 PM
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okay what about now?
May 14, 2016 1:46 PM

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The time should be measured in number of posts, not minutes. Other than that, everything else looks fine.
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Name: Ripley Rose (Disowned)
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Power: Lycanthropy
Power Explanation:
Ripley’s affliction can be divided into three distinct stages; which will be discussed below:

Stage 1
Statistics
Intelligence: 6
Strength: 4
Speed: 7
Endurance: 3
Skill: 9
Ripley’s first stage is her human form. While in this form she has full control over her senses, superior intelligence and deadly fighting abilities, represented by skill in the statistics. As a notorious big game hunter, Ripley is proficient in the areas of tracking, marksmanship and close quarter combat. With her weapons of choice being a Springfield bolt action sniper rifle and a hunting knife, Ripley is effective in both close and ranged combat, though she is susceptible at medium range in addition to her speed, endurance and strength being relatively low in comparison to her other stages.

Stage 2
Statistics
Intelligence: 6
Strength: 6
Speed: 10
Endurance: 5
Skill: 4
Unlike her third stage, Ripley can freely change into the second stage of lycanthropy. Here, Ripley has become a wolf, albeit a larger than your average one. While losing the ability to use weapons, thus bringing her fighting capabilities down in addition to intelligence, Ripley gains a boost to strength and an immense increase in speed. She still retains her sanity in this form and cannot speak, she can understand the human tongue, two traits absent in the stage to come.

Stage 3
Statistics
Intelligence: 0
Strength: 10
Speed: 6
Endurance: 8
Skill: 0
Stage three is your stereotypical werewolf. After Ripley becomes insatiably angry and subsequently loses control of her body and can’t suppress her inner demon, she will lose all sense of intelligence and become a monster with only one goal: feed. This stage does not distinguish between friend or foe, nor does it comprehend morality. With immense strength, speed and endurance, stage three becomes a danger to all around her. The only ways to bring Ripley out of this stage is first, she endures enough pain to become too weak to maintain the form and, second, if her music box is played, which, upon hearing it, will calm her down enough for her to regain control over her body.


Weapon:




Club: Ballet club
Rank: F
Pic:
Stage 1

Stage 2

Stage 3


Personality:
Ripley is generally a calm, reserved and level headed tomboy. An avid reader of literature, she usually has a pensiveness to her look, an expression rarely found in those that dedicate their lives to the hunting of malicious supernatural game. More in tune with her profession, there is also an edginess to her glint; a severity even. She has hunted many, many monsters and the battle follow her on her body, as she is constantly plagued with scrapes, scars and scratches. These war wounds are one of the main reasons she’s still a frigid, meaning a girl who still has never had her first kiss. Despite her manly, tomboyish persona, this fact bothers her a lot more than she will admit because while she isn’t exactly a conventional woman, she is still a woman. She desires the loving embrace of a partner’s body just as much as everyone else, possibly even more so given her traumatic life, but it is sadly a fact she will never admit, nor a feeling she will never experience. For if there is one thing her family thought her, it was that the job comes first. Always.

This, however, is but one side of Ripley. The other side is much more… exotic. Above all else, Ripley has one defining, cardinal trait. And that is her abnormally intense masochism. While normally she never exhibits this part of her, one single reference to her being dominated, owned, and treated like a possession is enough to set her off. She can also just as easily be set off by having pain inflicted upon her, especially if that pain is strangulation or spanking. Once set off, Ripley will lose all sense of control over herself and beg her master or mistress, the person that set them off, to continue beating, spanking degrading or whatever they were doing to her. While incredibly ashamed of her fetish, the sexual arousal she derives from it is simply too intense for her to resist.

Bio:
Before all else, including her own individuality, Ripley is a Rose. The Rose family are an old one. For centuries the greatest hunters of monsters came from this family and they have earned their place as the most respectable hunters in the world. The name Rose instils as much fear in the creatures of the night as it does hope in those that hunt them.

Despite the immense pressure placed upon her, Ripley is proud to be a Rose and does beyond what is expected of her to uphold the family name. Or rather, did. After a lycan hunt gone horribly, horribly wrong, Ripley and the group of hunters she was working with founds themselves outnumbered four werewolves to every hunter. This was a grim fate to be subjected to as it would usually take a group of five professional hunters to take down even a single one of the beasts.

Ripley, unlike the rest of the hunters survived the encounter. After killing three of them herself as her comrades fell one by one around her, Ripley soon found herself to be the last one alive. She didn’t have long to process this information however as she soon found a lycan’s mouth clenched around her neck. Teeth penetrated her neck, but not enough to kill. It was more the asphyxiation that was the real problem with this. Though, it soon stopped becoming a problem for her and instead became something much more… sexual. This was the moment Ripley knew she was a masochist. She stopped trying to force its maw off her with her hands immediately after this discovery and instead did something more… attune to her new taste with her hands. It was something about how at mercy to the beast she was that set her off. She was helpless to her master and she loved every second of it, regardless of the fact that she was dying.

However, sensing her complete submission, the lycan, which she later found out to be an alpha which are capable of cognitive thought, released her. He had accepted her as a member of his pack, and she gladly accepted. After all, she was now one of them. She spent her entirety of the next few months among them, embracing her life as a werewolf, slowly losing her humanity. But it was not to last. Caught off guard by dozens of hunters seeking to avenge their fallen comrades, Ripley was captured and sent to her home long forgotten. Her new family hadn’t been so lucky…

Appalled at what she had become, Ripley’s real family disowned and banished her, promising that they would kill her but as in accordance with the Rose family tradition. This dictated that any captive of the family was to be released into the wild and hunted by the Rose family after a two day head start. Long story short, this is how she came to Mirai The academy was out of the Rose family’s jurisdiction, and, under the protection of the school, she was safe to continue living on her life.

Ripley’s music box tune and ‘good’ theme:

Ripley’s lycanthrope and ‘bad’ theme:
Amun-RaMay 15, 2016 11:36 AM
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Character Description


Right, first you actually need to write a bio.

Secondly the stack requirements are too low. The last one needs to be 8, and have the radius cut to 14. Lighting something she touches on fire needs to be at least three, and not work on other people naturally. The sword we're looking at around six stacks and 3 for the whip. And everything needs to be for both yours and their turn. With your character as it stands you have an unlimited amount of stacks considering you can light anything on fire for only one stack.
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@Lynchlocked: what is the mean stat for a mean human? If we say it's about 6 in each we should be fine here.
eyup a 10 in a stat doesn't mean she's twice as, idk, say strong or whatever? Six seems about right

Alright, approved.
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Alright. Seems to be in order for me. And thanks. xD
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Name: Edori Rokkupikka

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Power: The ability to disable any lock.

