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Jul 9, 2009 11:17 AM
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It just happened last year that I had a fight with one of my friends and I got really hurt by her words and what she've done to me so I decided to write a peom to express my feelings in it.

My Life Buddy

My friend
My friend please tell me if you agree with me or no
Let me know if you are my life buddy or I'm just your prey!
Please let me know

The friend is the one who understands me and cares for my feelings and beliefs

Comes to me and pats me on the head if I want te feel a relief

Calls my name so happily and gives me a beary tremendous hug just to see a
smile on the path of peace

Share your love with me through the years that goes by just like the air that flows with us

We may fight with each other get angry and mad, but still we call for fogivness and leave the past

No matter what I go through I find you there holding my hands

Holding it so tight as the chain that hold us together

Don't say my secret and I don't say yours or then we will collapse and break
the chain of our friendship memories

Let me see you giving me your hand
Lefting me up_up high to reach my goals

Your help means a lot to me and I asure you that I won't forget that role

Cheer me up,I'll need your waves,hugs,and advices
Those that will build me up again and get me up on my feet

Encourge me to reach my dreams
To make my world-the world that will take us to what we want

Let us rememeber our laughs and smiles
Let us be friends-friends forever

My friend do you understand?
Do you get my words?

Cause friendship means a lot
It may be easy to say but hard to explain and understand

So are you my life buddy or am I your prey?

*~*~*~*~*~*~*


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Jul 10, 2009 7:16 AM
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There were a few mistakes(minor ones) but overall I liked it,especially the ending verse
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