| Here is where your show your stories that you are writing at the moment. Here is mine and hope that you enjoy. This is a story about 4 kids(not the sh#tty dubbing company) who wan't to become super heroes. Once they got it, its not all fun and games. This is action, shonen, psychological, romance, and some slight comedy. Hope you enjoy and give me feed back if you wan't. Volume 1 Chpt 001 We become super heroes!: A kid shouted for help as she is surrounded by a bunch of bullies. One goes to punch her but she got kick in the face by Cindy. Then 3 others came who’s name are Trisha, Zeke, and the leader Bishop. They call themselves as the amazing four. They manage to fight of the bullies and rescuer the girl who is in trouble. Once when school is over, They are being praise as the heroes of Green lake creek elementary school. While walking, Trisha is all happy of them being heroes like the ones they see on T.V. They all happy but not satisfy as all of them want to become real super heroes and be able to save the world. They all hope that one day they get powers. Friday when the weekend starts, The 4 heads to Cindy’s house for a sleep over. They begin doing what any other sleep over. In the middle of the night, Bishop wakes up. He decided to turn on the T.V to see what kind of commercials that people laugh at. But one caught his attention at it shows super heroes products that he claim it will give them super powers and its free. He pick up the phone and call to order. The next day, he wake up his friends imminently and tell them the good news. They all put them on but nothing happen. The 3 gets mad at him but when Zeke smash his power glove on a car, it really gave them power just like the announcer said. Trisha gots the power of speed and electricity, Cindy got telekinesis, Zeke got super strong power gloves that gives him knowledge of karate and every kind of martial arts with a bang, and Bishop who has a cape that gives powers like the super heroes on tv. Now that they got super power, they start to call them selves by their super names. Bishop calls himself as the captain super, Zeke being Mr. Martial, Cindy as the levitator, and Trisha as the speedter. Together they call themselves as the super rising foe. But then a mysteries guy pop out of no where.’ Chpt 002 Our first assignment: Facing each other with a stare, they thought that he is the bad guy but Bishop recognize his from the commercial. Bishop tells to stand down saying he is good but the guy laugh like it was a joke. He introduce himself as Noko furtewa as he now is their boss. They go against it but Bishop claim this is a good idea as every hero needs a contactor. He tells them that he will contact them if there is a bad guy on loose. The next day, they are all couldn’t wait for the call. They try to go threw the normal day they have but just cant stop being all excited. Once after school, They see a person breaking in a house. They use this opportunity to use there powers at their good use. The robber laugh but stop after seeing what they can do. He begins to run away, thinking that he escape but Trisha cuts him off his route. They corner him but he pulls out a gun and begins to shoot randomly. One bullet scratch Cindy’s face which made her scared. Zeke got up to him and beat him down. Later the police came and took him in. The rest left the scene. While walking back home, Cindy couldn’t stop thinking of what would happen if she got hit by the bullet. Bishop notice the mark and ask about it but Cindy panic and told a lie. She doesn’t want to ruin the fun. They all went to their home as the sun sets. When Cindy got home, she notice the door is open. She look around and finds a note that her parents left. When she turn around, she didn’t expect Noko to be in her house. She is so scared. Noko sat down and wanted to talk about day. Cindy tells him to leave but he grabs hers and notice the mark. Cindy gets away from him and threaten him when using her powers. He leaves but before he did he gave her a warning about what’s up ahead when becoming super heroes. Chpt 003 Its great isn’t it: At Bishops house, he and the others begins to design their costumes. Cindy begins to space out after hearing what Noko said. They finish their costumes and had a couple of laughs. When they head to their school, Noko appears. He gave them the news that they are hoping for. They are all excited for the first bad guy they are gonna face. All except Cindy who is not hoping for it. He gave them a picture of what he look likes. He tells them that his name is Screamer. The 4 head to the location as the 3 are all excited for fighting their first bad guy. They all split up to look for the screamer. Cindy could not focus and begins to re think of the hero stuff. Then she bump into something so she check and is surprise to see the dead bodies. She move back and bump into someone behind. When she turn around, it is screamer and he looks as menacing as the picture Noko show. Cindy wanted to scream but felt as if her voice box is broken. But then Bishop and the other comes in. They charge in but Cindy tell them to stop. The screamer unleash his very freighting scream but that didn’t stop Bishop as he heads in and punch him in the face. Bishop felt he accomplish something but is in complete shock when he sees that his hand is in the screamer’s mouth. He unleash a big scream that launch him crashing into a wall. The other goes to get payback but could not get as he is very fast. He snuck up on them and hit them with a blast of his devastating scream which made their ears bleed. Screamer heads to Cindy which she tries to run away but