Sheild0731 said: But at the same time, I'm writing chapter 2 of my Vanilla story. Since my Vanilla story has no NTR for me to attack, I'll need zenetu's permission to post it. No problem. This club welcomes vanilla stories. The sweeter the story is, the more likely it is to "cure" members traumatized by NTR. You may start a new thread for your vanilla stories. |
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| Can you do an alternate ending for I can? |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
Sheild0731 said: hentaisoulbrotha said: Can you do an alternate ending for I can? That's on my list. But word got out on that 3rd episode. Now I'm concerned. Don't worry I'll wait but I won't watch considering the last two episodes traumatized me. |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
Sheild0731 said: TheMrChan said: I understand. I wish you the best. I do wanted to know what endings you put originally in "True Blue Redemption" among others. A summary would be nice So I can have an idea. I redid the endings for 2 of my stories. The original ending for "False Engagement", the original ending for that was pretty much the same as in "From Idol to Idiot". As for True Blue Redemption, the original ending for that is this: Kaya decides to spend Christmas with Akihito. But to his surprise, Kaya brings Aoi with her (she looks like she's seen better days). Both girls were seeking reconciliation, but Akihito needed time to think. After a long night of thought, he decides to take the girls back. Not as Girlfriends, Kaya became Akihito's Sex-Friend whereas Aoi is just a sex-only mistress. Basically, sex without the bull-shit. This happened in the first place by SOMEONE (Not mentioning any names) who decides to be a dick, and give me a hard time instead of following greed2's advice. From that point on, all stories stays as is. They don't like it, that's their problem. I bet without a shadow of a doubt that was a ntr troll, the things that they do just to justify the means of a sick and twisted fedish. Anyway I'm beginning to think of some alternate endings for a few other ntr hentai. |
hentaisoulbrothaMar 31, 2015 2:46 AM
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
| I have a few ideas if you're intrested. |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
Sheild0731 said: Sorry everyone, but all that stuff is put on hold until I can get at least 2 of those titles out of the way. I'm already at a loss at what to do with I*Can. Since episode 3 is practically a re-telling, this will take place after episode 2. What their's another episode coming out? Oh for the love of god. |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
| I know and what's funny is that they come with ep 3 because the last two episodes didn't do so well and in the end that made their ratings even worst. Well that's what I've been informed about from my friend in Japan. BTW Your fan fics are tight, and what's more is that some of them fall under the yūwaku genre (Reverse NTR) which I'm the club administrator of. But I rather not talk about it cause I don't want to get in trouble here. |
hentaisoulbrothaJun 21, 2015 12:38 AM
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
| Oh I forgot to mention I'm also working on a fan fic that I'm trying to finish which is Called Karma is A Bitch (Mesu Nochi Torare) This time the story is now focused on Shintarou who has voluntarily resigned as vice president of the student council the day after the whole ordeal which sent shockwaves the entire school. 2 weeks later during class a detective along with the school nurse enters the classroom and request to speak with Reiko alone, Shintarou also noticed Misaki is with them as well. At that point, the detective informs both Reiko and Misaki that one of Tetsu's rape victim has came forward and not only accused Tetsu of rapeing her, but also giving her a sexual transmitted disease. The detective goes on to say that after Tetsu found out he has STDs and his time is running short due to him not getting tested sooner has confessed to all the rapes including Reiko and Misaki, he even gave out the names of the other men who were also involved. Meanwhile during recess, Shintarou finds a letter from an unknown sender in his locker that read "Meet me on the roof", he goes to the roof to find a girl named Minako waiting for him. She tells Spills the beans to Shintarou about Reiko and Misaki after over hearing the their conversations with the detective and the school nurse. She goes on to say she hated the fact that Reiko was with him and felt like Reiko didn't deserve to be with a man like Shintarou. Shintarou understood completely thus havING their first h-scene together. I'm still working on the rest but please tell me what you think so far. |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
Sheild0731 said: My stories are based on Revenge & Redemption whereas yours seems to be based on simple karma. Either way, yours is pretty good. =) thanks |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
Sheild0731 said: Well now, I'm watching I*Can to see what I can do with this. Again, this will take place after Episode 2, so Episode 3 is out of the question. I just finished watching the 2 episodes. Ryouto stood there defeated, and Lena stood there doing nothing. As I'm sleeping, I'll figure out I'll go about this. Sorry about the spoiller. No harm, no foul. |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
| Just my thoughts: Stage 1: Have Lena be an up and coming pop idol who is considered a rival of Miyu as well as being a fan favorite. Stage 2: Lena finds out about the affair between Miyu and Terada and then she takes Ryouta as her manager when she finds out Miyu was cheating on him. I hope this is a good start. |
hentaisoulbrothaJul 3, 2015 12:23 PM
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
Sheild0731 said: hentaisoulbrotha said: Just my thoughts: Stage 1: Have Lena be an up and coming pop idol who is considered a rival of Miyu as well as being a fan favorite. Stage 2: Lena finds out about the affair between Miyu and Terada and then she takes Ryouta as her manager when she finds out Miyu was cheating on him. I hope this is a good start. Well, Stage 2 is already decided. Basically, Lena finds out about Miyu's infidelity (Just like she did at the end of the 2nd episode) and finds Ryouta defeated. Lena storms off with Ryouta in tow. As they left the building, she decides to report everything to Ryouta's Grandfather who happens to own the agency (or studios... whatever). But Ryouta's Grandfather reminds Ryouta of his Grandfather's "other job" (More on that later). As for Stage 1, that's practically the ending (Part of it anyway). So yeah, it's more than a good start. =) Cool, I can't wait til read this. |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
Sheild0731 said: Man it's been too long. Okay, status report. I'm ALMOST done with the I*Can story. -Terada's Fate is sealed. -Ryouto is now with Lena. -Lena's popularity Surpasses Miyu's. -Miyu's sexcapades with Terada is now Public Knowledge. -Miyu disappears. Now then, should I just end it here with Just Ryouto & Lena, or should I give Miyu a surprise sex scene? I say let her suffer. |
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
| Scandalous Behavior (I*Can) Story: 10 Plot: 10 Sex: 10 Roleplay: 7 (I'm confused, why is Lena's role seems so identical to Reina's 😓) Overall: 10 |
hentaisoulbrothaSep 12, 2015 11:48 PM
| Good character art and design is good but it doesn't get you very far if the rest of the hentai is pure crap. |
| Here is the best solution to turn NTR into agitprop. - Man gets GF - Man sees "Bull" having sex with his GF But where the man would otherwise just begin worshiping the "Bull" and letting him turn his GF into a dumpster fire, the Man does this instead. - Man pulls out Shotgun - Man says obnoxious one-liner - Man blows other man's brains out - If GF was doing this against her will, forgive her - If GF is a ra- err... cuck enabler, he shoots her too. |
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