Aug 19, 2012 5:36 AM
More New Reviews
Anime Relations:
Shonan Junai Gumi!, Detroit Metal City
Alright so tonight i wanted to write another couple reviews because my last brand new one actually got what i consider some positive feedback so today i put out a slightly alteration to a old one i did for Shonan Juni Gumi and a Brand new review for Detroit Metal City.
Doing DMC was hard since i liked it so much looking at it objectively was hard and all i could see for people not to like would either be the different art style,the metal music or the vulgarity of it all. Well i hope i did a half decent job of it and it helps some people out.
I got a couple more i am gonna rewrite in the next few days but there slightly more challenging but i wanna put out something new too cause i have slowed down considerably. Comments are always welcome on my page and so are discussions for people who enjoy 1 on 1s.
Doing DMC was hard since i liked it so much looking at it objectively was hard and all i could see for people not to like would either be the different art style,the metal music or the vulgarity of it all. Well i hope i did a half decent job of it and it helps some people out.
I got a couple more i am gonna rewrite in the next few days but there slightly more challenging but i wanna put out something new too cause i have slowed down considerably. Comments are always welcome on my page and so are discussions for people who enjoy 1 on 1s.
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Shaja
| Aug 19, 2012 5:36 AM |
3 comments
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JasonMeyer | Aug 21, 2012 2:43 AM
I have read your Shonan Juni Gumi review as well as Detroit Metal City reviews. Both are my favorite and i agree with you on some fact you have mentioned in your reviews.ink for roland xc-540 |
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Shaja | Aug 19, 2012 4:12 PM
commented on your page with a thank you
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LesMiserable | Aug 19, 2012 9:19 AM
I just read your DMC review. I have kinda mixed feelings about it. On one side, your descriptions are fairly accurate, on the other hand, I think you missed a lot of what a review ought to have. You should have a little intro on top. It isn`t a must, but structure (intro, middle and end) is important in order to write a good review. Another thing that I missed is a description of the plot. You are only mentioning Negeshi, which is the main character. The entire series is about him, and therefore you should explain the plot better instead of jumping straight to what you think about the show. And there`s always bad things to say about a show; no show is perfect. In order to give a good review, you must at least find a couple of flaws. |