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Nov 20, 2013 1:04 PM
#51
| *shrug* well I guess I was too late. Anyway, that was some more info on how a character can use my "devil's contract." Feel free to use what I put if you plan to make another fanfic, no one says you need to make only one fanfic on True Blue. |
Nov 20, 2013 1:42 PM
#52
| That's true. But sadly, that's not how I do things. My creativity is like a bounty hunter. Once it hits it's target, It moves on. |
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Nov 21, 2013 1:00 PM
#53
| FINISHED! After a week no less. Here you go. --> *Link moved to first post My next story is gonna be something different. But for now, I'm taking it easy. |
Sheild0731Nov 23, 2013 4:50 PM
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Nov 23, 2013 4:53 AM
#55
| I haven't decided yet. Though I noticed Night Shift Nurses (Yakin Byoutou) is in the NTR list. I might come up with something eventually. |
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Nov 24, 2013 4:32 PM
#56
| FYI: I moved the links to my stories to the fist post so that anyone (assuming there is anyone) who is interested in reading won't have to browse all over the place. I even had them listed. |
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Jan 12, 2014 1:19 PM
#57
| Just curious, do you do crossovers? I was thinking a crossover with Kyouko's son, who you made into a permanent demon, and Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu. I can imagine Kyouko's son, being enrolled in the school at Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu where he witnesses Naoya Jinguuji sick performance. Like Yukiya Naruse (code geass), I would imagine him putting a bomb at the school, killing almost everyone that assists Naoya Jinguuji, the only ones spared are probably Hoshino. Naoya Jinguuji was framed as the person responsible for the bomb. While Sakura Makihara dislike men, she is fond of Kyouko’s son, who shares a similar history to her and saved her, while treating him like a little brother in front of others who know and fear him due to his barbaric nature, something which Akira reluctantly lets her do. Despite the constant cold attitude, Kyouko’s son displays to most people, Sakura Makihara is seen to be exceptionally fond of him mainly due to how she sympathize him and is one of the people that understand just how “broke” he is. Like Kyouko’s son, Sakura is “broken” in a sense and doesn't mind helping him with the jobs given to him for the Yakuza. Sakura Makihara has a unique relationship with Kyouko’s son that is unlike that with any of her other people aside from her mother. She generally treats him like an actual little brother, even insisting to him that he callles her “Onee-chan,” and bestows on him physical affection when they are together, although he does not reciprocate as he believes that this interferes with his ability to do his job; though he shows noticeable signs of annoyance when she does something like jumping behind his back. As she is aware of his hatred to scum, such as Shin who stole his mother, she respect his views and does nothing to stop against his acts of destructive carnage on scum. |
Jan 12, 2014 6:21 PM
#58
| I don't mind doing crossovers. But I have to read (or watch) Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu before doing anything else. |
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Jan 13, 2014 6:31 PM
#59
| trust me, I have a hunch you would want the Akira, you made, to destroy that school. |
Jan 14, 2014 12:06 PM
#60
| Okay then. It's gonna take some time though. I got some real-life things to deal with plus (as mentioned), I have to read Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu (once I find it). |
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Jan 14, 2014 4:52 PM
#61
| That is fine sir, take your time. Hope everything goes well. And try not to get sick when you read Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu; to me, a tasteless plot is the same as eating poison. But, I assume you will always have your "cure" with you. |
Jan 14, 2014 9:19 PM
#62
| @sheild0731 I like what you are doing with these fanfics. Whenever I watch stuff and it's NTR, i always feel for the MC (especially since I went through something like this) and the fanfics you do are very interesting. I know i'm new to this but there was one show that got to me that I think deserves a fanfic for people like us. It was wedding blues http://myanimelist.net/anime.php?id=16187. I don't know about the rest of the club memebers but I think there needs to be some justice for this |
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Jan 15, 2014 12:21 AM
