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May 10, 2009 4:20 AM
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If your a composer pls post here your work
for comments on their works go here
http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=84405
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May 11, 2009 3:05 AM
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Title: Paranoia

Verse:
A hoarse voice came calling me tonight
with my eyes closed I rose from my bed
and without knowing I've been sleepwalking again

Refrain:
And when I got to my senses
I opened my eyes

Chorus:
And I was thrashed
I was panting
I'm in the midst of a melancholy

overturned by the paranoia
living in me

Verse:
The possessive dream suffocated me
and as I tremble, I sweat heavily
just to find out I was just having a bad dream

(repeat refrain)

Chorus:
and I was thrashed
I was panting
I'm in the midst of a melancholy

A grasp for breath
and a gruesome nightmare had awaken me..

Bridge:
closing my eyes again
will be just a mistake
I don't want to experience any longer

I'm feeling paranoid!...


(this song is more kinda like 30 Seconds To Mars' music)
(at l east how it sounds like)

peace out! ~o)
Sep 2, 2009 6:06 AM
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Alright! since this thread has become inactive and had been snubbed by the members..we will be having a new kind of music thread here..

In here..you can post your composed songs and your own cover of your fave song..
and for those who have their own music videos uploaded in youtube including you as the singer or a dance video that features you and your friends, we would be glad if you could show it to the other members here..

we could also talk about our favorite songs here
and for music lovers out there, this would be a great opportunity to share your ideas and thoughts about music

starting from friday..this thread will be having its own music related topics..

I expect your full cooperation..see you on friday guys! \m/

*for more questions and suggestions, feel free to bother fatal since she just ordered me to do this*
Sep 3, 2009 3:56 AM
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And I thought its YOUR idea too...
Sep 4, 2009 6:38 PM
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wolfsbane said:
Title: Paranoia

Verse:
A hoarse voice came calling me tonight
with my eyes closed I rose from my bed
and without knowing I've been sleepwalking again

Refrain:
And when I got to my senses
I opened my eyes

Chorus:
And I was thrashed
I was panting
I'm in the midst of a melancholy

overturned by the paranoia
living in me

Verse:
The possessive dream suffocated me
and as I tremble, I sweat heavily
just to find out I was just having a bad dream

(repeat refrain)

Chorus:
and I was thrashed
I was panting
I'm in the midst of a melancholy

A grasp for breath
and a gruesome nightmare had awaken me..

Bridge:
closing my eyes again
will be just a mistake
I don't want to experience any longer

I'm feeling paranoid!...


(this song is more kinda like 30 Seconds To Mars' music)
(at l east how it sounds like)

peace out! ~o)


I really loved your song!=)
Sep 5, 2009 3:50 AM
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wow really? thanks..

peace out yo! \m/
Sep 6, 2009 12:07 AM
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This is the song I composed for Shugo Gakuen
I've already planted the chord for this song..

Title: Spring Time Blitz

Verse:
We watched the sky together hand in hand
We plunged into the grass eye to eye

Refrain:
And from the moment you touch me
not a single noise could reach me
then you kissed my lips
(la la la la la la la la)

Chorus:
A lovely lovely lovely scene
honey honey you love me
when all the stars collide
you and me will catch the falling star

Verse:
As soon as the weather change upon the sky
We will know it's spring time again

(Refrain)
(Chorus)
(Solo)

Bridge:
And from your eyes
I can see the true feeling of love
like a flower that blooms
pleasantly in spring..

(Chorus 3x)
(higher tone the last time)



hahahaha!
peace yo! o~
Sep 6, 2009 11:51 AM
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hehe do you dream to be a pro song writer?
Sep 8, 2009 2:11 AM
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Not to mention she's a great guitarist =3
Sep 28, 2009 2:09 AM

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this is my recently composed song..
it is already complete with tone and chords..
it's a punk song BTW..