Weapon: A huge collection of throwing knives

Rank: F(i'm slightly confused as to why we have to put it here. since we all start at f, we can only put f here so there's really no need to put it here)

Club: Swimming

Pic: http://api.ning.com/files/D9GBAJNTQh9tC0ZqMnWXoacpflk5hAHMyDWxrD88mG5sNDS0fp4j6ST8D0FWnFxiUZ66OU8IsCJamxNJ2SYHl8cE6H1Y9g9J/blondehairanimesanime30920322500632_large.jpg

Personality: Sarcatic, cool, confident

Bio: Edori grew up an orphan. She escaped a total of 16 orphanages using her power before she finally began living on the streets. This is when she started using her power to steal. She would mainly steal food and occasionally clothing, although at times she would steal from people she really hated. Then one day her power was discovered and she was taken to Mirai High.
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Seems fine to me powerwise, maybe you might want to add a bit more to her personality like stuff she likes dislikes or just about anything that describes her. Besides that it's all good
About the rank F thing it's just to make sure people will know they are the lowest rank now but they can increase.
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Name: Yuki Shimizu
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Power: Ice Fox
Power Explanation: He has an ice aura that can be used slow opponent's and freeze objects
1:Passive ability Icicle skates: Once he uses frozen fantasy he creates ice skates on his feat so he can move around without slipping.
2:Frozen Fantasy:Freezing everything 5 feet around him. He has to wait 10 posts before using it again.
3:Frost Armor: Is unable to shield against attacks but over time but very slowly will heal user's and allies wounds can only be on one person at a time. Weaknesses: weak to fire and ranged attacks.
Weapon: He has a Katana named Kitsukori ~ Ice Fox
Rank: F
Club: Literature club
Pic: Yuki is a fox spirit with one tail. He has two blue eyes [Unlike the picture] and white hair.He is short and often said to look like a kid.

Personality: Yuki Is a cute Dandere who is very kind and caring. He is kinda clumsy and often gets his fur and hair messed up from running into bushes and trees.
Bio: Yuki was born in Japan in the mountain regions near Mt Fuji. He lived with his parents on a hidden farm in the icy regions of the mountains. He would often be found reading when not helping with his family's farm or he would be running threw the snow. At the age of 11 he crafted his own katana with help from his father and he named it Kitsukori. Once he turned 12 Yuki's parents noticed a cloud of snow flurries started to gather around him and would follow him around and he later learned to use it to defend him self against animals in the woods. Then at the age of 14 his parents were warned that fox spirits were being hunted down illegally in forests nearby so they sent Yuki to Mirai High to learn to control his powers and grow strong enough to protect against hunters.
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Sorry about the delay x.x
Work's been hectic
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Name: Stella
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Power: Navigator
Power Explanation: Stella can project a holographic map of the solar system in a ring around her (see pic). She can enhance the hologram to view a map of any area within the known universe.
The map has a few useful applications:
1. It acts as a compass
2. It has a scale to measure large distances (accurate to the nearest 10 km)
3. It can plan a detailed path to get from point A to point B
4. The map is luminous, so it radiated dim light
5. It can track people's location**

**In order to put a trace on someone, they must first give verbal consent to having their location tracked, and Stella must know their name (first, last, middle, nickname, etc…).

The hologram is powered by a crystalline protrusion on her chest. If a powerful strike is delivered to this source, the map becomes disabled for 5 posts, and Stella is weakened significantly (although she is by no means strong to begin with).

Weapon: N/A
Rank: F
Club: Astronomy club
Pic:

(She doesn't have wings)
Stella has a few physical traits that distinguish her from humans:

Her skin is white-gray, akin to the colour of stone, and occasionally sparkles with glints of metal if light hits it at the right angle.

Crystals protrude from her chest, and where nails would normally be found (fingers/toes).

Her eyes are identical to pear cut sapphires, lacking both pupil and iris

Personality:

Stella possess a very straightforward mindset, yet her behaviour may come off as unprecedented or unpredictable due to conflicts in her past that fractured her cognitive plateau leaving it rigid and brittle. From the bottom of her heart, Stella bears no ill will, even to those who have wronged her, and would sooner harbour all the sins and guilt of all those around her than see someone brought to tears. Of course, her altruism is just as quick to land her in trouble because selfish people tend to take advantage of her naivety. Whether Stella is blind to this exploitation, or if she consciously bears through it, becomes an irrelevant detail. Even when others force their work and expectations upon Stella, she would never speak out when they take credit for her efforts. In fact, she will rarely ever claim her duly earned credit, but that is more a display of her humbleness and shyness than her other traits. It is this same shyness that discourages Stella from disclosing her thoughts to others, making her come off as recluse. Thoughts are not all she holds close, however, as Stella tends to reserve her feelings too in order to maintain her sensitivity through internalisation. As much as she values social bonds, she also appreciates privacy. On the topic of company, it is worth noting that Stella is an introvert, but not in a traditional sense. To her, there is no greater joy than being supportive and generous, albeit quietly. When words fail her, and they often do, Stella is more likely to resort to actions, expressing herself and covering her insecurity through hard work. Once she dedicates herself to a person or an idea, she is quick to become emotionally invested it, and will prove to be a reliable asset, constantly exceeding that which is expected of her. Her dedication, however, can sometimes be a double-edged sword when she overloads herself with more work than she could ever hope to manage. Furthermore, Stella's loyalty can cause her to neglect her own needs, as she prioritizes those of others first. Stella is lucky enough to boast the practical sense to compliment her diligence. She has the patience to perform simple, mundane tasks if that is what's required, and she has presence of mind to back down when a venture is outside of her capabilities. Although Stella doesn't want anything in return for her subtle enthusiasm, she will be put off swiftly if she is not met with positive feedback.

Stella's fascinations include but are not limited to: astrology, mineralogy, and travel/sightseeing. She has difficulty kicking old habits, including speech patterns and terminology she picked up over the years. Her dream is to travel the entire universe, and see firsthand the multitudinous worlds that exist within the stars, but she would appreciate having someone to travel with, despite her relatively non-social attitude.

Bio:

Somewhere in the cosmos exists a relatively small, rocky planet, not interesting enough to be granted a proper name, that began to develop sentient life, similar to that seen on earth, for the most part. Pebbles grew and shifted into geodes. Eventually the minerals began to resemble humanoid figures, albeit with a few defining features that distinguish them from Earthlings. This strange evolutionary anomaly was largely due to the influence of humans on the planet, as they often came to mine for rare minerals that sold well throughout the universe. They would arrive on their fancy spaceships and decimate the lonely landscape with monstrous machines and other terrible technologies. Since the native inhabitants of that planet were so mineral minimal, there was nothing keeping the miners from destroying the small planet altogether.

In the midst of the ruination Stella, a nameless pebble at the time, was whisked away from her homeworld aboard a human vessel called the Bravais. The modest crew had no interest in mundane stones, which Stella appeared to be, she was simply caught up in a load of valuable ore due to unfortunate fate. It didn’t take long for Stalla to begin growing, and crystals started sprouting on her surface which caught the eye of a crewmember. Instead of being sold, she was kept aboard the ship, like some sort of pet...rock...doomed to the confines of the metal spacecraft as it drifted into the endless expanse. For Stella, it was not at all a misfortune however. The Bravais was the only home she remembered, since it was there she formed eyes, ears, a mouth, and a humanoid body, much to the fascination of the crew. Not knowing what to do, they tentatively cared for her with food, water, an occasional polish, but due to her alien origins, they never treated her like a person. In the following years, Stella grew out of infancy, and learned skills such as imitating human language, not that she made much use of it. Possibly more unusual was her knack for cartography, although, when one considers radiometric dating, it doesn’t seem all that odd for a mineral based life-form to be skilled at storing data. This knack earned her the title “Navigator”, which was the first name she was given, and her talent ended up being a boon to the ship’s crew as she assisted them in their adventures.

