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Nov 6, 2011 5:52 AM
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A cheap motel for out-of-towners looking for a place to stay...
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Nov 6, 2011 5:58 AM
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Saki enter the Motel and walk up to the man at the counter "Sir is there a gas station nearby?"
Nov 6, 2011 6:00 AM
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"Aye, 'bout quarter mile that way... you heading north to go skiing? Best stay here for a while, the weather report says icy rain acomin..." said the man at the counter...
Nov 6, 2011 6:09 AM
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"All right then" then after deciding where she was going to stay and pay for it Heading to her room she toss her snowborad on the bed and walk back to the main floor. "I going to go take a look around" and exit the motel.
Nov 6, 2011 11:43 PM
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Frei walked into her room and locked the door behind her. Sitting on her bed, she took off her glasses, leaned against the wall and closed her eyes.
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Nov 8, 2011 5:41 AM
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*footsteps ominously up and down the hallway...*
Nov 8, 2011 6:53 AM
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Frei wasn't completely knocked out yet she didn't open her eyes, either. She could hear the footsteps outside.

Hmmm..?
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Nov 8, 2011 6:57 AM
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Kyuu returns to the motel room that she had rented, yes this motel isn't intended for natives or locals, but she loved it here as the rent is cheap and the guy at the counter doesn't like to talk either, which is exactly what she needed.

Throwing the books onto the bed, she took out a set of new clothes and take a well-deserved shower, it has been a long day and she really needs to refresh herself.
Nov 8, 2011 8:43 AM
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Dusk is falling and its getting late...
Nov 8, 2011 10:30 AM

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Ava returns to the motel after getting some groceries. She decided to make beef curry and treat herself. Too bad she hasn't gotten any good photos yet. Oh well, there's always tomorrow.
Nov 8, 2011 10:35 PM

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Frei arose from her half-asleep state. She groggily walked from the bed towards the door. Turning the knob, she made sure it was locked. It would be bad to have thieves, or molesters, coming in. She went it the bathroom, turned on the faucet.

The sound of water was relaxing.
What makes you really feel secure is knowing that somebody more pathetic than yourself exists out there.
Nov 9, 2011 3:08 AM

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Kyuu wakes up in the middle of the night, she had enough sleep for the day. Its pretty normal for her to survive on 4 hours of sleep, she has been like that since childhood. At the beginning, her parents thought something was amiss and brought her to consult a doctor for her lack of sleep, but it turns out that she is perfectly fine.

Needing less sleep means she can spend the remaining hours of the day on more meaningful errands and plans, like reading the book she had borrowed from the town library.

She pulls out the chair and sat the book on the study table, with the night shade on, she started reading the book and making notes in her notebook, she figures that she should be able to finish the book by dawn.
Nov 9, 2011 3:29 AM

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At a window... a shadowy figure peers in...
Nov 9, 2011 9:04 AM

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Saki return back from the liberay with a sore back.She had fallen asleep there and so had fallen asleep in a bad position.Rubbing her back she decide to take a shower and started taking off her coat.
Nov 9, 2011 2:17 PM

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Ava wasn't looking at a window as she was preparing her food in the kitchen.
Nov 9, 2011 2:19 PM

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Ethan walks into the E-motel, slumped over and his bag slung under one shoulder. He had phoned ahead, booking a room for his stay in town, and was busy getting his key.

"Ethan Roberts" he says, giving his name to the clerk, who replies with a smile and a nod.

"Aye, Lad. Been expecting you. He's ya room key, 4A"

"Thanks"

Taking his key, he walks the stair to his room. He throws his bag on the floor, and slumps down in the bed.

Stop. Calm yourself. You're an idiot.
Nov 9, 2011 2:23 PM

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The window has a weak lock... it doesn't take much to jimmy it open... then figure enters the room and hears the shower running...
Nov 9, 2011 2:39 PM

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Saki exited the shower with a towel wrap around her.Saki didn't notice the window being open and put on some of cloths.
Nov 9, 2011 2:53 PM

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The figure sees a woman... he freezes in his tracks... holding a miner's pick...
the figure grins... half his teeth are missing...

meanwhile a janitor is walking down the hallway pushing his cart, blaring his radio loudly...
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After putting on her coat she remember that she didn't buy anything to eat.Sighing to herself and counting her money she again left her room for the 2d time that day when she ran into the janitor with his radio "You should tone that down" Saki shouted
Nov 9, 2011 3:22 PM

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Still grinning the stranger enters a door to an adjacent room... where another woman as at her desk reading into the night...
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Saki just watch as the man enter the room.Knowing that it was rude to look into another person room Saki deicde to let the man do his job.
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Nov 10, 2011 6:15 AM