#63
| or http://www.mangawindow.com/manga/original-work-unsweet-niiduma-nakatani-naho . After reading your stories you could work wonders on this manga. |
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Jan 15, 2014 8:00 PM
#64
| Well thanks. But now I'm in the beginning of another request. As for the 2 you mentioned... Marriage Blue: That Anime is left unfinished (For nearly a year). It only has 1 episode. I need to see all of it before I do something about it. Unsweet New Wife Nakatani Naho: That one's gonna take some time too. Until I have everything back on track, hang tight. |
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Jan 16, 2014 4:40 PM
#65
| If it starts as NTR. it's likely to end as ntr especially in anime. There is no ntr where the guy fights back at all, or wins for that matter or gets the girl back. So you can pretty much guess how those are gonna end. Sadly. |
| NaruHina!! |
Jan 16, 2014 4:53 PM
#66
| And to Sheild0731, i read your fanfiction. While i get that you are trying but to tell the truth, it's not enough. All your characters take back the cum dumb of a whore that NTR'ed them. Even in you original, IT'S BITTER. It could have been sweet if he didn't take her back. But he did... and then you just basically threw us the bird as you had her say. "I am magically a virgin again am all yours despite the fact i threw everything away on the day of wedding infront ofall our families for a guy i knew for a day" Hope i didn't make you angry, if i did. Well now we are on the same page. Your AF's were just a lighter version of ntr. The only one that i'd say was mildly gratifying is that one with the boy and mom. I am planning on making a anti-ntr fic on FF.net soon. I will give you my user once i have done it and hope you read it. |
| NaruHina!! |
Jan 16, 2014 5:12 PM
#67
| RELAX!! I'll re-write them sometime later (1 or 2 maybe). Until then, patience. |
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Jan 18, 2014 8:38 PM
#68
| So I've decided to make some changes. My NTR Redemption series will now be called NTR Revenge. That being said, I'll be re-writing the endings for False Engagement & True Blue Redemption. So the endings for these stories will end up like it did in Revenge of the Son, otherwise, we'll have "The Macross Effect". So until this is taken care of, requests and ideas are temporarily voided. The stories will still be there on the first page. Only it'll be edited. "The Macross Effect" - The guy losses his girlfriend/wife to a freak only to end up with someone better. Things go well for the guy while things get worse for the ex-lover. Realizing that what she did ruined her life, the ex-lover makes a reconciliation attempt. But the guy turns her down/rejects her stating "You made your bed, You sleep in it". |
Sheild0731Jan 20, 2014 8:53 PM
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Jan 19, 2014 2:48 PM
#69
| will you keep the old endings or just scrap them entirely? |
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Jan 20, 2014 6:13 AM
#70
McSwagger said: will you keep the old endings or just scrap them entirely? They'll be gone. It seems people want to see the victimized men with another chick, and when the ex comes back begging for mercy, the guy says "Fuck You you whore!". Or in the case of Revenge of the Son, the victimized men vows revenge. He kills the one responsible, and breaks his ex-lover into his human pet (Like in the manga Inazuma). |
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Jan 20, 2014 9:56 AM
#71
| Are they up and where are they? |
| NaruHina!! |
Jan 20, 2014 8:54 PM
#72
| The ending for False Engagement is now edited. Simply click on the story on the first page. Only the 5th chapter is edited. Everything else is in tact. |
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Jan 21, 2014 11:22 AM
#73
| Hmm, i'd say better. I wished you had him reject her in person like she did to him. And what else, I don't like you gave him a 42 year old woman to fill the void. I mean it's just my little problem, she's past those horny thirties and is pushing to 50... And she is with a guy in his twenties... But that's a whole other story then the problem i had. Good job, I liked this ending better. Would have been better if he rejected her in person. "You chose your bed and now you're laying in it". |
| NaruHina!! |
Jan 21, 2014 4:58 PM
#74
daichisama said: Hmm, i'd say better. I wished you had him reject her in person like she did to him. And what else, I don't like you gave him a 42 year old woman to fill the void. I mean it's just my little problem, she's past those horny thirties and is pushing to 50... And she is with a guy in his twenties... But that's a whole other story then the problem i had. Good job, I liked this ending better. Would have been better if he rejected her in person. "You chose your bed and now you're laying in it". Thanks for correcting the MILF age (And the ending compliment). I'll just make her 30. |