Everything was harmonious for a time until the true nature of her human companions became apparent. Instead of caring for Stella, they started using her as nothing more than a tool. “Navigator, do this.”, “Navigator, do that.”, they commanded. Not knowing any better she followed the orders timidly at first, but as time progressed her patience waned and her discomfort grew. In defiance she stopped listening to their selfish words and instead shut off her services, much to the crew’s dismay. Stella hoped they would rescind their abusive behaviour, being the innocent minded girl that she was, however all she accomplished was angering them. In order to condition Stella from disobeying, her companions performed despicable acts of violence and worse, scarring her body and mind. She swiftly abandoned her noncompliance resuming her role as Navigator, but she was never quite the same, even so, Stella never had the capacity to hate her assailants.

Time never healed her wounds, but it did bring about change of sorts. The crew she travelled with grew old, bringing an end to their ambitious journey. There comes a time when people must settle down, build a proper family and whatnot. They returned to their homeworld of Earth, bringing Stella along but unlike them she had nowhere to return to. She remained aboard the Bravais, her home of 13 years, even after it was sold to a traveling merchant. The merchant, a quirky man with a youthful appearance, didn’t seem at all surprised to find a pale girl wandering the ship. Instead, he simply asked why she stayed on the empty vessel. Stella didn’t reply. He then asked if she would travel with him, insisting that he would be lonely without a companion. Once again she remained silent, but complied by following the man naively under the impression that he needed her support. Traveling was Stella’s calling after all. It almost pained her to remain in one place for too long.

The merchant was indeed a curious person, she soon learned. For starters, he piloted a brilliant mechanical contraption the likes of which Stella had never imagined possible; apparently it was a kite powered by wind, which Stella had her suspicions about. Nevertheless it was a fascinating vehicle that Stella never bored of riding. Another questionable trait was his profession. As a merchant, he rode to towns, big and small, selling odd trinkets of unknown origins, yet whenever they entered a settlement, the man would don a mask depicting some sort of animal. None of his customers asked about it, and Stella felt that he wouldn’t provide a truthful answer if questioned. That wasn’t all that she found strange however. Despite the man’s assertion that he required company, he never asked anything of Stella, even though he was aware of her talents. In fact, there were many instances where Stella had to guide him on her own volition, since he himself wouldn’t ask for directions even when hopelessly lost – a frequent occurrence. It wasn’t that he was a bad companion though. The man loved telling stories of places he had been, and of myths, and he even taught her about the shapes in the stars which she found particularly fascinating. Their conversations were just about always one-way, with the man doing all the talking while Stella remained quiet and listened. She would go days, and sometimes weeks without uttering a word. Once, Stella found her voice long enough to ask for the man’s name, but he simply turned the question around and asked for hers. At the time, she went by the name Navigator, so that’s what she told him, but the man didn’t like it, and instead called her Stella which apparently meant “star” in some human tongue. Thus, she claimed her identity as Stella. The merchant continued by asking what Stella wanted to call him, but she characteristically stayed silent for a fortnight before shyly responding with, “Papa”, a title that frequently appeared in the stories he told. It seemed fitting, and Papa had no objections.

It was the day Stella turned 16 that the merchant decided she was ready to be independent. All the stories he had told prepared her for the human world, and to ensure she wouldn’t be deemed an outcast, he enrolled her in a school for other such misfits. Despite her obvious attachment, Stella agreed to the proposal, and solemnly left her boon companion at the grand school gates, with the promise to continue their travels after her graduation. All of Stella’s experiences up to then were about to be put to the test. Although rocks commonly sink in water, Stella was intent on staying afloat, since it meant being closer to the stars she strived to explore.

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Does this meet you adorableness standards? :3
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yeah super cute! I still like bonnie better though :p
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Name: Kamiyama Mizumoto (prefers to be called Kami (Kai is acceptable))
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Power: Wind magic/Air bending.
Power Explanation: Kai has the ability to use short but powerful bursts of wind at will. He will usually use them to get a quick burst of speed, jump higher, or dodge. He can also use it to push people back, but only by a few meters and only from close range. He can produce these "bangs" from his hands and his feet.
Weapon: Throwing daggers (usually carries up to 4)
Rank: F
Club: Boxing/Martial Arts
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Personality: Kai or Kami is a very erratic person, in that he's extremely unpredictable in his actions. Most of the time, he's a snarky, cynical, but laid back person that has somewhat of a superiority complex. He also has a very short temper, and can be extremely serious at times. However, he also enjoys bringing other people misery, and is somewhat insane, so he might turn on you when you least expect it. Also has a slight fetish for cat ears.
Bio: Kamiyama was, as a young child, abandoned upon a mountain for no explainable reason. He had never seen his parents, and was far away from civilisation when he first gained consciousness. However, a monk happened upon him, and carried him back to his home. It was a small home next to a river at the base of a mountain, and the entire area was encircled by a sparse forest.

The monk took it upon himself to 'raise' this child. However, being alone for so long, the monk had other ideas. He used to continuously torture Kai by hitting him with a stick or slamming his head against a wall, and the monk told him it was for training. During this time, the monk did show Kai how to use small amounts of wind magic, but only when he was in a good mood, which was rarely. Every now and then, the monk would also teach him how to read, write and speak. When Kai was 7, he decided he had had enough.

Once, the monk was walking across the bridge upon the river, to collect mushrooms from the forest. Kami snuck up behind him and hit him with a stick in the back of his head, aided by his newly found wind magic. The monk, not used to having to defend himself, was surprised by this and was unable to keep himself from falling into the river. The river was shallow, but still reached Kai's chest. Even so, he jumped into it, and the monk, who was lying on the riverbed, struggling to get to the surface, widened his eyes in surprise as Kai brought the stick down on him. Kai continued this until the monk was unrecognisable, and then let him flow down the river. Clothes bloodstained, and a crazed smile on his face, Kai got back to the house, before fainting.

When he woke up, rain was falling through the roof, and water flooded into the house, submerging everything, and making Kai float nearly to the ceiling. He panicked, but managed to climb through the roof after breaking it. After coughing the water in his lungs out, he heard the screaming of people searching for survivors, he assumed. The men ran over to the house and told Kai to come out, and he managed to, right before the house collapsed. Cold, tired and scared, Kai was escorted by the men in a carriage to a village that was a few miles away. Kai avoided speaking to anyone, and people assumed he was dumb, so sent him to a special school. Since he had never been to school before, and was now 7 years old, he was older than everyone else, so he thought he was better than them. This gave him his superiority complex.

