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Jan 8, 2017 10:55 PM

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@Xylolicious

KK. BTW, this power is not likely to be very good. At least you have a broadsword :P


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Jan 9, 2017 7:12 PM

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Jan 9, 2017 7:52 PM

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@Misna

Im speechless. Im in love with this character. Do know that if you ever jump more then 10 meters without an upgrade, Imma cause you to fall and break a couple bones.


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Jan 10, 2017 7:47 PM

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Oppression. Rule by fear. Dictatorships. It's a strange thing. Throughout history, for some reason, the lives of such rulers have always ended in the same way: Assassination by someone who isn't even part of a combat unit.
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Jan 10, 2017 9:09 PM

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Jan 12, 2017 8:30 AM

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frogoten said:



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Jan 17, 2017 7:28 AM

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Jan 17, 2017 8:11 AM

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I love this power. Its really good and well made, but this isnt a dark power. This power is attributed the Void and Dimension Elements. If it becomes a bit too much, I may revoke approval and request work, but for now:


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Jan 20, 2017 9:55 PM

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Jan 21, 2017 8:44 AM

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Jan 21, 2017 7:45 PM

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Jan 21, 2017 10:42 PM

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Jan 22, 2017 11:12 AM

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Jan 22, 2017 4:35 PM

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Really? Lego Knight? Whatever. You can upgrade the soldier's gear as you wish through PP. I just dont like it when people try to start out with high end shit. Then there is no roo for improvement you know?


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There you go.


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Jan 24, 2017 10:40 PM

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Okay. I just need some clarity and then Illl approve. What elements are you going for? I assume Heat Vision, so that would be Fire and Heat Elements. But you could also go ice. Which would be Ice and Cold Elements. Either way:



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Jan 27, 2017 12:52 PM

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Feb 1, 2017 10:32 PM

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@Byakugaran

Fair enough.that would make sense. But upon their deaths, perma deaths, Ill add their stuff to my random loot cache. Which has some pretty cool shit i I might add.

Also, the reason that their demon affinities are so unbalances is that the binding spell would have equalized their affinities together, taking in a lot of dark for clair, and a lot of light for Ouro



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Feb 3, 2017 11:59 PM

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Feb 8, 2017 8:47 AM
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Just found out mal cut off bio so guessing its to big for even mal to contain XD so for all who want to read it be warned its longer than fuck and bigger than mount everest XD

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Part two since couldn't fit whole thing in one post
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Feb 9, 2017 2:32 PM

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So what Im getting from the bio is that Auami, her Brother, and a small army of modern-tech rebels are going to start in the Shattered Forest? Cause if so, that is good. Cant wait to show her the might of the spawn.


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Feb 13, 2017 12:51 PM

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Youre one of the people I have been waiting for. First off. Weather Control. Already sounding OP. Cooldown and duration of summonefd weather? What weather can he sommon

Death is handled here in a different way. Please remove the re-birth clause. I handle death in this RP

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Feb 14, 2017 12:51 PM

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  • A half human and half demon is classified as nephilim
  • You are gonna have to use your power to create skills with cooldowns. Start with one
  • I think its best if you don't add that special skill
  • I invited you
  • Also for factions off you don't want to join one pick freelancer
 
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1)ok i get.. i will add it....
2) i think i already did..
3)well it's only one power she can controle an air.. so only i have to do add it a cool downs?
4)ok.. i will delete skill.. i write it because i did not ge what i could write there...
5)ok
6)ok i get it,,

check it now.. is there any other problems?
 
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First off could you change the weapon, if you have change the name at least so i can notice on my phone. And special skills are something not everybody can do, but not absurd or yeah something which they are good at.

Also Setsu first off controlling air can be broad, and also creating Tornadoes or hurricanes at level 1 sorry but 0% chance to be approved. I meant more like you can control air, well what can you do with that and each technique is a different skill. Just creating Tornadoes is a different skill i find and a very expensive one at that for high levels.
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{BEING HANDLED OVER SKYPE}
 
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@Krop-Tor What is a fae changeling?
 
Feb 15, 2017 10:50 AM

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Feb 15, 2017 11:07 AM

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Byakugaran said:
First off could you change the weapon, if you have change the name at least so i can notice on my phone. And special skills are something not everybody can do, but not absurd or yeah something which they are good at.