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Exiting the shower, Frei went back to sitting on her bed. She rummaged through her bag, looking for her cellphone which she found right away. She flipped it open; there was no sign of any text messages, letting a soft sigh in response.
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Nov 10, 2011 8:18 AM

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Kyuu was completely focused on her book completely in her own world, this was the only time she would let her guard down, afterall a motel room should be pretty safe right? She was getting some less-known facts about this town, as she takes notes in her notebook, she begin to make connections, connections that would lead to secrets that would shock the country. But she aren't sure yet, not yet, she thought. She needs more than this little evidence to make the link, perhaps it is hidden somewhere, she needs to find out more.

Her desire for truth is leading her to a path of no return, she knows that, but its a litttle too late to change her mind now, she is determined to do whatever she can about it, and nobody is going to stop her in her tracks.

But little as she know, what would happen to her next.
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Nov 10, 2011 8:41 AM

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The being bheind stood their looking at her... he creept closer and closer... it wasn't until he was right behind her that you could smell his rancid breath whispering "Pur-etty" did she notice.
He grabbed her as she tried to stand up, and when she tried to scream he clamped his deforemd hand over her mouth. His hand had 2 fingers that looked like thumbs and an oversized true thumb she tried to spin around looking at the assailents face.
It was uglier and more deformed than most people would consider humanly possible it looked like a cross between a pig and a gorilla... He was the Pig-Face. and he grinned his rotten smile...
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Ava continued cooking her dinner, oblivious to what was going on only a couple of rooms away.
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Kyuu stares into the eyes of this being that has grabbed her from the back, except that its eyes is nothing like human, hollow and restless. This being remains her like a monster from some horror show, she tried to scream for her life but a deformed hand was pressed against her lips.

A foul smell was coming out and she wants to throw out, but she can't since she was been restrain. So what can she do now? She looks around and noticed a small cooking knife she used to cut her fruits, struggling against this being with all her strength, she managed to pick up the knife and cuts the being in its face.

It releases her and now she can have a good look at who tried to catch her..
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Throwing her cellphone down on her bed, Frei went through her bag again to get a notebook and her pen. She was planning to start writing the plot for her new book however she could not concentrate because of the loud noise outside. She hopped out of her bed, tucking in her switchblade in one of her pockets, she opened her door to see...
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Nov 11, 2011 5:17 AM

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The being was ugly... and sad looking. It was monster and a mutant, and it smelled like a dumpster. But it had sad look in its eyes... for about 2 seconds. It, despite the cut, lunged forward and tackled the woman and landed on top the bed pinning her under his immense weight. He looked down at her with lust in his eyes as he said again "Pur-etty..."
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"Damn it", she thought as she struggle against the immense strength that is working against her.

She decided to change approach, perhaps talking would work better than struggling.

"Who are you? What are you doing here?" She screamed, making an attempt to alert any occupants who might be available
Nov 11, 2011 9:25 AM

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Ava's keen ears pick up the scream and being as paranoid as she is, she decides to investigate. She puts her stove on low so she doesn't burn the curry or the rice and finds her gun. She stuffs it into her pocket without cocking it so it doesn't suddenly discharge in her pants and leaves her room, walking over and seeing Frei doing the same thing. Ava walks to her and says "You heard it too, huh?" in a low whisper. She pulls out her glock and cocks it before seeing this...this thing on top of a girl in the room! She shoots once in the air to alert other people to the scene and to try and scare off this beast, then again right into the beasts shoulder.
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The ugly mutant went "ROWR!" and screamed in pain grabbing its arm. He looked at the woman who shot him, grabbed his miner's pick and threw ita at her with inhuman strength! The miner's pick imbedded itself into Ava killing her instantly! she fell to the floor in a heap and the monster ran for the thin motel wall smashing it with his obscene strength and runnging into the night...

DEAD END: Ava Katherine Langer... murdered
Nov 11, 2011 1:53 PM

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Hearing the gunshot, Ethan bolts right up, almost dropping his cigarette in the process.
"What the hell?" he questions, moving to his door and opening it. He peers outside, holding his rapier for security.

His eyes widen at what he sees....

And female, obviously dead. The was a frickin miner's pick stuck in her head. And then he sees an hideous figure flee.

