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Let the plotting begin!
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Oct 6, 2008 9:05 AM
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Great, the topic's open :D

So Midori-chan, you mentioned that you have some ideas...
How about sharing them now ? Will we be writing a comedy, action, romance, or
other genre in this fanfic?
If you ask me, we can start easy, and then we'll see where the story takes us...
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Oct 6, 2008 9:11 AM
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I agree with natsuki-chan! ^^

Please share your ideas with us first! ^^
Oct 6, 2008 9:39 AM
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Of course you do Akane-chan :-)

And if anyone wants to participate in this, they're welcome of course!
This is a public club, and the more the better :D
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Oct 6, 2008 9:48 AM
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Anyone is welcomed to participate in this! ^__^

Please do not be shy 'cause we would like to share your ideas too! ^^
Oct 6, 2008 9:55 AM
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ok, i have a small idea, but i have no idea about the genre yet.

Natsuki Kuga is leading a double life, she pretends to be what we see in the anime (ice queen, lone wolf...etc) while in reality, she's the complete apposite.
she shares her life with her 3 older brothers, and one day, she is discovered by none other than Shizuru Fujino.

well, this is all i have for now, i'll post more when i come up with something.

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Oct 6, 2008 10:05 AM
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That sounds like an interesting idea! ^^ What do you think, natsuki-chan? ^^
Oct 6, 2008 10:21 AM
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I agree...
Just tell me more about the plot.

Is she working or going to school?
Has special powers or not?
And where do they meet?

And I like the two-faced part. We can have some scenes where she is teased by Shizuru (as always xD) in front of other people, so I guess that there can be funny scenes as well :D
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Oct 6, 2008 10:36 AM
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I agree! Shizuru teasing Natsuki is a must have in every ShizNat fic! XD
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natsuki-chan-bg said:
I agree...
Just tell me more about the plot.

Is she working or going to school?
Has special powers or not?
And where do they meet?

And I like the two-faced part. We can have some scenes where she is teased by Shizuru (as always xD) in front of other people, so I guess that there can be funny scenes as well :D


Shizuru is in the school, but i'm not sure who she is, Teacher, student...etc
this idea is an AU (Alternate Universe) so there is no special powers
i thought about their meeting and the best thing i came up with is this:
Natsuki forgets her text book at school, Shizuru finds it then she looked up Natsuki's address and went there to give it to her, the door is answered by one of Natsuki's brothers, while they are walking towards the living room, Shizuru saw a very girly Natsuki, but Natsuki kept denying it saying that what Shizuru saw was Natsuki's twin sister, Shizuru told her that she never met Natsuki's twin at school, Natsuki said the her twin has a social phobia and is home schooled xDD

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Oct 6, 2008 10:51 AM

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AU! Aw, sheez... why didn't I think of that? XD

I love it so far, midori-chan... sounds very original (in your style, that is) :3
Oct 6, 2008 10:58 AM

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Thanks Akane-kun ^^

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Oct 6, 2008 11:14 AM

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You're welcomed, anytime, precious! :3

Hey, precious, I need to go now... 2.00 am here! T_T

I'll see you tomorrow, okay? Night! ^^
Oct 6, 2008 3:27 PM

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Ok I like it so far!
Than let's say that they are students in a school and maybe they can even have the same roles, like Natsuki a delinquent like we planned, and Shizuru is like she was in school, student's body president and one of the most respected people in school...

As for the girly Natsuki, I recommend something with fluffy stuff, like her room is pink and filled with bears, dogs, cats etc etc

And I also have another recommendation.
How about we use this thread to plan the fic, and discuss it/the story,
and we open up another thread where we just write the fanfic.
I mean, it will be confusing if we write it here along with planning it XD

What do you think?
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Oct 6, 2008 4:28 PM

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natsuki-chan is right ^^

We need another thread to write the fanfic itself 'cause writing it here will be very confusing! XD BTW, are you gonna make Natsuki sorta like the black sheep of her family 'cause I think that will be cool too. Her brothers like picking on her and stuff but hey, I just wanna know what you think! ^^
Oct 6, 2008 4:44 PM

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Hm... I agree, and it fits in the profile.
Outside, she's a cold person, pretending to like only her motorbike,
but on the inside, she's a shy girl :D
I like it XDDD

But there should be a reason she's like that... it'll make the story more interesting XD
Like someone hurt her/her family member left her, or something like that...