Only when he graduated the school did the school realise that he had special powers, when he used them to climb to the top of the school in celebration of leaving it. Due to this, he was sent to Mirai High. Since he had heard that this school was full of people with powers like his, he created throwing daggers to defend himself, in case something ever happened.
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Name:Drakumai Hitokori
Gender:Female
Age:16
Power:Demon of Ice and Fire
Power Explanation:The uses of this power are the following:

Weapon:A metal device on her wrist (as shown on the picture) that expands into a gauntlet that makes any physical (not using her power) attacks with that hand/arm stronger.
Rank:F
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Club:Fencing,Choir
Personality:Drakumai usually has little self confidence,believing most negative comments on her to be true. She usually acts friendly if talked to,but might stutter a bit,despite this,she usually seems quite cool and calm when not in a conversation. She doesn't expect much from other people,and is more suprised when people don't let her down than when they do. Drakumai is quite good at observing a persons movements and facial expressions to know their emotions,although this is not a power,so she may be incorrect and will probably miss a few things (if someone says that their character looked or sounded guilty/sad/exited,she may be able to notice,but not if nothing is written about that characters physical movement). While she doesn't like depending on other people,she prefers to have specific "orders" or such,as she is usually quite uncertain about her own judgement and understanding of things (sometimes annoyingly so,although she will probably feel angry at herself or embaressed afterwards).
Bio:
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Name: Megumi Akiyama
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Power: Magical Girl transformation
Power Explanation: She transforms into a magical girl. When she's a magical girl, she's able to create waves that push back people/objects. How far the wave is able to push the people/objects back depends on their weight. So characters with powers that make them lighter get highly affected whereas characters with powers that make them heavier would be less affected. She can push people/objects back by at least one yard.
Transformation lasts 10 posts, whether she uses her powers or not. Within that time, she can use her powers once per post. In order to transform, she has to fill up the five petals on her ring with affection, meaning she has give five gestures of affection to another being in order for the petals to light up. Once she does that, all petals turn colorful and she can transform by giving her ring a kiss. She has to refill her affection meter after every transformation.
If her ring is taken off, her transformation forcefully becomes undone.
Ring looks like:

Rank: F
Club: Track
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Normal form:

Magical girl form:


Personality: when she's in her normal form, she's quiet and more reserved. She feels like she doesn't stick out that much. She tends to avoid places with lots of people if she can help it. She has been working on her social skills though, so she can socialize normally if put into a situation where she has to talk to people. But when she's in her magical girl form, she's the complete opposite. She's cheery, confident, and playful. It's almost as if her younger selfs personality comes out with the transformation.

Bio:
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Megumi and dracumai approved.
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Name: Sayuri Takenaka
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Power: Metal Manipulation
Power Explanation: She can transform metal into any weapon as long as she has enough metal. At the moment she can only use pure metal cleansed with spirit water. She carries a huge metal pole that she had cleansed with spirit water that she can transform into two daggers a show in her picture, a shield and sword, a scythe , and a spear. She normally just keeps he pole in her two daggers form stored on both sides of her belt. Her Metal Manipulation ability has a 5 post cooldown.
Weapon: Huge metal pole
Rank: F
Club: Cooking and Photography
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Personality: Sayuri is a yandere but she only jokes around she never does what she says she will do. She is also very energetic and loves to pull pranks on her friends. She also is very flirty.
Bio: Sayuri comes from a family of assassins that live in Japan. She and her family were often trained from birth and then sent on missions giving to them to help pay for the familiy expensives as well as got to keep some as allowance. The Takenakas are one of the most famous assassin familiy. Her family was also known for having kids that had powers that they used for assassinations and most of them had gone to Mirai high at one point and time. One day while she was playing with her younger brother she accidently touched her familiy's ancient metal gate that was made from metal cleansed with spirit water to protect their house from anything that tried to attack. Once she touched it she turned it into a huge long sword that crashed into the yard lucky missing her brother. Her family found it facinating they tried to have her repeat it on different metals but none worked. They looked into the metal that she transformed and found that the only way was to fine metal that was purified with spirit water. So they made her a pole made of pure metal that they purified with spirit water and gave it to her as a present. After she figured out how to mostly use her powers they sent her to Mirai High to learn how to master her power and become a better assassin.
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Sayuri and akamaya are approved
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Name: Shinya Yamasaki
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Power: Consumed by Darkness
Power Explanation: Drawing strength from the Darkness around him, the power has manifested in a few different ways.

Darkvision- Subject can see perfectly, no matter the lighting.

Shadow Strength- When fighting in darkness(Significant lack of light. Others may find it difficult to read. Is triggered at night.), gain a 1.3x buff to all stats. When fighting in the absence of light, gain a 1.5x buff to all stats.

In standard light, all stats are 0.8x normal, and in extremely bright light, all stats are 0.6x normal.

Weapon: Dual long bladed daggers
Rank: F
Club: None yet, he will decide later
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Personality: He is a very distrustful person, and is very cold and rude to new people trying to become his friend. Despite this, he seems to very talkative, claiming it as simply a time killer until his next mission. He is very committed to acomplishing his goals, doing anything to get them done. To those he comes to trust, he treats them with respect and compassion, willing to do anything for them.
Bio: Shinya didn't live an easy life. As a child, his parents, despite their poor income, always encouraged him to do anything that he wanted to do. He wanted nothing more than to make his parents proud, and always bragged about how he would become a firefighter, and help save lives. This of course, all changed when his father had left one night and never returned. His father disappeared when he was only 7, leaving his mother alone to support 4 kids. The next few years would prove difficult, Shinya slowly realising his dreams were eventually just going to die, and never come true. Each day it seemed more evident that they were going to be evicted, he was going to go yet another night without food so that his siblings could eat, or that he would have to do any kind of work for money. At the age of 14, Shinya had had enough of living the poor life, watching his mother struggle to support his siblings. Getting involved with the wrong crowd, Shinya had joined a gang, which promised him tons of money if he did his jobs well enough. His powers, while always there, were never really as evident before now. Showing strong potential given the right circumstances, he was tasked with jobs that varried from smuggling, stealing, and even all the way to killing. He really didn't care what he had to do, he only had one goal. Get the money, help the family. And to some extent, he suceeded. While they were still poor, they at least had enough money for them to live off of.

Years later, he finally found out his father had not disappeared, but was killed for not being able to pay back a debt he took out to keep his family in a home and happy. His father had sacrficed everything for him, and his siblings, and in the end died trying to do what was right. Wanting to become a person his father would have been proud of, he decided to apply for Mirai High. He doesn't plan on changing his ways, after all, he was already to used to them. What he did plan on doing, was using his abilities for the right people, instead of the wrong people like he had been doing. And who knows, maybe he'll find a job that'll give him everything he's looking for.
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H-Hello again. By the way, here's my another character. And... Feel free to tell me if there's something wrong in this character.

Thanks in advance!


Name: Shironi Bloodhound

Age: 18 [Birthdate: Jan 9]

Gender: Female

Power: Chaotic Red

Power Explanation:


Weapon:


Rank: F

Club: Marksman

Pic:
> Default: https://postimg.org/image/6bee8gta3/
> In mission: https://postimg.org/image/myec07aij/

Personality:
> A protective and loyal 'big sister' of anyone younger than her.
> She is playful with persons with properties opposite to hers. (Most probably to ice and light users. "Opposites attract,"... they say.)
> She is very adventurous.
> She eats any food... with regulation.
> Though she uses dark magic, she owns no evil deeds.

Bio:
JusticeIsUnknownMay 24, 2016 10:31 PM
[TEMPORARY!]Chika-chan~ You-chan~[TEMPORARY!]