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Jan 22, 2014 12:13 PM
#75
| [Nagare Ippon] Gibo A good example of how a boy wants to get revenge as he becomes "broke" after killing a certain someone. Just to give some motivation if you need any. Anyway, if you can, please continue to make "personality changes" on the main character as he deals with the rapist. If you make him into another Accelerator, who is a crazed person that savors his chance of revenge, or like Rolo (code geass), someone who becomes cold and goes into killing someone for revenge, then that would really be interesting. Even someone like Yata Misaki would also be interesting. Here is Yata Misaki, if you don't know him, the way he talks is a good example of a person who is itching to get revenge on a rapist. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VrSL2peo0KA |
greed2Jan 22, 2014 1:04 PM
Jan 22, 2014 2:46 PM
#76
| Sorry to add to your to do list, but here is some more stories if you may be interested. And some of my imagination to go with it. Sakiko-san no Dansei Jijou - imagined the son did a nice number on the disgusting teacher. As I mentioned before, in regards to my "devil's contract" Midou would have a quick change in personality. But knowing you, you might be more subtle. So here is an idea in how drastic Midou would be, like Daryl Yan who beat up a poor mother, I had imagine Midou would do something to "fix" that perverted teacher's face., he will make that disgusting face look a lot better. After that, as the teacher is begging for mercy, you can imagine you can pull something out Baccano, if you saw what happened to Dallas then it would be a fitting end. You can also have an extra friend for Midou to help him. As for the mother, I imagine she may need some help as she is severely shaken from her ordeal, but after some nice time with Midou and his mother, everything will be ok. http://mangafox.me/manga/mel_kano/v03/c015/23.html an example of a "friend" http://mangafox.me/manga/zippy_ziggy/v09/c065/4.html another "friend" you can use later. http://www.mangahere.com/manga/mirai_nikki_mosaic/v01/c001/5.html the good fate for a rapist. [Don Shigeru] Meshuu - A Female Prisoner: a female teacher, Sugimura, was caught being married with her student, Mamoru, so I imagine that Mamoru had killed the guys that was blackmailing both him and the teacher. For example, after "fixing their faces," and poking a lot of holes into them, would Mamoru do something drastic while saying "if you bastards think I was just going to send you straight to hell, you have another thing coming. After tormenting the woman I love, I will show you a personal hell on earth I made for you." http://mangafox.me/manga/zippy_ziggy/v03/c014/22.html (p.s that is sea water, salt+many wounds, you get the idea, then finish it off with an electric current) |
greed2Jan 22, 2014 3:31 PM
Jan 22, 2014 3:41 PM
#77
| Hmm...? |
| NaruHina!! |
Jan 22, 2014 7:54 PM
#78
| Wow. You have a lot more time on your hands than I do. Anyway, I'll have to read all of them before I can come up with anything. But right now, my agenda is pretty packed. Hell, I still haven't found Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu. So with all this, not to mention things outside of my writing, and I was in the beginning of thinking of a new ending to True Blue Redemption, I've got enough on my plate for now. Of course, I'll see what I can do with these. |
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Jan 22, 2014 8:18 PM
#79
| Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu can be found in hentai2read, which I showed you for unsweet NTR. p.s if you are going to adjust your fanfics. Can you adjust a Leap of Faith, for something like Jun killing Kazuya- for example you can just make Kazuya's girl friend just leave the door unlocked as Jun had met Kazuya's girlfriend beforehand so she can scheme with Jun. |
Jan 23, 2014 4:34 PM
#80
| *sigh* No Promises... |
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Jan 23, 2014 5:38 PM
#81
| I think everyone should just calm down and let shield0731 do what he does. I've written short stories before and its stressful already. |
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Jan 23, 2014 7:01 PM
#82
McSwagger said: I think everyone should just calm down and let shield0731 do what he does. I've written short stories before and its stressful already. Yes! Thank You! |