And I think that if we all agree on everything written above,
our first scene should be in the school, with Natsuki/s cool entrance and people staring saying how cool this delinquent is xD
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Oct 6, 2008 4:51 PM

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Just what I had in mind for the first scene! B)

That and no one knows about her background at first until Shizuru finds out about it. There should be a reason why she acts all cold in school is 'cause she does not want to be treated the same way as she was by her family ^^
Oct 6, 2008 5:18 PM

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Hmm... that's ok too, but maybe we need a stronger reason...
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Oct 6, 2008 6:04 PM

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Hmm... what do you suggest? :)

We can say that she was constantly picked on by her brothers since she was very young. Can we somehow put it that Natsuki has started liking mayo since she was young and because of this, here brothers begin to label her weird and called her mean names like "mayo-face" or whatever. Sorry, but I really like coming up with character backgrounds! XD
Oct 6, 2008 10:39 PM

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Ok ok that's good :D

I'm just talking about her cold exterior!
It can be also because of her brothers, but I thinks that it will be better
if she also has a strong motive behind being all cold with people...
So then the impression will be better when Shizuru opens her up
to her, and that helps Natsuki open up to world (if that's the plan xD)...
I mean it is an AU, but some things can stay the same... I mean, that's how it happened in Hime, more or less... Natsuki hated the world, and Shizuru helped her get over it...
But we'll do that part, cause they didn't explore it much in anime,
so we'll have a lot of funny scenes concerning that :D

Maybe we just need Midori-chan to enlighten us, yes :D?
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Oct 6, 2008 10:50 PM

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A strong motive behind all this, eh?

That is gonna take more than just her brothers for that to happen! XD Natsuki is cold with people and have this "against the world" aura around her and and you mentioned that we need something stronger behind it. Perhaps something that has left her traumatized for much of her younger years and decided to change because of that incident? But I am not too sure what it will be yet... Hmm...
Oct 7, 2008 2:49 AM

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Midori-chan, help your young padawans XD!!!!!!!
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Oct 7, 2008 3:34 AM

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Hey, relax... -__-

She might like our ideas, who knows? ^__^
Oct 7, 2008 8:31 AM

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Ah, but in this area, I'm the Padawan and you guys are the Masters :DDD
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Oct 7, 2008 8:41 AM

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Hehehe... ^^'

But don't you worry, I am sure midori-chan would like our ideas! We will just have to wait until she gets online to give her opinions! ^^b
Oct 7, 2008 9:14 AM

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I like all ur ideas so far, but i don't think that her brother's teasing will traumatize her like that.

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A strong motive behind all this, eh?

That is gonna take more than just her brothers for that to happen! XD Natsuki is cold with people and have this "against the world" aura around her and and you mentioned that we need something stronger behind it. Perhaps something that has left her traumatized for much of her younger years and decided to change because of that incident? But I am not too sure what it will be yet... Hmm...


let's try this:
when Natsuki was younger she was out with her parents when they had an accident and she was the only survivor, then she moved to live with her brothers, as if losing her parents was bad enough, the kids at the new school bullied her (she is in middle school by this time) but she kept it all to herself and never told her brothers about it, during her last year in middle school, one of her brothers found out about what was happening, then they decided to move again, they went to Fukka and Natsuki started high school there.

what do you think about this?
oh, and i agree with opening the other thread, writing the fic here will be confusing :3

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Oct 7, 2008 9:24 AM

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Your idea is splendid as usual, my precious! ^__^

But how was she bullied in school? Was it bad or was it terrible?
Oct 7, 2008 9:35 AM

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Thanks ^____^
I have to watch the next episode of 'Life' to answer that >__<

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Oct 7, 2008 9:42 AM

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I like it :D!
Didn't I say that we need midori-chan XD?

Ok then, what are out other elements here?
I'm guessing that when she starts school in Fuuka, all of the old character will appear at one time...

What do you think about putting a little action in it?
I always liked comedies and dramas with a little action in it :D
But we need some kind of third party then....