Title: Wasted

Verse:
I know you never cared
and I don't know what to say
I know you'll neglect me
like you did yesterday

but what's worse than that
is when you lied about your love
I'm not a puppet you could control everytime
I used to love you more than anything
but now you're just a plain memory

chorus:
how long must I grieve?
I know it's not like me
I usually laugh it all
but now I was hurt so badly
I should not have given all my heart
(2nd repeat: I should not have wasted all my love)
to the person whose love is just a another lie
(repeat chorus)

verse:
I know you never cared
and I don't know what to say
I know you'll neglect me
like you did yesterday

and what's more cruel than that
is when you refused my love
for you when I confessed that I want you to be mine
you ain't that perfect so how dare you reject my love
I'm sick and tired of you playing dumb with me

(back to chorus)
(bridge is just adlib)
(after bridge repeat chorus again)
(end)

i'm currently working on another song.
i haven't planted the chords yet..
but I'll post it here as soon as its finished..

peace out! o~
Oct 2, 2009 11:25 PM

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COSPLAY
-Submit Pictures or Videos of YOU in a cosplay.
-Any character will do.
You can post your works HERE since its the place for our vids.
-Winners will be judge by poll

POST YOUR WORKS HERE PLEASE.

Submission of entries will end on OCTOBER 24 since were doing the poll to decide the winner on the last week of October.
Oct 3, 2009 2:24 AM

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say, fatal..why don't you put yours here? i mean, as a sample..? XD
Oct 3, 2009 4:32 AM

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lol~
I don't have any...
Oct 3, 2009 7:50 AM

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ooooooooooh? c'mon fatal, don't be selfish.. share it with us.. you remember what you said?:
"You can post your works HERE since its the place for our vids."?
*bow*
Oct 4, 2009 4:15 AM

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yup I remember
but i dont recall any vids nor compositions that i've made =3
Oct 6, 2009 3:32 AM

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oh really? yours could be a very good example..and da 1st vid here..i'm the only customer here in this thread..u shuld be too!
Oct 9, 2009 9:02 PM

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???
but i dont have any vid
nor am i a good musician
sure i do poems and haikus but not compositions
Oct 26, 2009 12:04 AM

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what the heck!?!?!? what the heck's happening here!?!?!?
Dec 30, 2009 9:39 PM

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well for one I think miru placed this club on hiatus
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Feb 11, 2010 11:24 AM

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Erm..I made a little song a couple of months ago. Maybe you guys would like it?

Song name: The Long-Traveled Road

Lyrics:

Do you ever turn your head
And look up at the pale moon?
Stars glimmer and shine
Disappearing with the sun

Don’t look back from your path
Or the darkness will catch up with you
The past may bring you tears
But don’t stop fighting on
Its not about what’s wrong or right
Its about what your choices were
Light or dark, win or lose?
It depends on your strength of will

Broken bonds that never heal
A promise made and kept too well
Roads that lead to dead ends
(And the ones that lead us on)
Nightmares that turn real
The fears that we faced and overcame
Tears were made anyway
(Some never dried up)

Don’t you ever look up
And see the blue sky?
It may seem hard at times
But you’ll make it through

Don’t look back from your path
Or the darkness will catch up
The past may bring you tears
But don’t stop fighting on

Darkness that never dies
A light with the same fate
Equilibrium at hand
(We had finally won)
Friends reunited, and pains lost
A home to return to
Now we are safe
(Stars still gleam in the sky)
We never strayed from the path,
The darkness lost in the end
The past brought us tears
But we fought ahead.
Apr 20, 2010 10:45 AM

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A'ight, I find your lyrics quite interesting, but there's something missing...Rhythm?

On a side note, if you allow, I'd like to try singing those :3(well, I'm not that great singers, but trying a song it wasn't your composition helps in interpreting it, so I'd like to try). That may include, of course, the creation of other instruments(depends on my "music mood"). That is, of course, if you guys allow.

On a last note, I've got some things composed, but nothing complete, so no releases just yet :x.

Awaiting reply~.
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