| Awesome poem XD Happy thanksgiving Indeed ^_^ |
| Nice one, happy thanksgiving |
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| I'm not holding my breath I'm tired of trying I've got no will to live In a world slowly dying... |
| roses are red violets are blue why the fuck won't anyone see snowpiercer?it truly is an amazing movie im sorry,i never was much of a poet |
| Beautiful... Write a poem about me. Here is what you will need. I am rather sadistic, I am a perv, I love my family, I am indifferent about most people. Now here is my view on talent. People are like rain drops falling into a pond. The size of the raindrop depends on your talent or in other words your potential. Now the pond can represent a bunch of things but I like to think it represents man kinds future. Those with barely any talent barely makes a difference on the pond. The more talent you have the more ripples you create. The ripples can represent many things as well but for me it represents change or the potential to change, to make the future better or worse. Now the truly gifted in other words Geniuses, are hail, they splash. Chu feel me? Now create a poem about me including my thoughts on pople |
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| I think I should say The density of the raindrop depends on your talent. Might sound better |
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| A Perv, A Sadist, More like Neurotic Narcissist You Love your family you say, but that has a twist You don't see them as equals, just pawns of a kind For your indifference is a cancer, merely clouding your mind Your views are not skewed, nothing less than a gospel And those that cause waves, we call them an apostle The ones that are weak, get consumed in this water Forgotten and Unknown, not even fit be a martyr Those that are gifted, make use of the unworthy Stepping over the corpses, and furthering our story Bringing waves and tsunamis, for better and worse Everyone must accept it, for it's a gift and a curse Even though these waters may be unkind It's merely a truth from Deflower's mind ^ really curious about how knight is gonna interpret Deflower |
thereisonlyoneNov 29, 2014 9:48 PM
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| I shall clap *CLAPS* This is very good. Other than me seeing my family as pawns. I would give anything for my family (including life). Plus I am the runt 0.0 but still amazing ass poem! I shall applaud you more *CLAP CLAP CLAP* |
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| lol --just wanted to see if I could pull that off real quick couldn't think of how to wrap in all those aspects of you, so I decided to make you a bit evil so I could use it all at once ^ basically this was going to be a stupidly long poem if I added in those aspects using the first idea I had Thanks for the props |
thereisonlyoneNov 29, 2014 8:33 PM
| How long will it last |
| Still props. It was pretty amazing |
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| im gonna take it up a notch and write you a rap deflower-kun uh,uh, yea open your ears and listen hard you kouhais this is a verse for a guy named deflower, go to the kitchen and make him a cake bitch, here's some change for the flour. he's saying weird things that creep me out about rain-drops, his avatar pic is a naked buff mikasa, check this out as my imaginary beat drops. he means business,this guy is sadistic, he will bring you pain bitch, but about his situation i'm rather optimistic. he really liked gurren lagann but i think its overrated, like seriously,how the fuck do underground people adapt to a hi-tech futuristic society in less than ten years?? , i preferred kill la kill,even though the fanservice is beyond exxagurated. anyway,i got side-tracked,this is all i had to say about this old perv remember,GOD'S IN HIS HEAVEN,ALL'S RIGHT WITH THE WORLD, as said by NERV. peace. i hope this is as fun for you to read, as it was for me to write :p pls dont hate,im a white boy,rap isnt really in me.im eager though to writing more for you if you would want me to ^^ |
| My king, you should make a rap thread for him, that way you get the best of both worlds from my poetry and his rap ^_^ |
KnightAngel said: My king, you should make a rap thread for him, that way you get the best of both worlds from my poetry and his rap ^_^ dunno man,it might wear out quickly that way xD |
