ok here's some constructive criticism so don't take it the wrong way.
If your going to have different total points for vizard ranks shouldn't you do that for the shinigami and espada aswell since each rank has different power? vizards 3-5 only get 450 vice-captains get 500, when you become vizard (whenever it occured in the show) they were vice/captain level before they turned vizard then they got the mask so they should have MORE then the vice captain, this goes for espada aswell if you give it rank totals, then vizard 1 gets only 600, equal to a fraccion when all fraccions are weaker then the 10th espada, so your saying the top vizard is far weaker then the 10th espada, vizards are supposed to be equals with the espada, when espadas get 2nd ressureccion, vizards get hollow form, when espada get zanpakutous, vizards get masks, the captain commander should also be on equal to the 1st espada and vizard, fraccion are vice-captain level (as shown when they fight the vice captains, and then soi fon but she doesn't seem to have bankai but she showed/proved that she was going easy on the guy anyway), espada and vizard should also get extra because they have more feilds then any of the rest yet they're better(supposedly) otherwise there wont be an advantage for being hollowficated or becoming espada for their extra abilities if they need to sacriice other abilities. And i'll end the criticism by saying that the top 4 espada and vizard should get a boost (same with captain commander but not for same reason) because they get the extra form to everyone else.
Now suggestion for the stats. Keep the totals (after you do any changes IF you do) and use hai's idea, let the shinigami be flexible otherwise it will be boring, use these stats for a guide to compare other shinigami to, also, as we know/think shinigami/vizard/espada get boosted stats when they release. i don't think this, instead i think that their full powers are just sealed, that's why they're called seals and releases. so with relation to the stats there should be seperate columns. your stats in sealed, then the difference between/how much you get when you release, then the next release, and so on. since releasing doesn't change your stats, unless it has something to do with your physical body (so obviously there needs to be a reason why stats go down), to decrease, all differences should be increases, which in turn if some do decrease they shouldn't be able to apply the points they had to another catagory (unless there's a reason again like how ichigo gave up his sheer strength for speed specifically for his whole bankai, even though it gets ignored later on in the series -_-)
now for stat catogories. where are the quncies? if you dont give them the stat sections they shouldn't be here, so here is my thoughts on what it should be like:
Arrows Per Shot (APS): Description: how many arrows you can shoot each time you release. instead of per second per shot because you cant tell time accurately in written battle. there may be a ratio like, Points:arrows, or something.(instead of zanjutsu, quincies only use ranged weapons with 2 parts, such as bow and arrow, crossbow and bolts)
Whatever the quincies flash step is called(i forget): same as shunpo
Reitsu: same as others
Reitsu/spirit particle control: since quincies are all about reitsu control they should have an ectra section purely for it in how good they can focus their arrows (they use reitsu when there's no spirit particles) and they also use spirit particles which shinigami and such can't.
then the rest.
that's all i can scrape off the top of my head atm.
i added stuf in to different sections along the way so im not sure if all of it makes sense. sorry if this troubles you. |