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Jan 23, 2014 8:01 PM
#83
| Yea, writing easy. Preplan and be willing to slave away three hours or more... |
| NaruHina!! |
Jan 23, 2014 8:15 PM
#84
Sheild0731 said: *sigh* No Promises... You don't have to actually, it is just a sugestion for appeal. Like Akira, I find it nice to see a Main Character to turn very brutal as he shows no hesitation when bludgeoning the rapist with either his fists or a baseball bat. The same would go with anything else such as how the Main Character would turn vulgar and easily irritated, especially about his woman, as he curses openly towards the rapist, while beating him up, when the rapist stole happiness from the lovely couple. Anyway, I am not expecting any changes, it just seems fitting that the person, whose life the Rapist tried to ruin, will end the life of the Rapist; for Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu, I can imagine that Sakura Makihara will be given the finishing blow as Akira brings her the nearly dead Naoya. But yeah, you don't have to change your stories, just continue to give all NTR rapists hell in your stories If ever in the future, please burn someone to death as the main character laughs in this manner; you can knock out the rapist and stuff him in a furnace which is poetry where a furnace burns trash so all the main character is doing is just stuffing trash into where it belongs. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pc3aKPd39Yg (buring is near the end.) |
greed2Jan 29, 2014 2:36 AM
Jan 30, 2014 8:03 PM
#85
| This is just a quick note, but in regards of my suggestions with Female Prisoner and the other manga, please tell me if my ideas seemed appealing to you. Like Kyouko's son, who you named Akira, I am willing to think of other things if I can. If you do like the idea of Akira being in Kumikyoku Mitsunyuu, then here is one phrase I am thinking of, if are are planning to burn the entire school with the students. "Now then, you little bastards, for all the sh*t you done to these girls, I am going to reward you scum with a one-day round trip to heaven. You'll going to enjoy it so much you won't feel like coming back!" (then laughs as he drops the match on the gasoline trail that would lead to inside the gymnasium, that is filled with the gas in the air, to flame the gymnasium while the people inside are locked in tight begging to get out.) |
greed2Jan 31, 2014 3:28 PM
Jan 31, 2014 7:28 PM
#86
| Well thanks. But I'm currently in the process of writing a story for Sakiko-san's Man Issues (I'm almost done), As well as finding a new outcome for True Blue Redemption. And finally, coming up with an ending for another original. So basically, I'm trying to think of 3 outcomes for 3 stories. Here's a progress report. Sakiko-san's Man Issues: Have you ever seen Scarface where this Colombian guy cuts this Cuban guy with a chainsaw? That's pretty much what's happening with the jack-ass responsible. I'm trying to figure out how Midou will make Sakiko feel better. True Blue Redemption: This is a year after Shudo and that kid got locked up (Instead of 3 years). Akihito runs into Aoi by coincidence (and she looks like shit). Aoi admits that she fucked up. But Akihito is getting a headache just by having Aoi with him. Aoi begs for mercy, but Akihito bitchs her out (in a very agressive way). In the end, he ends up with a new woman. I'm not sure who to hook him up with yet. But I am planning to have Aoi commit suicide. I'll leave out the original for the time being since I'm pre-occupied with the 2 I'm dealing with. |
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Jan 31, 2014 8:21 PM
#87
| When I said "other manga" I meant Sakiko-san's Man Issues. Anyway, have you ever seen Freezing. Here is one example on how Sakiko is I imagine. http://www.mangahere.com/manga/freezing/v10/c065/14.html Also, I imagine Sakiko wouldn't be able to understand what is going on around her as she is a bit "lifeless. " Midou will just have sex with her saying "I love you, so don't worry, I won't let anything like this ever happen to you. I'll cut anyone down whoever tries to harm you again. So please, I'm sorry you have to endure so much for me Mom." Or something like that. Just to add, if you are going to use a chain saw, I can imagine that you can have Midou cut the "rapists" limbs and then proceed to have him take a couple of pens/pencils to stab his eyes while him saying coldy "well sensei, I have my pens ready, now I shall start my special exam I prepared for myself" while he slowly pushes them deeper into his eyes but stops before he reaches the brain, then also cut off the rapist's dick. Once you do that then proceed to get a tire iron, or a long metal state, and a large hammer to then put into the "rapist's" mouth while Midou says "for you to actually use this mouth to defile my mother, I now shall get rid it from this world." Then the teacher shall have his life ended. Insead of both eyes, you could just have Midou pull out one of the eyes while saying "how dare you look at my mother with these disgusting eyes, I hate to imagine what do you see with these eyes." Then stuff one into the Teacher's mouth then use duck tape. http://www.mangareader.net/666-33042-28/deadman-wonderland/chapter-8.html And instead of the Tire Iron, you could just take my other advice of fixing his face. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JHsUfuFVRSQ (skip the first 2 min) Here is an extra thing just so that the dear Teacher won't scream, let alone speak, too much when Midou is torturing him. http://www.mangahere.com/manga/luck_stealer/v01/c004/8.html p.s In regards to True Blue, I thought you said that "My creativity is like a bounty hunter. Once it hits it's target, It moves on." Did something occurred? Anyway, I wouldn't understand why you want Aoi to commit suicide. I WANT A DEAD SHUDO. |
greed2Jan 31, 2014 9:17 PM
Feb 1, 2014 5:06 AM
#88
| *sigh* Here we go again. I'm getting aggravated. >=( You completely disregarded my post on page 4 (#69) where I said that I'll be making some changes. And another thing, You can't always get what you want. I'm not writing these stories because you want to read some horror novel. You wanna see bad guys getting decapitated or something, go play Mortal Kombat or whatever. |
Sheild0731Feb 1, 2014 5:16 AM
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Feb 1, 2014 10:20 AM
#89
| Right my apologies, when you said "changes" I thought you just meant some slight changes, with either the main story or the ending; I know you said you are "re-writing" something, but since you also said "change" that seemed to just spell out "re-editing" to me. However, yeah, I also know that you said that "they'll be gone" as in you will change it completely so I guess I should have seen this coming. It didn't occur to me that it would necessarily be a huge change of the story overall, as you said you are "re-editing" it; to be accurate it would be called a new version or a complete alternative route, but since you are changing the entire fanfic, instead of making another separate one while keeping the old ending, then I can now understand. Anyway, like I said you can use my ideas for another fanfic or just disregard them if you have something more painful in mind; you are going to run out of movie references eventually. So again, sorry for aggravating you. Look, I don't know what real life problems you have, but I am grateful you even have the time to actually make these fanfics, as well as taking one of my ideas of the personality change. We all have our own real-life problems so a lot of us can't find the time to make these fanfics. So again, I am grateful. So please give all your characters their serial killer moments like Hiiragi (Wana: Hakudaku Mamire no Houkago). So I will put this, so other people won't misunderstand, for the True Blue fanfic, you apparently saying "Sorry folks, say farewell to the original ending I have because I am going to have a more rough ending that would be bad for the heroine due to how it is more appealing to the majority" and how you are not saying "I am going to edit my fanfic a bit because of some holes my readers have pointed out." Anyway, I don't know what daichisama was thinking, but I had thought that zanetu disliked that; of course I can assume he only meant the manga references. Just for extra info, The only reason why I was against a guy just hooking up with another woman is because it gives me the feeling of Ore no Kanojo ga Fuuzokujou ni Natta Riyuu, but I guess everyone is different. In your case it, and daichi, it would be similar to Sayuki no Sato. p.s If I post an anime/manga suggestion. You don't have to take it as a request. Just see if it interest you and if a "spark" comes up, like for Revenge of the Son I can imagine a "spark" came up when I mentioned a personality change. If no sparks come up then that is fine. ------------ extra note, to avoid spamming. And one extra manga, like I said you don't have to make a fanfic out of them but if you read them and if the idea of making a Redemption/revenge story appeals to you then that is nice, and you can put it in a list of "want to write" after you fulfill your other request as there is no rush, but if it doesn't then just say it doesn't appeal to you. Otomedori- from a realistic view, maybe the only solution is for our main guy to just use a rough method to bring everyone to hell with him. |