could not leaves her friends so she heads to face the screamer. Chpt 004 Cindy vs. the screamer: Cindy begins to attack the screamer head on. She use the nearest object and levitated to smash him. But he blows them away with his screams like it was feathers. He begins to scream as loud as like a big atomic bomb is set off. It broke the roof on top of her but manage to stop it. The screamer got close to her and begin to scream up close which causes her to bleed from the eyes to ears. She kept thinking of her death and she didn’t want that. Suddenly she use her mind and begin choking the screamer until he couldn’t move anymore. Her powers went overboard which cause the body of the screamer to explode. She couldn’t stop it but before she got out of control, Bishop holds her which makes her stop and gain controlled. Cindy begin to cry out of inanity. The others wake up and notice the corpse. They hear the sirens of the police cars coming. Once they got there, they see all the dead bodies including the screamer. The 4 had walk wonderlesly as they think about the experience they have. Bishop notice Cindy’s denial of the super hero when facing the robber. She tells them how scary it is. But then Noko appears out of no where. Bishop and the other wants out of the super hero business. But it not possible as they are now property of his. They don’t accept this but he tells them if they don’t follow orders, he’ll killed them as he doesn’t want witnesses. He tells them they are the only kids they got since other are killed in the line of battle and the others who are also involve are in tougher situations at the moment. Noko gave him detail explanation what heroes are about. They are shock of what they hear. He leaves them behind with them thinking on what they are gonna do next. |
| That's a nice twist of the story...At first I thought it will be a fantasy story with the kids and super powers, and that it will had a happy ending, but it was surprising , and that's what i love in the stories and anime-s, surprises ! Good job,keep it up with that story... :D |
| Don't depend on anyone, because even your shadow leaves you, when you're in darkness... |
Mafortion said: That's a nice twist of the story...At first I thought it will be a fantasy story with the kids and super powers, and that it will had a happy ending, but it was surprising , and that's what i love in the stories and anime-s, surprises ! Good job,keep it up with that story... :D Thanks. This is my dark take within the super hero genre and I know I might not revolutionize anything here but its worth a shot. |
| Hey there and here is another story that I'm working on as well. This is my own take of the zombie genre and this is me trying to be different from most zombie works. Here their is an anime story telling mix with b-rated movie storyline along with the characters speaking b-rated diologe. Also I'm ramping up the scare by adding many different kinds of undead mix with some super natural and biological elements. Hope you enjoy. Oh and the story is about Mic who thinks he can solve anybodies problems but face real life and cant. But when the zombies came, he will solve this or die trying but the more he tries to solve this, a dark past is revel that he have never had remember doing. Chpt 001 walkers: Mic is an average teen who thinks he can fix everyone’s problems but couldn’t. He is face with some bullies as they want him to take back what he said about them but he refuse. He is about to be beat up until his friend Marcus came and stop it. Marcus is the jock of the football team and he threaten them that he’ll tell the coach about what they did so they run. Mic said that he could’ve handle it and he left. Marcus feels bad for him. Home is not a lot different ether as his parent and little brother Tim and his little sister Janet know he couldn’t solve everybody’s problems. The family tries to talk to him about it, He gets mad and decide to take a walk. His mom and dad feels that the past might catch up. As he walks, he thinks what his family said. Then he sees a person eating something. When he got closer, he see his discard face and got scared. Then other came’s but then a mysteries girl came. Chpt. 002 It begins: The girl came and manage to kill them all. Mic ask what her name his but gave him a gun and she tells him that the apocalypse is coming and told him to shoot these kind of people in the head and left. Back at his house, he looks at the gun and think what the girl said. He wonder what it meant. Next day at lunch, he and his friend are eating then Mic wanted to tell something. He told him that he was attack by weird looking people and a girl save him. Marcus ask if she hot and Mic show him the gun and he almost said out load. Mic told him what she said and Marcus said that just nonsense and all… suddenly a person is choking on the meat he ate. His girlfriend yells in help but then he gets back up. The girl relax but then he bites her in the neck. Everybody is shock of the scene. In the first floor, we see the security guard watching T.V. Then a person comes and knock the glass door. He tells her to stop that then even more came. He take his gun out and warn him then the glass doors broke. The guard shoots but they just kept coming. He only manage to kill one before he is eaten. Mic, Marcus and the rest runs for their live but as they get up to the second floor, they see its crawling with the undead. Mic and Marcus are terrified of the sight they see. “walkers” Mic said with a scared face. Then a walker came an attack Marcus but Mic manage to kill him by shooting them in the head. Chpt 003 Knowing each