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Name: Mai Darya
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Power: Primordial Flame
Power Explanation: While it may appear to some as simply fire control or fire manipulation, but it's a bit more comlicated than that. Mai herself describes it as "Being one with flame" but that's not exactly helpful. The following effects have been observed and may continue to increase in power as Mai herself does:
Fire production (producing flame from no observable source) & fire manipulation (the ability to manipulate flames that are already there.) Currently, her manipulation effect is crude at best. Being able to slow its spread or change its direction so long as it is currently burning an object such as a floor or scrap of paper. (Flamethrowers, wildfires, explosions, etc are right out.) She's much better at being a human flamethrower or thrower of fireballs.

Weapon: Other than her flames, Mai favors blunt weaponry like bats or clubs. She has no special weaponry of her own.
Rank: F
Club: Going Home
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(Mai prefers tying her hair up so it stays out of the way)
Personality: The type of person to come up with interesting ways of causing trouble out of sheer boredom. Mai can come off as aggressive, antisocial, or just plain rude. A bit slow to trust others and displays some tendencies typical of a delinquent or problem child. She has a FIREY temper. Ehh? Ehh? (You're no fun.)
Mai has shown a flirtatious side towards other women. Whether this is due to her sexual preferences or out of a desire to cause mischief is still unknown.
Bio: Growing up is hard. Growing up as an orphan is even harder. Mai had very few friends even in the orphanage, but she treasured the two she had. They're gone now; their lives cut far too short.

Mai had the luxury of knowing that her parents died in a fire when she was very very young. She always took pride in how they made sure she was safe, and took explosive offense to the children who still had parents saying otherwise. It's largley due to such incidents that everyone started seeing her as a wildchild, and she started acting out as such. It was expected of her, after all.

She accidentally burned down a few buildings when her power would force itself to manifest, but she learned to control it. That's when the church was destroyed and she was blamed for it. No matter what she said, no one believed that she didn't do it. She made a deal: She would leave her town and never come back. She still needed to go to school though, so a sympathetic ear pulled some strings and got her into Mirai High, where she would hopefully find a better life.

The staff (and more than likely a few of the students as well) are unfortunately aware of her supposed crime. How they react to it though has yet to be seen.

5 most recent edits (from most to least): Added a line in personality, changed power to obtain approval.
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Name: Lirin Lucana
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Power: The voice of good and evil
Power explanation: When she was young she got to sign a contract with both an angel and a demon, the contract consist: "The actual proprietary of this body, soul and mind, grants total control of the mentioned before, in exchange they have to maintain alive the users and grant her wishes and dreams using her powers in totallity", but as she got to sign two contracts she got a new benefit, now she control who's getting control of her and the moment the will take control, but a side effect is that they now live both inside her, so she's always hearing them like if they were "the voice of good and evil", also they sometimes take control of her body when she's asleep.
To make the contract valid she needs to recite certain verse depending on who is she calling:


After reciting the verse she let both Hope and Malice keep control for 4 posts, to activate the contract again 2 posts are needed, except if she wants to go from angel to demon or from demon to angel 4 posts are needed.
Weapon: none in human form
Rank: F
Club: Art
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Lirin Lucana

Hope

Malice

Personality:
Lucana has been a naughty person from always,smart and likes to take control of everything but it's not very good at it getting estrange results every time.
Hope is very sincere and kindhearted, but it's way too innocent and get fooled easily
Malice on the other hand is the perfect definition of perversion but gets frustrated easily when things don't go as she wanted
Bio: My family has always had a great influence in the spiritual world and with supernatural beings, at the grade that father made a contract with an angel, and mother with a demon.
When I was 10 both my father and mother noticed that I had talent at communicating with supernatural beings, so, both asked me to make a contract, but my father wanted me to sign with an angel, and my mother asked me to sign with a demon, what I decided was to sign secretly with both an angel and a demon.
I successfully signed with them, but the side-effects were obvious, I was always arguing even when no one was around, and when I was asleep they said that it was like two different beings were battling to take control over me, I got punished by my parents, and started to get more and more lonely over time, or that was what I though.
Somehow I started to talk to the angel and the demon I signed with, I got to know their names: Hope and Malice, we become friends, but keeping both of them inside my body was too much, so all we came to the same conclusion, we need to become stronger in order to my body to stand the pressure to what it was put over, but training alone in home was not enough, we started searching for a place where person with power were, in our search we founded Mirai High, we decided to enter there in order to be able to stand the pressure and become stronger so no one would stand between us.
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Ditto. Approved.
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Name: Jenny McMiller
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Power: (Idk what to put here, think of one yourself. Be creative :D)
Power Explanation: Because Jenny doesn't like fighting herself she can use a magic book she has to call forth 3 soldiers. One is a samurai with plate armor on his arms, shoulders, legs and chest wielding a katana. He is named Susano. One is a fully armored man who wields a big shield. He is named Lin (pronounced Rin). The last one is a bow wielding man named Kirota. The soldiers can be killed and after they die need 10 posts before they can be respawned. This goes for each of them induvidually. They are weaker than a rank F and will grow along with her
Weapon: (optional) (These do not come with extra powers, powers can be based on it)
Rank: F
Club: Arts Club
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Personality: Jenny is a very shy girl who isn't good at making friends. She is nice to people but is also easily embarrassed by basically anything that could embarrass her. She tends to keep to herself drawing or reading manga. If someone would help her she will always want to repay them back
Bio: It was a sunny day in England (sorry for that lie) when Jenny was at the beach with her friends. All of them were running around playing beach volley or just running through the water. But Jenny was jist drawing and reading when one of her friends suddenly pulled her into the water by her legs. Jenny felt helpless and had a weird image in her head about 3 soldiers but thought nothing much of it. When she was in the water she agreed to have some fun with her friends. It was getting evening when they were setting up a BBQ. The guys left for a little as Jenny and her 2 girl friends stayed at the BBQ. Suddenly some guys came up to them and started flirting with them. Of course they rejected them as Jenny was being pulled along. She began screaming as a book appeared in the sand and 3 soldiers appeared. They got the guys away and disappeared again. Afraid, Jenny ran home texting her friends she wasn't feeling well. When home she found the same book on her bed with the pictures of the soldiers who saved her. She looked through the book and found out what it was. She also learned about a school in Japan named Mirai. She applied there and went to Japan to of course attempt this magical school.
MadTsunTsunMay 26, 2016 2:36 PM
I'm merely a deredere, tsundere, devidere, yandere, kudere and all dem other dere's :3
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Alright. I suppose then I see no other issues. Unless Schema has an objection to bring out.....
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Name: Nona Kilenc
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Power: Heart of Darkness
Power Explanation: The ability to manipulate ones own shadow (and only her own shadow); stretching it, shaping it, giving it features it really shouldn't have (that are purely cosmetic and meant to mess with an opponents mindset. This does not mean that it have a supernatural ability to creep people out), and even causing it to extend into the third dimension and attack targets directly. While it is doing so, however, it is susceptible to being blocked or parried just as any other 3-dimensional object can be. For example: If she forms a blade or spike with her shadow, it will not be any better than another sword or spike. Her maximum range depends on the brightness of the area. The darker the battlefield, the better, since her own shadow can stretch much further. (this also means the brighter, the worse, as there isn't much shadow to stretch.) As a side effect, extended use of her power causes Nona to become more aggressive and less empathetic to the target of her attacks.
Weapon: N/A
Rank: F
Club:
Pic:
(she's the blonde with red eyes)

Personality: Ever since a certain incident, Nona very rarely shows expression on her face or in her tone of voice, but don't let that fool you: she's a hodgepodge of many emotions just bubbling under the surface. She views herself as a dangerous individual and thus tries not to get close to others despite the fact that she likes to talk.
Bio: When Nona was 9, her power manifested and destroyed everything in her old home, including her parents and younger brother. It being an accident only caused others to fear her more and as such she was sentenced for all the murders and locked in solitary confinement. A specialized cell was constructed: Light flooded the room at all times, ensuring that she had no shadows to manipulate and the room was kept at a constant low temperature in order to keep her tired all the time. Didn't want to risk an escape attempt, now did we?