greed2Feb 5, 2014 5:02 PM
Feb 4, 2014 11:41 PM
#90
| for the love of shit man, let the author write how he wants. Just because it pleases you doesn't mean it pleases everyone. I'm not trying to sound mean but pleasing one person isn't what writers do, its trying to please everyone and yeah their will be some people who aren't pleased but tough shit man. Just because one person likes violent, gruesome deaths to the lawless doesn't mean everyone does. I for one like the idea that the main character has the girl who cheated have to work for their redemption. That's just my two cents but don't try to force someone to write how you want, not how they want |
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Feb 5, 2014 3:15 PM
#91
| This is a forum, and the title says "suggestion," while Sheild0731 did say"I am the author, please give me some ideas/ntr-plots so I can write a better ending for each revolting plot," I mainly use this forum to give suggestions to other people, not specially Sheild0731. Though, not that I know if Sheild0731 specifically made it so he can write all the stories posted here, here are some things I like to say. 1. What I put here is my idea, what Sheild0731 has in his mind is his own idea. I don't like the idea of forcing someone to take an idea. Just helping Sheild0731, if he found my idea useful, was a side bonus. And I also edit my posts to avoid spamming. IF I was forcing someone then there will be lots of spams, which is why I edit my posts. If Sheild0731 sees my ideas as stupid non-sensical disgusting trash, that will have no appeal, then he can think that way. But since many people visits this forum then let them also look to decide if they can use it as a "spark" or not. 2. Everyone here has a brain. Whether or not they read Sheild0731's fan fiction or take the ideas of others and make their own personal fan fiction is the main theme; the choice made is irreverent. I would have made my own forum so other people can make their own fanfiction "sequel," but because this was completely a very similar topic then zanetu would just pointed out that I am being redundant which is why I am using this forum. 3. To me, at least, I just find this forum as as a way to assist Convolvolus's forum in regards to a cure for NTR; Convolvolus's forum as asking for a "cure," not how the "cure," worked in each story. That was the only reason I put details about my "devil's contract" in this forum so I can explain how it worked for each story to others who did not know how it worked. Anything else I think of, that leads to a different "sequel," is just a "side story" thing where people can't use my "devil's contract" and want to be more realistic as they don't like random supernatural elements. Not to mention Sheild0731 has his own real life problems so he will barely have the time to get all his requested fanfics done. I only put my ideas here so people, who are unable to wait for a "cure," could use a substitute; if Sheild0731 wants to extract that then he can but if people want to take the ideas of others so they can make their own personal Redemption then that is another thing. If my ideas are crap, it is indeed crap, if he says I am an idiot, then I am an idiot, but if someone has some use for it then let them use it until Sheild0731 can surprise them with his own well made stuff. And if they are not satisfied with his version, then let them use the ideas of others if they want to make it themselves. 4. Sheild0731 has already lots of projects himself, and I put in good words that he doesn't have to write anything I put down. I only use this forum so I can put in "sequel" ideas, related to infamous heavy NTR-plot that can cause a lot of damage that people had likely read and feel sick about as they regret reading it, so other people can use in their very own minds for their own "sequel." Like higurashi no naku koro ni, any examples I put here is just an example that other people, that is not necessarily Sheild0731, can use in their well made minds and "make their own" Redemption by giving them a visual examlpe. When I put my ideas here, I don't necessarily point to Sheild0731 so he can make it, I point to Other people. Like Outbreak Company, you don't have to rely on the original author or a skilled fanfic author, just make your own story if you have enough imagination or ask someone so to help you imagine your own story. 