other: After killing one walker, grabs Marcus’s arm takes him to a passage way he knows. As they enter, a another person what to come too but is being pull in by many walkers. They tried to pull him back but the walkers rip him in half and killed him. There’s nothing they can do so they head up stairs and open a door that shows the rooftop. Marcus ask is this where you go and yes he does but couldn’t come to the rooftop this week because of wo… Then they heard a rifle sound and that when they meet a teen in rifles. He pointed it at them and ask if they are infected. They both told him there not one of them. He did a check and see if they don’t have any bites. After checking he head back to roof edge and begins shooting at the walkers. Mic ask who he is and he answered that his name is John and is a skilled rifle’s expert and he’s been here for a week because he knows about the apocalypse. Mic and Marcus introduce themselves but he already know since he also goes to this school but always hide most of his time. Mic ask how he knows about this. He answered that he was at his training ground when he some guy came in wonderlesly and he accidentally shot him. He check to see and he see that he is still active and tried to attack him but he manage to kill it by shooting him in the head. It seems that the only way to kill these walkers are to aim at their head. Just then, Mic’s phone ring and got a phone call from his brother. He’s scared as the walkers attack. Mic ask if he is at home then he pass the phone to her mother. She said that their ok but just then the T.V turns on automatically to make an announcement. Chpt 004 The message: At the government base, we see as the leaders makes decisions on this situation. Half of them said that they should leave it be while other said that we need to save the people that are left. They argue on what to do until one stand up to tell about something. He made a bunch of defenses at the Canada after the terrorist attack and he suggest to make an announcement to tell everybody to go to the border. One goes arguing about this, saying that there is no way they can say that many people as there are 100,000,000,000 people living in America. He ask the leader and he decide to go on it. They sent the message on T.V then they heard guns firing. They check and see that the walkers came in. There are just to many of them and they all got eaten. Then we see Mic and the others watching the announcement saying to go the Canada border as the military will protect everyone there. Walker information: Normal walkers These are your average walking dead that you see in movies. These normally walk really slow and you can easily out run them. But once they get there victim, They will never let go. Few may be easy to outrun but it you encounter a entire crowd, considered yourself a goner. To kill these things you have to aim at the head, no where else. |
| Long live Canada! That's um... quite a lot of people living in America. They're doomed! |
epicscreator said: Long live Canada! That's um... quite a lot of people living in America. They're doomed! Thanks for the quote and I'm guessing your from canada huh. |
| No, but I like Canada, especially their bacon, and I live in Las Vegas, Nevada. lol |
epicscreatorAug 22, 2012 2:21 PM
epicscreator said: No, but I like Canada, especially their bacon, and I live in Las Vegas, Nevada. lol Oh its nice to know. Wish I have some of that bacon since I havent eaten that in like 5 years. |
| Here is the second volume of Walkers. Enjoy :D Chpt 005 The escape part 1: After hearing the announcement, Mic tells his mom to take the family to the Canada border. Mom refuses to leave her son at a infested place but Mic yells at her that he handle it. A long pause is made then his mother said ok so she said that they’ll meet there. Mic ask if dad is there and she said that he is grabbing some weapons out of the garage. Mic said goodbye. Mic said the two to rally up but John refuse and said he rather stay here. Mic couldn’t let this go but he pointed him at gun point and said he rather rot here. Then he ask what about you family. Mother, father or sister. John widen his eyes and put his hand on his face. Then he look at him with a series look. He decided to go and that make Mic please. They all head down and see that there are only a few on the basement level of the school so they sneak by them and head the closest. Chpt 006 The escape part 2: In the closet, They think how they would get out of here. Marcus ask why they have something to defend themselves but he doesn’t get any. Mic looks around and grabs a broom, bamboo blade, and some very strong tape and made what he called it a broom bam blade (Ingredients: Broom, bamboo blade, and strong tape.). Marcus is impress and never knew he has much talent. He told him that his dad is a mechanic and seems that I have his talent. They head out of the closet and proceed with caution. But then they heard a scream that is coming from the stairs so they head there. They see a bunch a students and a teacher surrounded by the walkers. Mic, Marcus, and John go to rescued them. Marcus ask the girls if there ok which cause the men to be jealous. But them more walkers came so Mic leads them to one of the rooms. Chpt 007 The escape part 3: Once in the room, the teacher ask what are they doing with those weapons. Mic tells him to calm down but they all can’t since there people being eaten by those walkers. They continued to freak out until Marcus yell them to shut it. One of them ask what to do know and Mic said that were heading to the Canada border as it’s the only safe place and one of