Also Setsu first off controlling air can be broad, and also creating Tornadoes or hurricanes at level 1 sorry but 0% chance to be approved. I meant more like you can control air, well what can you do with that and each technique is a different skill. Just creating Tornadoes is a different skill i find and a very expensive one at that for high levels.

ok i change her powers and her weapon.. if there is still something let me know
 
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@Misna
Something I want you to be aware of is that the Spectral Element can be very risky to work with. If not done properly, your element can actually heal or even upgrade the spawn. The Spirit Blaster would begin filling them with spirit energy. While this may be detrimental to a human, this is just feeding such a metaphysical creature such as the spawn. The Avaros Essence would be converted to Ven Essence and instead HEAL them. TO put it simply, using this on a spawn has a high risk of healing them instead of hurting them. THe spirit can be corrupted when inside a spawn. This said, Im now going to appraise the char.

Okay. The spirit blaster wording is a bit off to me. So let me try to break it down so an idiot like me can get it. This is a useless power. Am I correct? You say that the excess spirit energy can do harm, but no threahhold is listed unless im missing something. Im guessing its the groundwork for a future upgrade?

Wow. I cant imagine how much it must have confused her when she ralized that the spawn's spiritual appearence is exactly the same as their physical appearance. Also, when she sees a Dread Lord, she would see something that might just cause her will to live turn to dust.

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I like you. You have a funny way of doing shit. Especially that thing you did before the bio. Can you give me a basic tldr so I dont have to read that all? Ples? proceeds to read all of it twice

In the first quarter, you mention monsters. Are these shadow spawn? Was her world also invaded? If so, then I have a thing. Because of her type of transcendence, which is known as trans-dimensional re-manifestation, a phenomenon only with spiritual entities, her worlds barrier was broken. Because of this, the spawn leaked into the world, but not only from that point, but they spilled into the time fabric as well, popping up years before she transcended, and causing her transcendence in the start. What you think.

Okay. Changes needed are the following:
The Spirit Counter Limit cannot be proportional to the Xera Stat. The reason being at each level, that stat has the max potential of goinging up 4 levels if you dont allocate the 3 points elsewhere. Meaning that by level 20, you would have an absurd amount of things.

Okay, you have a set charge limit now, so what about cooldown? After expending the Spirit Charges, how does she go about getting them back?
 
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I can see what you're saying, though I do have two comments as to why her spiritual attacks would in fact cause damage rather than healing. For one, the energy she uses is also converted of itself, not making it the regular usable spirit energy, but instead a to her specialized type, if you catch what I mean. After all, although she doesnt possess these powers anymore, the bio does speak of her both harming and healing humans with the very same Spirit Energy within her, giving away the fact that she can specialize her spirit energy to have different effects. Ofcourse, she currently does not posses the power to heal or the like, and only harm or enhance herself, and I should probably have elaborated more on that, but I felt my stuff already became too much as it was, in terms of text xD
As such, with her energy being specific to her and how she uses it, having a spawn utilize it for itself would either by neigh impossible, or instead have the spawn mutate in a less dangerous and evil creature, is what I would imagine.
Next to that, or to add on to that, the club guide speaks of Spawn being made of raw darkness. If Spirit energy would be added to that, it would disturb the balance inside of the spawn (Balance being everything Rena's spirit energy is build around, disturbing and enhancing it) as Spawn do not have a light element inside them to bring balance to that situation. with this I'd say it's quite the reverse, where for humans it would take more energy to have them overload on pure energy alone, as they possess both dark and light spirit energy, while a spawn gets bothered with a to their body strange element, perhaps similar to a bacteria or virus to a human, which needs to be erased.