| In honor of the 20th person since my arrival I'll tell a story or try anyway xD There once was a dad and he had a boy The boy treated all people worse than a toy He disrespected his mother, even fought with others Age 14 he makes, and then born twin brothers The babies come home, from the hospital But Onii-chan's attitude, still quite volatile He moans and whines, hey those are mine Refusing to adapt, only he may shine One year would pass, he only grew more crass Finally Papa says, I got something for that ass Over the years, this child's hair had grown Never would he be still, everyone had known So this day Papa, the last laugh, he would Using some pills, his son to sleep, it should The punishment is ready, the boy sits steady It's been a long time, Papa's scissors are ready The trigger for this, birth of those twins Value of the first son fell, for his sins Smiling there, from ear to ear These blades of Papa's, one might fear A cut here, A cut there, the red slides down Another snip, A slash, it's covering the ground It's sad to waste, was just so beautiful But as a man, Papa must be dutiful Spinning the chair, round and round Cuts so thick, it's shedding pounds Last piece hanging on, by a thread A deed well done, Papa nods his head Ah in an Hour, I must meet Momma there She'll smile freely, for I cut his neck not his hair This plan started two years ago Got her pregnant with twins, our plan was a go Yea it might be slightly messed up xD Thanks Knight |
thereisonlyoneDec 2, 2014 2:59 PM
| How long will it last |
| Its so f*cked up... Its beautiful :') |
| What...What...What...What Right...In...The...Butt A Finger of the Stranger Violation, You Wake Up filled with Anger 3 A.M, Taken from your home Crept inside, while you slept alone Try to scream, but he's got the gag Suffocation, Your eyes plea, he does a finger wag You look like you've had enough But he's only starting to get rough Hours Later the deed is done Completion, Smile on his face, Knows he's won Just Over 5 months Later A friend reads this in the paper About a murder filled with malice Deletion, Your eyes look down at hands so callus Grinning slightly at the reminiscence Left you alive, Mistake of his existence Found the Stranger just last week Retribution, The end of his story was more than bleak This Story Has Come to a Close But From This Buds a New Rose You've Changed, Now Hunting The World's Rotten Evolution, Addicted to the kill, Your First Will Never be Forgotten [b]WTF[/b] is wrong with me ....This damn song's fault at 2 AM |
thereisonlyoneDec 11, 2014 6:56 PM
| How long will it last |
| Strong, Courageous, Like an Iron Fist Not Once Your Convictions, to be dismiss Your will It is absolute, Nothing less than the truth But That man was innocent, Neck wrung still like a noose Some Judge You Are, Spouting Convenient Verdicts What about that family, You protect unjust pricks So Where, Exactly, Has All That Honor Gone Bought By The System, Now You're Just a Pawn ^^ For All the BS Cops and Judges Lately |
thereisonlyoneDec 11, 2014 5:56 PM
| How long will it last |
| A Man Named Deflower He Once Rose to Power Cheers and Jeers The Many Citizens Would Shower Unbeknownst, Soon would be the Hour Started in November, This Club Did One by One, Members closed the Lid Rants and Raves Unseen Tears That the People Hid The Mad King was Killed, I kid I kid Epitaph of Deflower (LMDFY) - He Was the Kind of guy that showed us how to Swing the Bat, Hit The Ball, but He Never Quite Made it Home In The Words of a Wise Man "Getting on Base Counts for Nothing, If you don't get the Points" |
thereisonlyoneJan 7, 2015 12:11 PM
| How long will it last |
| so we are still doing that? thereisonlyone you will get your rap verse soon.... ....soon i tell you |
| LoL No Idea if anyone else even checks this Just Did It cuz I felt something was needed After He Left his Own Club ^ that and all of the poems I've put here are the first poems I've attempted since like a class assignment in like 6th grade --So I was just having fun playing with something I used to be a lil' good at |
| How long will it last |
| Let me try it for some change. I am not an angel, nor a man i am a monster with filthy hands, My guilt i shall not hide, however i will suck you dry. Vampire that is waiting the dark that is me and i shall not die. Hows that for a first try? |
| ^ that was quite decent The first stanza was a really good start |
| How long will it last |
| Thanks ill keep trying.And hey thereisonlyone lets keep this group alive! |
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