Six years passed by in that cell. Six years before someone freed her on the condition she attend this school. He was a teacher there, apparently, but that was the last thing on Nona's mind. "Why?" She asked him. "Why are you helping me when there are people more deserving of it?" To which the man responded "In due time, ninth." Vague answers aside, Nona accepted the offer and now here she is.
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Sorry, I'm tired as hell. It's approved then
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Name: Sharni (or Shadow)
Age: 17
[b]Gender: Female
Power: Demon powers
Power Explanation: after comsuming a demon soul and becoming a demon she can go from Human form to demon form (basiclly gets glowing red eyes, horns etc)
Prision of Flames: uses magic chains formed by her magic which can impale and trapped people then once ordered the chain become hot and the victims soul is dragged down to a firey prison where they will stay untill released
Puppet Demon creature/pet (similar to doldum from pandora hearts) large woman like creature entangled in black strings, has white hair and 1 eye as the other has been pulled out, her lips are sown shut. Puppet is more of a puppeteer as she can use her string to rip people apart, trap them or control them like a puppet. She only does as she is ordered by Sharni.
Can fly, teleport, can use fire and lightening, , basic demon powers (think of any demon anime character's powers)
Weapon: Battle scythe
Rank: not sure?
Club: Music club
Pic: Human form: medium length red hair, light pink eyes, medium height, slim body with decent sized breasts. Often wear jeans and hoodies.
Demon form: Long blood red hair, Red eyes, same height, body the same just with a demon tattoo on arm and black horns (sometimes black feather wings). Clothing usually very revealing and all black.
https://images7.alphacoders.com/686/686838.jpg
Personality: Sharni who commonly refered to as Shadow is a very kind, sweet but self kept girl.She likes helping people. She loves to sing and play music as well as practice fighting with her scythe. Even tho she is kind she has a bad temper and a killer mentality. Being a demon this makes sense. Can be lustful at times but is set on finding 'the one'. She is quite the Tomboy and can be a smartass but will protect her friends no matter what.
Bio: Sharni (Shadow) had a bad childhood, being abused at home, bullied at school then watched her parents die when she was 11. Alone and upset for months she gave up and on the egde of death a demon came to possess her body but she fought back and somehow killed the demon and gained its power becoming a demon herself. After this, Sharni lived alone, learning and relying on her powers until oneday visiting the demon world. She met a demon mistress who took her in and soon became her Mentor. Her mentor, a demon Mistress know as Akira, taught Sharni how to control how powers and after kept Sharni in the demon world for 3 years. Sharni who was renamed as Shadow started gaining attention as her powers were different and so was she, some wanted to kill her as she was "not a real demon", during this Sharni made some enemies as she was getting very strong and refused to leave, some she killed others were still after her. At 15 she left the demon world and returned to the human world, living in a small apartment. She didnt have any friends apart from Puppet her demon pet/servent. After awhile she got work and started saving money then she decided to attend Mirai high to grow her powers more and start a happier life.

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2. The power is not allowed to be overpowered e.g. mind reading, causing death by touch.

Your power had too many uses that are too good. Particularly possession/mind, and teleportation, which, if you did not read, are forbidden powers. Flying should only be present if it is the only power. "basic demon powers" is too broad a term. As for pic, use BBCode or simply link it.
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@sharni22
2. The power is not allowed to be overpowered e.g. mind reading, causing death by touch.

Your power had too many uses that are too good. Particularly possession/mind, and teleportation, which, if you did not read, are forbidden powers. Flying should only be present if it is the only power. "basic demon powers" is too broad a term. As for pic, use BBCode or simply link it.


is it better now?
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Still too powerful. Abilities cannot impair the mobility of other characters. And by the description, they can simply one-shot anyone by "tearing them apart" and such things (which is a detail that should not be there in the first place). And like I said before, abilities cannot, under any circumstance, control people. Not even your puppet, which is missing somethings. Such as duration and cooldowns. Your old powers are still there.
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You're making prison of flames seem unavoidable and puppet is too overpowered. Even if it's not your character directly having the power, the puppets aren't really allowed to have a banned power which is teleport, besides that there are too many things the puppet can do just at rank F.
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Edited my character's bio.
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Edited my character's bio.

And the other stuff?
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I was only told to edit my bio. I did so, as my character was already approved, so...
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Name: Naomi "Jack" Ito
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Power: Smoke manipulation
Power Explanation: Naomi possesses the ability to manipulate smoke and embers. She cannot create smoke and must continually absorb it from the environment to use it. Each drain gives her 10 smoke stacks(max amount holdable) and have a host of applications and uses. They are:

  • Smoke dashing: Naomi is able to swiftly dash a few steps, releasing a large amount of smoke behind her. She cannot attack while dashing.
  • Smoke salvo: Naomi can release balls of smoke from her palms that travel in a straight line at respectable speeds. These shots are more like a punch than a bullet, however, and are used more so as a means of distraction than as an offensive weapon.
  • Smoke smash: Naomi unleashes a lightning quick strike with her hand that causes a smoke explosion on impact, damaging her opponent while also creating a smoke induced blind spot 3.5 metres in radius for three posts. Staying in this ball will cause extreme coughing which may affect one's ability to fight. Each punch expends two smoke stacks.
  • Smoke missile: Naomi charges up her smoke salvo and releases a heavily congested missile-like projectile that will cause a large explosion of smoke on impact (for all intensive purposes consider it an RPG missile). The radius of this smoke is five metres and the blast smoke lingers for three posts. This ability uses four smoke stacks.


Weapon:
A shortsword katana

A sawed off shotgun

An FRF2 sniper rifle


Rank: F

Club: Ice hockey

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Armour:

No Armour:


Personality:
While under the mask Naomi is like a different person entirely. She is short spoken, reserved, and cold. The persona of Jack is one that would much rather let her actions speak for her. Calm and focussed, she thinks of nothing but the fight ahead. Take away the mask however and you are left with a shameless, light-hearted and extremely masochistic girl with seemingly limitless amounts of energy and enthusiasm. Being viewed as a monster by half of society has led to Namoi having a complicated morality. She has no respect for the justice system and never does a day pass when she doesn't break at least one law. This raises an interesting case with regards to why she captured superhumans for a living. Since it seems apparent that she has no family, it could be inferred that it has something to do with that, perhaps her parents were murdered by supernatural powers and this is a personal vendetta against them.Her main interests are ice hockey, horror and porn. Her favourite food is sour sweets and she has no idea what she wants to do with her life when she grows up. She is terrified of insects, especially hairy ones and has raging Nyctophobia.