And when do you think we should start writing?
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Oct 7, 2008 9:43 AM

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I do hope its not as bad as the idea I used to have involving Haruka when she was still in middle school. Apparently, she managed to get herself into fist fights with several male students due to the fact that they made fun of her... XD

But what can I say? Your idea is better than natsuki-chan or mine! ^^b
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It's your choice to make, what characters you want to add?

@ Natsuki-chan

do have something specific in mind?

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Oct 7, 2008 10:21 AM

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Besides Natuski and Shizuru? Who do you suggest... I was thinking few characters from Mai-HiME to be featured would not hurt ^^b

I also agree with natsuki-chan that there should be some action it in, and a sprinkle of comedy and drama would not hurt either! :3
Oct 7, 2008 10:30 AM

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yeah, me too we'll use any characters we need ^^

about the bullying, 'Life' has the worst type of bullying IMO, next episode seems really terrible, this J-Drama is providing me with good material for this fic, but i suggest you watch it too.

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You watch that J-Drama in television or something? I might wanna watch it on the internet now that you told me about it. There are some Malaysian/Singaporean dramas that I can use to get ideas too! ^^b
Oct 7, 2008 10:41 AM

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I watch it on the internet, i never marathoned something before, but i'm already watching ep4 now it's getting intense!

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Oct 7, 2008 10:49 AM

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Should I watch it to get some ideas, midori=chan? ^^

But I do hope that Natsuki did not suffer as much as Haruka does in my idea! XD
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midori-chan, natsuki-chan... sorry for my departure but its 2.00 am here and I need to go to bed. Go ahead and discuss without me, I don't mind at all but I will join in as soon as I can get online! ^^b So, goodnight precious! And goodnight natsuki-chan! :3
Oct 7, 2008 11:19 AM

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Goodnight ^^

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Oct 7, 2008 2:59 PM

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Hey, sorry for my absent all day, I've been busy ...

Ok as for characters, we can put any from the show.
Midori-sensei and Akane-chan of course :DDD
(there has to be a scene with a drunk Midori XD).

As for the action element, we need to bring in a third party then,
someone (or an organization) who'll be the bad guy.

And goodnight to you too :D
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Hey, sorry for my absent all day, I've been busy ...

Ok as for characters, we can put any from the show.
Midori-sensei and Akane-chan of course :DDD
(there has to be a scene with a drunk Midori XD).

As for the action element, we need to bring in a third party then,
someone (or an organization) who'll be the bad guy.

And goodnight to you too :D
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Three characters who shares names with us huh? I love it ^__^

a scene with a drunk Midori would be hilarious! XD

I also think that the idea for an organization would be cool! Nice one, natsuki-chan! B)
Oct 8, 2008 11:07 AM

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a HiME fic can't be a HiME fic without a drunk Midori xDD

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Oct 8, 2008 1:49 PM

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True XD
So when do we start writing ?
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Oct 8, 2008 5:18 PM

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We have to wait for midori-chan to give an answer for that ^__^

But I agree that a drunk Midori will make a Mai-HiME fic a Mai-HiME fic ^__<
Oct 8, 2008 5:39 PM

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Yes, she's the Master here XDD

Ok I got a question....
are Natsuki and Shizuru gonna hook up in our fanfic?
Cause I don't know how exactly I can write about that....
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Oct 8, 2008 5:44 PM

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She has been busy since starting college, so I can understand (not to mention she has not replied to my PM! XD)

Well, since Shizuru is the first person Natsuki opened up to in this fic, I am pretty sure that the two of them will hook-up! ^^b In the beginning they will start out as friends first and got closer and closer at time progresses!
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It's ok, we're in a no hurry :D

Ah, ok... it's just that I'm not too keen on them hooking up, but ok...:D
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Well, I was just giving out a suggestion ^__^

Another suggestion is that as you mentioned earlier, Akane and Midori would be featured in this fic as well. Thus, we can make Akane, Midori and Natsuki good friends as tribute to the MAL friendship between akane-soir86, midori-chan89 and natsuki-chan-bg ^^b
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Ahahahaha, nice one XD
And we still need to think on the action motive, what will it be...
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Hahahaha! Yes, I know... XD

Since this is an alternate universe and none of the girls would have any powers, and you suggested that there should be an organization of some sort... Hmm...
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