5. IF I was REALLY forcing Sheild0731 to make a fanfic, I would have annoyed him to make my "devil's contract" fanfic a long time ago. But why bother, that would be a stupid attempt, I got what I want. I put how my "devil's contract" works in this forum and gave some examples on how it works. That's all I need, anything else is just my other imagination where I can imagine where the main character use realistic methods and Sheild0731 doesn't need to use them, he can just leave it here as a "substitute idea for a fanfic" so people won't have to wait, as they imagine their own, on what he has to surprise them with his own imagination as he puts out his fanfic. 6. Just some small extra info. I only asked, in regards to Unsweet NTR, if Jun can kill a certain someone only because it felt fitting for someone started it all, by accident, to end it all. I then said later that he doesn't need to re-write it, but it seemed more appealing if there are other readers that desired such a thing to just use their heads. Sheild0731's "leap of faith" didn't seem as dramatic as Revenge of the Son, I thought he would use horror movie references on all his fanfics. “I don't care if I lose my job! If Jun will not forgive me, I don't care even if I die! But I will tell him clearly," were words in the extra chapter I thought would make anyone, not necessarily Sheild0731, feel provoked to write their own fanfic. I only present Sheild0731's method as an example so other people can use it as a springboard to make their own personal fanfic. For me, I never write my fanfics online, people will find it lame obviously, so I just make my personal fanfics that I keep in my computer in a word document and keep it to myself which is something other people can do. Sheild0731 can show them his fanfic so he can give a good inspiration on how to do it, then they can make their own stuff if they have the imagination to do so. 7. And sorry sir if I sound like I am forcing people. Though I know this forum is mainly just for the author to write his fanfics, I just use this forum to put my own "sparks" so that other people can make their own fanfics; everyone has their own different preferences. If the "sparks" works for them then it works for them; for True Blue, if someone wants to see the girls dumped then let them be dumped, if someone wants to see another type of ending then give them a "spark," if someone wants to death in True Blue, if the girls do commit suicide then make an unexpected return, then let it happen only in the audience's heads not necessarily as a request for the author. http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=350217&no=20&weekday=tue Main point, this is an Anti-ntr club. What we post is against NTR. All Sheild0731 did was just put another forum to help give us a "cure" and, from my view, is not just specifically meant for Sheild0731 to be a doctor to make a cure. Since Convolvolus was being to specific as he mentioned he wanted a cure for just Tachibana-san's Circumstances With a Man, I just put my own thoughts for any other heavy NTR plot that will likely has heavy negative effects on people's mind. But if they think I am a quack then I am a quack. If they think Sheild0731 is a great doctor then he is indeed a great doctor. But like using just either a small time medicine or the main surgery, I just put a substitute for other people to use. p.s Since you are getting request about them. So it seems more tasteless work is made, in regards to the Unsweet series with the same characters, and still it is the same sh*t; they are likely doujinshi anyway so I doubt you are the type that wants to stay consistent with the plot. So, incase you needed to know. |
greed2Feb 7, 2014 7:43 AM
Feb 7, 2014 7:06 AM
#92
| Large post... |
| NaruHina!! |
Feb 7, 2014 7:12 AM
#93
| Just read that true blue redemption one. Please change it. I mean can you like hurry cause that one was just sad in a bad way. He took her back after all the shit she said and did. Sure that shows his character but NO that nasty bitch didn't deserve him. She made conscious decisions! |
| NaruHina!! |
Feb 7, 2014 7:30 AM
#94
| reason for Large post, gives a better explanation on a lot of things, plus it will tell the other over 100 members of the anti-ntr club on how to use this forum if they want to share their idea but don't necessarily need the author to make a fanfic. And from a realistic view, there is some truth in your words on how the majority feels, so yeah just let the boy dump the girl as he shows his anger. She reminds me of a certain hentai where a wife still cheated on her husband even though he "saved her" from some other punk so I agree to a degree where he realistically dump her before it happens though this is opposed to other vanilla lovers. Dig a grave for those girls. Let the boy find another girl. An example of everyone's preference, even though the club president may be against it, that is found in a majority. Doesn't necessarily have to come true, as the author doesn't have to write it, but everyone has a right to share their thoughts; if the author wants to take the request of a "bad ending" then let it be bad even if there are others that wants a "better ending." Let everyone share their imagination on what they think should happen. |