Throughout her life, and career as a bounty hunter, Naomi has vowed never to kill another human being regardless of how evil they may be. Even indirectly causing someone's death is something she forbids herself from doing.

Bio:
After supernatural powers became a reality for the world, many governmental parties supported the complete freedom of these beings. Others did not. They demanded that the supernatural beings be round up and confined for fear of what they might do to humanity. Thus there came to be substantial bounties for bringing these superhumans in alive. Naomi, known by her bounty hunter alias "Jack" has been responsible for more superhuman incarcerations than any other human that has ever lived. Thus it was quite unfortunate for Naomi when she learned that she herself was a human gifted with supernatural capabilities. Namoi was stuck. She couldn't integrate with the hunters because they would capture her, nor could she ally herself with the superhumans because they would try to kill her for what she had done to their kind. She survived for the most part, considering how she always wore a helmet and had a voice modulator that altered her tone, she was unrecognisable to both sides without her suit on. No one even knew she was female, let alone a teenager.

She was not as safe as she thought however. After spending a year wandering doing odd bounty hunter jobs, she was finally tracked down, not by the government but by the superhumans. As it so happened, a Japanese school had taken an interest in her, perhaps as a message to the world saying that one's history is irrelevant and that all can join. Its name: Mirai Academy. Unfortunately... her escorts had a friend or two that met the business end of Naomi's clutches and would make sure she paid her dues before arriving at the school...

There's a lady who's sure
All that glitters is gold
And she's buying a stairway to heaven
When she gets there she knows
If the stores are all closed
With a word she can get what she came for
Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven


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Name: Leona "Leo" Kanzaki
Age: 16
Power: Darkness' Wrath
Power Explanation: Similar to darkness manipulation; Leona can manipulate the element of darkness however she wants, including giving that darkness a temporary life form to do her bidding (has not mastered this, takes a lot of energy so does not do this often). When attacked by other powers similar to her, she has little to no effect.
Leona can absorb any kind of power, changing it to a dark version of it and throw it back at her enemies. Absorbing light can either work with or against her, which is always a risk in battle (has not mastered this, absorbing similar powers does nothing for her). This also allows her to change her hair color by absorbing the light pigments or adding more dark pigments. She also has the ability to create a powerful blast concentrated of darkness and her energy (similar to Bleach's Cero). This causes her to get fatigued, or even possibly faint at times (has not mastered this). Can also be combined with her weapons to create endless possibilities.
Weapon:

Rank: F
Club: Fencing
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Personality: Leona has a calm but lazy personality. However, when meeting new people, interacting with others, or being in a new environment she can easily become shy and quiet. Once she is out of her shell, she can be quite energetic. She has a bad habit of bottling up her emotions, which usually portrays her as heartless. She also secretly has a cold nature and a sharp tongue only to who deserve it.
Bio: Second youngest of seven (five older siblings, including an older twin sister and a younger brother). Born in the UK but raised in the Japan, Leona grew up in a wealthy household.

When Leona's powers awoke at the young age of five it quickly went out of control to the point where it almost killed people, because of this she didn't have much of a childhood. She was homeschooled most of the time, training, and kept under watch. She trained under her father who taught her how to use swords, bow and arrows, axes, guns, and scythes as well as hand-to-hand combat/martial arts. While growing up, Leona could never seem to control her powers like her siblings could control theirs. And it seemed that every time she lost control of her emotions, she would also lose control of her powers. It only grew worse as Leona got older...

Since there was only so much that her parents could do, her father suggested sending her to Mirai High.
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"Exposing Brimstone to absolute zero conditions (-273.15 centigrade / 0 Kelvin) will stop movement of the gas, but will not change its phase"

Why specify the effects of an unachievable temperature? :

Also, the hallucination aspect of the gas has to go

Smoke form/mimicry will have to go. A state of physical invulnerability to physical attacks just can't hold up, with the latter being op.

We don't work with prana here but what I would recommend instead is doing what Whore did with her smoke based character and give them a degree of stack points.see Naomi, two posts up from this.

Can't really let veil smoke float either. Smoke at threehundred percent the concentration would literally insta kill(in a very, very, very horrible way) anyone who breaths it in)

While these edits would make her a weaker manipulator of smoke the Naomi, the fact that she has strongly acidic blood balances it.

The flammability of the Brimstone works both in and against her favour since I don't have a problem with that. (though for her sake she better not forget to avoid lighting up a cigy when she has a deep cut :L)

Within the realms of books these characters cam work, but considering you're going for more of an entertainment based/flashy powerset than a balanced one, I can't just approve it.
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You'd have to male the life form aspect only available at Rank E

and the absorption will have to go. That's way op, sorry.

Also, you're going to have to specify how it can be combined with her weapon
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Alright but given how long it takes to appraise your characters' powers, and the fact that that one was for nothing, I won't be looking at it for quite some time
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Okay deleted the absorption ability and I actually forgot to specify a gender, sorry about that.

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Name: Leona "Leo" Kanzaki
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Power: Darkness' Wrath
Power Explanation: Similar to darkness manipulation; Leona can manipulate the element of darkness however she wants, including giving that darkness a temporary life form to do her bidding (has not learned/unavailable, takes a lot of energy so does not do this often).
She also has the ability to create a powerful blast concentrated of darkness and her energy (similar to Bleach's Cero). This causes her to get fatigued, or even possibly faint at times (has not mastered this). Can also be combined with her weapons to create endless possibilities. For example, transferring the darkness into the blade which can be used to create a darkness slash, can also be used to pin others if the blade stabs the other's shadow. For escaping purposes, Leona can stab the blade into the ground to temporarily create a darkness wall. (Her katana can also be used to create the energy blasts and help her form darkness life forms, but she tends to not use this).
Weapon:

Rank: F
Club: Fencing
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Personality: Leona has a calm but lazy personality. However, when meeting new people, interacting with others, or being in a new environment she can easily become shy and quiet. Once she is out of her shell, she can be quite energetic. She has a bad habit of bottling up her emotions, which usually portrays her as heartless. She also secretly has a cold nature and a sharp tongue only to who deserve it.
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Name:Sven Petersen
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Power: Cyckle of Life
Power Explanation: Everytime Sven dies his spirit leaves his body and creates a new one. The time it takes for him to form a new body varies depending on how badly his previous body was destroyed. Since his spirit is still in his body at the moment of death, this affect the energy his spirit has. Unless his spirit is completly destroyed Sven will continue to live. Depending on how much his spirit was damaged by the destruction of his body, he will either come back as young adult (his true age and form) or as a child (how he looked like when he was 10-14) both physically and mentally.
Weapon: N/A
Rank: F
Club: Computer Club (if there is one)
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[*]Height: 143-193 cm
[*]Weight: 48-85 Kg
[*]Eye color: Cyan
[*]Hair Color: Golden
[*]Body Type: Moderate Fit
Personality: In his child form Sven is an inoccent little guy but he is also quite a charmer. Well not really, he can pass as an offensive child as he often comments about big butts and tits. He is very open about the fact that he likes that and honestly does not know that what he's doing isn't right. He's also a prankster who likes to prank everyone around him, his pranks kan get nasty wich makes him annoying at times.
In his adult form Sven becomes much more of a gentleman. Altho he still has a huge love for volumptious women he doesn't express it in public. He still has his provocative personality but he does know how to moderate it and not go overboard. He is also now a real gentleman, helping people around him and being very polite with everyone.
Bio: The Petersen family is a famous one. They are the richest people in the country known as Sweden and their influence around the world reflects this. Sven is the youngest of 5 siblings. As a child, he was the troublemaker in the house. His brother and sister were way more polite and "good children" yet Sven is the favorite of his father Erik. Sven was never a genius in school or was he ther worst one, nothing aside from his good looks wich he inherited from his father was the only thing that stood out. One day Sven was in a school trip to India, unfortunatly their plan was hijacked. No one survived the crash, not even Sven who came from a family full of power users but after a few hours later when the news reporter were on the scene and his family was moarning looking at the news a blue light appears out of knowhere and creates a body. It's Sven, but he looks like a 12 year old and acts like one. His family is both overjoyed and confused as is the rest of the world. Did they just witness instant reincarnation? Sven was then sent to this school by his father.
Trivia:
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My first attempt at an RP character built entirely from scratch.

