NTR Redemption Suggestions?

revan193 said:
I've found a new NTR anime, "Marriage Blue".

Spider3ite said:
@Shelid0731 Aw man that sucks i hope you find a safe place and get your self situated before you start anything that's story related.

Good Luck Man

greed2 said:
Well, I already presented this in the past. If you want to kill a gang, here then go ahead.
http://hentai2read.com/drug_sex_life_defied_black_haired/
Animewise, you can try Inshitsu Otaku ni Ikareru Kanojo where there is also a gang you can kill. For "rehabilitation" you can pull a similar reverse situation with Milk Money or like this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQpq8cHKfOI

Or if you want to kill just one person, instead of an entire gang, then also here; if you are using the pill again.
http://hentai2read.com/unsweet_inoue_ai_plus/
http://exhentai.org/g/639632/0c732709cb/ If you can kill "porkey pig" then that has a nice ring.

If you want a "weak" looking MC, then you can try Subete wo Kaeta Ichinichi, a small oneshot, or [Nagare Ippon] I Will Protect You.

For Kagachi-sama Onagusame Tatematsurimasu – Netorare Mura Inya Hanashi The Animation, you can imagine how the MC may likely start burning a lot of stuff which includes his own home.

Of course, while the MC is oblivious about his situation, if you want to work on Tachibana-san Chi no Dansei Jijou then you can put a situation where the MC is shown what is going on, and get put him in rage mode.

Anyway, I am glad if my "cure" was helpful to you and others. I'm immune to, or at least able to recover faster from, NTR because of my cure. A little surprising on how my idea, about Kyouko's son, stirred up a lot of inspiration. But yeah, glad I can help. After all, for Kyouko's son, I wrote a lot about him because of how it would be a nice touch if he resembled some "mentally irreparable" characters.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8VPDTQViU3c
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VeglALgbUyU

After all, for Kyouko's son, I had always enjoyed trying to imagine how he can be incorporated with a nice tone in his voice.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VjbWYXGkMZk

Spider13ite said:
To me the worst Netorare moment for me was the Soredemo Tsuma wo Aishiteru for 3 reasons

1 - In the first episode The MC (Shuuichi) has a nice wife (Nanami) that loves him dearly but, then a old fat man(Kamata) shows up and blackmails her for sex while he doesn't know about it.

2 - The 2nd episode where Kamata is have sex again with Nanami, she wants a baby so that she can draw off Shuuichi that she is have sex with the manager by force, he also invites Nanami's Co-worker and little sister to the fray while kamata was done for the day Nanami's old classmate from high school shows up with a delivery and takes care of kamata for her but repay's him with her body while the husband come home early from work, he may think that something's up with the clothes on the floor.

3 - MC's wife is thinking that he was not satisfied with her so she went drinking with a friend from next door (Shinagawa), but he was the one who broke up those 2 altogether when he saw the MC at a sex service place that hosted by the woman from the 'Full recovery' story Shouko. Shinagawa sent a picture of the two of them 2 Nanami so that he can make a move on her so that she can leave the MC for him, after some time with Shinagawa, Nanami fell in love with him and wanted him to be her new husband. The next Day Shuuichi finds a divorces papers and her wedding ring on a table telling him "I'm sorry", but after 5 months we see the MC and his former wife walking with Shinagawa and pregnant.

To me that is one of the worst Netorare i seen besides the other ones you posted for your stories because Shuuichi had his wife cheat on him multiply time even if it was unwillingly she could have gone to the police or told him about it but does nothing and takes it. Shinagawa take advantage of her when she finds out Shuuichi does cheat 1 time but wont have sex with her she went with the more good looking guy instead and marries him and leaves the MC for himself. He miserable pale looking now and looks as if he doesn't eat. That fucked up man...

Sheild0731 said:
I must be getting burned out, or rusty or something. Cause I've been going all wrong with my own story. For one, it was (probably) a big mistake putting more than 1 girl this time. And the NTR part was kind of cliche. I was going for something a little severe, but instead, it's the stuff you see in Yakin Byoutou (Known in the states as Nigh Shift Nurses).

So yeah, it looks like I might have to re-write this thing. Oh god.......... <=(

greed2 said:
Is this going to be the similar to True Blue, where you make the MC finally leave his girl and move on, but he first he plans to something like possibly bomb everyone or just kill everyone, including the girl, in some other manner.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91dBFO_Jbmk

greed2 said:
That's why I suggested "kill everyone with a bomb." At the very least, get some submachine gun to kill everyone, as they have their orgy, to then spray everyone (where the scum are still barely alive) with gasoline to then do some suicidal "burn it all" while Kazuki, who snaps, said " if this is going to be the same, in the next life, then let's just stay in hell together."

Anyway, like how I put in my first post , about him, personalty changes can be easy to imagine in the weak Kazuki's case as he snaps and develops a dark side. I would also imagine he would strangle his own little sister and, after killing his wife and children along with those old men, places her among their corpse and then set everything, including himself, ablaze. Of course, for those old guys, if they are still alive then Kazuki could cut off their tounges since the kid may note that they talk about much in their videos and Kazuki is merely doing a "favor" by "fixing" their bad habit which lead him to snap.

greed2 said:
That was just a sugestion, not a forciful idea, unless you have it already planned then just go with that. You can chuck my ideas if you have a better one in mind.

But your idea "I ended up playing the 911 card again just like I did with 3 of my stories. The old geezers are in Prison, and Rinka is sent to Boarding School in Bagdad Iraq (That place is hell for girls)" may be a little overboard on Rinka and lenient on the old guys. Since I think those old geezers should suffer for what they have done, by the hands of the MC; not to mention I have no idea where one can afford to send Rinka to Iraq, it saves money just to kill her or "educate" her, to where she no longer thinks she is human but a dog, at home. But, again, that is my thoughts. You can go ahead with your idea if that seems more appealing.

p.s please do not take my text so seriously, much less its initial looking tone. Next time I'll put this, (monotonic tone in use) so it doesn't sound so serious. Anything I put is just a suggestion, for future reference, so if you got your plot already in line then go on with that one.

greed2 said:
? What hapened to sending her to Iraq? But I can understand if Kazuki ran into a budget cut.

Anyway, you could have her lobotomized.

p.s I was only being subtle with my "joker references" such as having Kazuki saying, before he kills everyone, "goodbye bitches," as he traps everyone, makes his anouncement to give everyone dispair, and destroy everyone with a bomb. So don't take them seriously.

Sheild0731 said:
Story is almost done. In the end, I ended up doing greed's idea and killed off everyone in that room (Sorry, no Joker reference). It would've ended there, but I have to add a sex scene so that adult-fanfiction.org doesn't delete it later. That website is dedicated to sex stories. So I have to include at least one sex scene.

Thing is, I'm not sure as to which. I could have Rinka lobotomized and raped by the guy who gave Kazuki the bomb, or I could write some fantasy sex scene with Kazuki & Otome.