I would say that, in her current situation, you are right that the spirit blaster current has no real use other than slashing alone. I didnt add a threshold simply because, with how her powers purely based around evolving to adjust to the situation, the current energy she possesses is still mostly based on her previous planet, which has a different spiritual signature. As such, while her spirit works for herself to increase her strength and speed, the only thing she can do is overload someone, and not yet harm them in another way, simply because her power hasnt adjusted yet. As such, you are indeed right this is groundwork for future upgrade.

well, her will to live, currently, is just to strengthen up enough to call up a meteor storm to eradicate all human and spawn from the planet, so how big her opponent is doesnt matter :D
And hey, if their physical and spiritual appearance are the same, it doesnt matter which type of eyesight she uses, spirit or normal, other than being able to see them hidden or not. Might also make for interesting results in upgrades later, maybe...dunno

Thank you for that compliment! But bad news, that eh...kinda is the tl;dr. I had started by completely telling her story, but as I figured that would make for an entire book to be written, for both her centuries before the war, and then even deeper story from within the war and her torture period. As such I shortened everything....and hey, if its too much to read and you dont want to read it all, why you read it twice, huh?! :P
The story had all kinds of stuff as to how she ofcourse was shrined as a goddess, which she practically was ofcourse, and how mankind decided they didnt need anymore gods or guardians...be glad I left all of that out! xD

That's not something I had yet thought about, the monsters being spawn. It might make for something interesting, though I'm not one hundred percent fully sure of what you plan with that yet, if you wouldnt mind to elaborate.

Hmmm, I would say that's fair, yeah. I'll think about how to work this while the talking here goes on. That is to say and simply inform you that I won't change anything yet, not because I dont agree, but because Im still thinking out how to change it xP

I do believe I mentioned this last point in the power description actually, under recovery. She recovers 1 charge every 2 posts (of herself ofcourse) unless she focuses on recovery, which makes that she cant participate in battle or perform any actions at all other than standing or sitting still, which is when she gains 1 charge per post if she isnt interrupted/disturbed. Ofcourse, when out of battle she regains these charges normally, so she starts with her max charge at the beginning of a battle, though maybe affected by special circumstances.

Also, just to comment, before we spam this forum here or whatever you have planned, maybe it's easier to go to pm's?
Just a thought, it doesnt matter too much, just might make for less spam over here or the like, ya know?
 
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@Misna
Specialized forms of Spectral Energy is still spectral energy. If you were to feed a spawn spectral energy with the intent to harm, the darkness of the spawn can corrupt the spiritual essence of the spectral Element. At that point, its their energy. Not yours. And it becomes a part of them. Thus allowing it to synthesize into them. Veihdaraksot ((Aetherial Spirit)) becomes Vendaraksot ((Saartherial Spirit)). As a reference, Saartherial refers to the Dark Domain. Aetherial refers to the light and all its creations, and Netherial refers to the fires of hell.

Even if its specialized for her, if it were to be corrupted by the Vapors of the night, it is no longer hers at all, and loses all properties. See my point? In this same manner, this character would be more suceptible to corruption from entities like Songlords, Dread Lords, or even Dread Lords and the Dark Lord Ythima and his Bride.

I am very glad you did >.<

Um, I wasnt planning on anything much, but it would actually be much better if she didnt. I want her first experience with the spawn to be nightmarish. Oh, thats right, Ill use a Nightmare. Havent used them much recently. Itll give me a good enough reason to give Denial another appearance :P Or maybe use Torment. No. He wouldnt work on her. Terror would be a good one. I doubt Despair would be a good one either... She doesnt have anyone she cares about.

Believe it or not, the only thing more convienent for me than this is skype. If you have it, PM me ur username and Ill see if I can find you. Thats the best way >.<

This is second best.
 
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Its good to be back. Don't fuck this up for me.
 
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@Nekyne

  • What you call yourself as species is Anthromorph
  • I can't see the picture
  • You do know that the water gun is like absolutely useless right?
  • A power needs a cooldown and charges/duration, and i would advise you make a broad power which you divide in skills.
  • Your character requires a legit fear
  • And yeah that bio gotta be remade cause that ain't good
  • As a reminder, no NFSW without spoiler or just none at all as recently this club was hit by a forum admin
 
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Byakugaran said:
@Nekyne

  • What you call yourself as species is Anthromorph
  • I can't see the picture
  • You do know that the water gun is like absolutely useless right?
  • A power needs a cooldown and charges/duration, and i would advise you make a broad power which you divide in skills.
  • Your character requires a legit fear
  • And yeah that bio gotta be remade cause that ain't good
  • As a reminder, no NFSW without spoiler or just none at all as recently this club was hit by a forum admin
fuck it, Im gone
 
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