"Dang" he says, having moved and standing over the body "Its likes some B-Movie"

Stop. Calm yourself. You're an idiot.
Nov 11, 2011 1:59 PM

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Saki also heard the gunshot and ran back upstair when she saw the body "Holy !%$ on a *$#&!" and had to lean over the railing to throw up.
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"Pansy" comments Ethan at the newcomers reaction.
"Its Just a dead body" he continues, poking the body with his rapier to emphasize his point.

Stop. Calm yourself. You're an idiot.
Nov 11, 2011 2:29 PM

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"You heard it too,huh?"

Frei recognized the girl from earlier at the library. She didn't what she meant until she heard it herself. Scream coming out from one of the rooms. The girl pulled out her gun and shot, twice. In a blink of an eye, Ava was dead. An unrecognizable monster emerged and disappear just as fast.

Two more guests at the motel came to look at the scene.

"What in the world..."
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Nov 12, 2011 6:18 AM

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Officer Christina now had that "work face".She was rigid and cold.Having gloves,she and Silvie entered the motel and run on the stairs till the crime scene floor.Silvie got close to the body of the dead girl.Checking the pulseshe shaked her head."She is dead.Mom,call the chief and coroners.And quick.Anyone saw who did this?" the girl asked,acting like pro.Christina thrown a look to the body,to the turists,and shaked her head."You heard the miss.I'm police officer Christina,and you will all be in custody tonight to give declarations.If anyone saw anything please tell me now." she opened her cellphone and called someone.Soon,police was there."Jason,tell me,didn't we saw this girl at the library?" she than asked Jason,refering to the corpse.Meanwhile,Silvia asked everyone if they touched somehow the body.
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Jason nodded with his eyes narrowed, during his college courses he'd read a few murder files. He wanted to be a psychiatrist and a criminalogist... but looking at the real thing was a bit different, but nothing he couldn't handle. Jason said "Yeah... she was there and so were you Frie" looking at one of the girls standing there...
Nov 12, 2011 6:39 AM

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"Ava... I think was her name", Frei answered, crossing her arms.
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Nov 12, 2011 6:44 AM

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Jason looked at the girl still lieing on the bed in fear, the corpse on the ground with an old miner's pick in it, and the hole in the wall and he said "What the H*** happened?"
Nov 12, 2011 6:51 AM

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"Someone attacked the girl on the bed.Seems the other one,the dead on aimed o help,and she shoot the suspect,that looks like a mutant.The suspect killed the girl and than run away." Silvie explained them,as she just finished peeking and consulting whit the rest of the police crew."I see." Christina said calm closing the eyes of the dead girl,as she zipped the plastic bag where the corpse of the girl was just put in.
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Frei frowned. She liked Ava, who had a lot of ideas that she could probably use as material for her book. But, sadly, her new friend was killed by some unknown... creature.

"I don't know", she said in response to Jack, as she tried to approach the frightened woman.
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Nov 12, 2011 6:57 AM

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"Miss Frei,I suggest you to move.The woman on that bed is the most important witness.Nobody from outside the police should speak to her,considering her shock state not even we will bother her too much.lease retract." Christina spoke on a sharp tone to Frei.
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Muttering an apology, Frei walked back in front of her room door.
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Nov 12, 2011 7:04 AM

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Kyuu sits on the edge of the bed, she is still in this state of shock, she wanted someone to help her but not someone dying while saving her. Who is that guy anyway, how can a creature like him exist?

Looking at the corpose,tears are gathering and she mutter a silent prayer
Nov 12, 2011 7:18 AM

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"Oi oi oi..." said Jason hustling over to the girl sitting on the bed, he got on his knees and looked at her eye level and said "Its alright... its okay..."
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Christina wanted to give tears out,she had enough sadness for a day.But she was at work.She was supposed to be col,to take anything that could appear whit cold calm.Getting up form the corpse side and making a sign to the mans that were going to take it to the morgue,she walked over to the girl sitting on the bed."Miss,we are here to help you.I promise you that nothing bad will happen anymore." she said,putting a warm hand on the woman's shoulder."May I know your name?" she added kneeling,to eb at the same eye level.Silvie got behind Jason,and smiled weak to the woman,bowing her head low.To the other witnesses,to the staff,seh said to wait outside;too much people would scare the girl.
Nov 12, 2011 7:36 AM

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Kyuu looks at Jason and Christina, she could sense concern but she don't trust anyone anymore, and after what just happened, she got another reason to do so.

She calmer now, her mind is racing, that creature looks familar, she had seen or read that somewhere before, but where? She pushes Christina's hand and rushes to the study table, where her notebook rests.
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Frei simply watched as the events unfolded in front of her.
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Nov 12, 2011 8:01 AM

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"Miss?" asked Jason watching her...
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