greed2Feb 7, 2014 7:58 AM
Feb 7, 2014 9:39 AM
#95
daichisama said: Just read that true blue redemption one. Please change it. I mean can you like hurry cause that one was just sad in a bad way. He took her back after all the shit she said and did. Sure that shows his character but NO that nasty bitch didn't deserve him. She made conscious decisions! Don't worry, I'm almost done with the new outcome. Read post number 86. It'll tell you what to expect. |
| I wish Nailkaizer is my wife. Don't know her? Look ---> http://myanimelist.net/character/13615/Nailkaizer |
Feb 7, 2014 11:00 AM
#96
| This is a quick note, I don't care if you have a guy say to any sl*t girl “One’s trash is another’s treasure. You are now just trash that I find hard to treasure anymore, that is it.” girl-?????? “Haven't figure it out, I hate you, I loathed you, I despised you. I have been keep trying to tell you that but I just haven’t succeeded yet in getting it into your head. Do you actually think that I would want to be with someone who threw me away like trash without the slightest thought?! GET out of here; I never want to see your face again. I SAID GET OUT.” And then make the girl commit suicide. But, for things such as Yama Hime no Mi, like Revenge of the son, please get the Main Character take back a woman if you think they deserve such an ending. People have commented on how your "Revenge of the Son" made them a whole lot better. Since there are those that rely on you for a cure, this is just a thought not necessarily a request, since I like to help those who are looking for the right cure. |
greed2Feb 7, 2014 11:15 AM
Feb 7, 2014 11:18 AM
#97
greed2 said: This is a quick note, I don't care if you have a guy say to any sl*t girl “One’s trash is another’s treasure. You are now just trash that I find hard to treasure anymore, that is it.” girl-?????? “Haven't figure it out, I hate you, I loathed you, I despised you. I have been keep trying to tell you that but I just haven’t succeeded yet in getting it into your head. Do you actually think that I would want to be with someone who threw me away like trash without the slightest thought?! GET out of here; I never want to see your face again. I SAID GET OUT.” And then make the girl commit suicide. But, for things such as Yama Hime no Mi, like Revenge of the son, please get the Main Character take back a woman if you think they deserve such an ending. People have commented on how your "Revenge of the Son" made them a whole lot better. Since there are those that rely on you for a cure, this is just a thought not necessarily a request, since I like to help those who are looking for the right cure. Thanks. But I just finished the revised ending for True Blue Redemption. It's already posted. Though I decided to skip the suicide. That was BEFORE you posted. So now it's already in there. As for what you wrote, I might use it for another story. I'll save it up. |
| I wish Nailkaizer is my wife. Don't know her? Look ---> http://myanimelist.net/character/13615/Nailkaizer |
Feb 7, 2014 11:29 AM
#98
| I hope that will be a "cure" for others. And glad that spiteful line seems appealing to you. Also, at your first post on where it says "And there are more coming whenever possible." Can you please put, under that quote, the list of NTR manga/anime you plan to have a redemption on, such as Sakiko-san's Man Issues as well as the description "he will get his girl back" or "he will get another girl" next to it, then take it off as soon as you have it done. It just seems more useful since I think some of us now lost count how many projects you have or what you have in mind. |
Feb 7, 2014 11:35 AM
#99
| Done. But it's just that story for now. I need to rest a bit before I finish my next original story. |
| I wish Nailkaizer is my wife. Don't know her? Look ---> http://myanimelist.net/character/13615/Nailkaizer |
Feb 7, 2014 11:43 AM
#100
| As a fellow anti-ntr club member, just some small time words of consideration. Try to get good rest, be sure to deal with any real-life problems as you have them all resolved, and don't feel pressured in making a redemption story for every anime/manga requested; you can let fans quench the thirst of other fans so there is no rush in anything. As an author, you are just human so take it easy and don't push yourself too hard. |
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