Name: Némein de Meridia

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Power: Eleventh Greater Secret (Major Arcana) - Justice

Power Explanation: The eleventh of the twenty-two greater secrets, "Justice" is said to be the true form of revenge, vengeance, and punishment. "Justice" is represented by Nemesis, the blood-stained goddess of vengeance, and exists in the mortal realm as Némein's watchful observer and guardian.

The power has various properties:

  • <Blind Judgment> Némein is unable to feel pain, as Nemesis converts the pain directly to "Unpunished", a form of energy used in the Eleventh Greater Secret. As such, the amount of "Unpunished" gained is heavily dependent on the intensity of damage.

    • Pain from light damage (e.g. shallow flesh wounds) would be converted to one (1) charge of "Unpunished".
    • Pain inflicted through moderate damage (e.g. slashes through non-vital body areas, moderate blunt force, weak destructive magic) would be converted to two (2) charges of "Unpunished".
    • Pain inflicted through severe damage (e.g. internal bleeding, severe slashes, attacks directed to vital body areas, heavy blunt force, destructive magic) would be converted to four (4) charges of "Unpunished".


    Note that Nemesis can only store up to fifteen (15) charges of "Unpunished", due to the limitations of her ethereal form.

    Also, after the first conversion, the wounds stay in a lingering state, providing Némein with one-half (0.5) "Unpunished" charge. This stacks to a maximum of 1.5 "Unpunished" charges gained per post.

  • <Price of Blood> This power allows Némein to gain blood every time he successfully attacks an enemy (a missed/dodged/blocked/parried attack does NOT count). Amount of blood gained would be proportional to the intensity of damage dealt.

    • Light damage will return 3 percent blood.
    • Moderate damage will return 5 percent blood.
    • Heavy damage will return 10 percent blood.
    • Némien naturally regains 2 percent blood per post.


  • <Take Pain> Némein could heal his allies and close their wounds at the cost of taking the same amount of pain as "Just Pain", a pure form of pain insuppressible even by Némein's pain conversion. Thus, Némein would NOT gain "Unpunished" from using this ability. Also, all pain is amplified to twice its level when it is converted to "Just Pain".

    The closed wound will then be transferred to Némein and will open, acting as if it was his wound in the first place. Note that the lingering pain of an open wound is NOT considered as "Just Pain".

  • <Instruments of Balance> Whenever Némein's blood touches a weapon, he can choose to project a copy of that weapon (called Instruments of Balance), allowing Némein to use that weapon to strike back. The copying process takes at least one turn, with the process duration becoming higher the stronger and more complex the weapon is. Also, copying weapons consume the blood along its surface, meaning that he can't copy a weapon twice if his blood only touched the blade once. However, succeeding projections of the same weapon (in one battle) will be instantaneous as Némein remembers all necessary properties.

    Another drawback is that only one Instrument of Balance can be materialized at any point in time.

    As copying requires Némein's blood to land (and stick) on it, magic could not be copied, but the pain they deal will still be converted to "Unpunished".
    In addition to this, ranged weapons that fire projectiles could also not be copied unless at least a drop of Némein's blood touches the projectile launcher (bow, gun, etc.).

    Tools of Balance feed off Némein's stamina as long as they are in material form, with the rate of stress applied proportional to the complexity of the weapon. They last only for one strike (a missed/dodged/blocked/parried attack counts), or when they are removed from Némien's body (projectiles excluded), after which the weapon instantly vanishes.
    Also, the projection has weight that decreases depending on the intensity of damage dealt.

    Note that Némein is adept in using Instruments of Balance but can't use real weapons in the same effectiveness as with them.

  • <Retribution> "Unpunished" is used as a charge/counter. Nemesis could consume any number of "Unpunished" charges to tip the scales in Némein's favor, imbuing her weapons with "Retribution". A weapon or Instrument of Balance infused with "Retribution" will feed off the life force of his enemy, healing Némein (or an ally, if he wishes) based on the intensity of damage the weapon deals and the amount of "Unpunished" consumed. This also steals stamina.

    Retribution expires after the first attack (a missed/dodged attack does NOT count, but a blocked/parried attack counts), and could only be used once every three turns.

  • <Hubris> When the total number of "Unpunished" charges equal to or are greater than twelve (12), Nemesis could consume all charges of "Unpunished" to manifest in a physical form and unleash a devastating attack, inflicting damage to enemy/enemies within a twenty-meter radius circle around Némein, before reverting to her ethereal form. The damage costs are as follows:

    • Light damage will consume one (1) charge.
    • Moderate damage will consume three (3) charges.
    • Heavy damage will consume six (6) charges.


    Note that after this attack, Némein's <Blind Judgment> will deactivate for two posts, and this attack may only be used once every ten posts. Also, this attack can only be used after at least five (5) posts have passed since the beginning of the battle.


Weapon: Némein uses a sword as his main weapon, though he also uses his Instruments of Balance at times.

Rank: F

Club: Literature

Appearances: Némein is a white-haired and silver-eyed man of noble European origin. His body is of a slightly muscular build, the result of his everyday swordplay training. He stands at an imposing six feet tall.
He wears a blue-black scholar's robe with several pieces of bronze-and-steel armor above its torso area, and a belt with a hanging carry for his blade.

Némein has a tattoo on her right hand, bearing the image of the scales.
The scales move depending on the amount of "Unpunished" charges and the number of
wounds, represented by the black and white feathers respectively.

Nemesis is an entity, taking the form of a woman, which is visible only to Némein. She carries a set of scales which also moves in a manner similar to Némein's tattoo. Also, Nemesis carries a sword, but this is only for symbolic purposes.

He also has a necklace with a card as its dangling piece.


Personality: Némein is calm and kind. Always smiling and never startled, his calmness and composure are worth being praised.

Outside the battlefield, he has a sharp attitude, but also detached and clinical. A scholar with a bookish disposition, Némein has a gifted memory, able to memorize copies of books within a very short time. Thus, he has learned various skills (treating wounds, lessons on various subjects, etc.) by reading.
Némein also has a moderate sense of humor and can make jokes at times.

When taking part in battle, Némein is a presence not to be ignored. With an expression and focus colder than the retribution of Nemesis herself, Némein is a reaper and a gardener - manipulating the scales of fate to his liking, and bringing unparalleled support to his allies.

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