them added that we only got a year to get there. Mic ask what she means. She notice that they haven’t seen all of it as the government is planning to nuke the entire region. The others in shock and know everybody is freak out that they’ll get blast and turn into ashes. Marcus tells them to shut it again and said stop acting like babies. Mic ask if one them can drive a bus as he have a plan. One teen know how two as he steals them all the time. Everybody look at him with a confuse face and Mic is happy as there a bus just outside. But the teacher ask how are we gonna get there. He has an idea so they head out as the walkers are far. Chpt 008 The escape part 4: They head off as Mic leads them to a wall with a big crack. They entered and see it’s a weapon maker room. Mic begins to make and craft weapons. He give them each a weapon to handle and must take care as they can brake if use to much. The teacher ask why you made this but he said to stay focus but one ask how as there are many out there. Mic head out and kills 4 walkers with his Nailer(Ingredients: bat and nails). He brings them back. John ask and he tells him a question of why the walkers don’t attack each as he answered his own question as they can tell each other apart because of there smell. He begin to chop them apart and tells everybody to where this. One ask if this is gonna work so he’ll try it out. He steps in a crowd of walker being frighten as one comes up but passes by. He signal the rest to come as they head off. They see as it work so they manage to pass by without resorting to fighting. Then they heard thunder as the rain came. Mic said desperately no as the rain washes off the dead flesh they put on. Then the walkers heads up to attack them Mic hit it and shouted run out load. Chpt 009 The escape part 5: Now they head to the bus as they fight of the walkers that are at there path. They kept fighting at there best but some couldn’t make it. Mic, John, Marcus and 5 others manage to make to the bus and left the school. In the bus, they talk how are were gonna get to Canada as soon as possible. One of them said that maybe there might be a military escort ar… Then is interrupted when the teacher ask when he see something flying towards him. It was a truck. They tried but they crashed to it and every turn black. Mic tries to open his eyes and see that everyone is dead. Then he see a walker who is has big strong muscles. Mic grabs his nailer but got spotted by the walker. He runs to him then Mic whack it but he block it and grab him. Mic hit him with pepper spray that let him loose. They both fought for a while until Mic lost his balance as his leg hurts seeming the bus crash aftereffects. He is grab by the neck as what Mic called it a bulk-up ready to eat his face off . But then John and Marcus came and distracted it long enough for Mic to kill it with his chainsaw. Mic fell right asleep after. Chpt 010 the escape(epilogue): Mic wakes up and see that there in someone’s house. Marcus came to see if he is ok and see he is. Mic ask where is…then heard a rifle noise, knowing it is him shooting the walkers outside. Mic ask if there are any other then Marcus put a sad look on his face which give him to believe there the only ones left. Mic felt that he let them down and begins to give up but Marcus wouldn’t aloud it and make him come to his senses. He ask if this the same who he known since there just grade schoolers. Then Mic remember about the girl he met and tell Marcus that their going there because he has a hunch that she know more then the walker coming. Marcus found this stupid as he thinks the girl he met might not be in the same place. But He tells Marcus to trust him as he will solve this problem. Marcus looks at him and see that he is determine so he goes ahead with this. Mic tells John that their leaving so they head off to the same neighborhood where he met the girl. Walker information: Bulk-ups These are the older brother that tries to protect their siblings. These have very strong muscles and biceps that can take out an entire house. Once it sees its pray, they’ll run to it as fast as it can. These are hard to kill as you got to sneak then go by force as it know where its weak spot is and he’ll do anything to protect it’s head. |
| very good...although I'm no zombie fan..so i can't give a usefull comment, more usefull would be someone with more experience in zombie stories..but , i find it entertaining .... You should sent it in some Anime production house, if you are near one, the better..or just sent the story to a good publishing house...if you have that kind of ambitions... |
| Don't depend on anyone, because even your shadow leaves you, when you're in darkness... |
Mafortion said: very good...although I'm no zombie fan..so i can't give a usefull comment, more usefull would be someone with more experience in zombie stories..but , i find it entertaining .... You should sent it in some Anime production house, if you are near one, the better..or just sent the story to a good publishing house...if you have that kind of ambitions... Can you give me like a site link because that is what I'm hoping for. |
| http://www.fictionpress.com http://www.fanfiction.net these are some sites in which you can with easy get some directions and some experience...but they are not for publishing.... google a little bit... and you will find even better sites for that, than this what i found now.. http://www.animemegaverse.com/index.php?id=Webmasters/Fan%20Submission.html |
| Don't depend on anyone, because even your shadow leaves you, when you're in darkness... |
Mafortion said: http://www.fictionpress.com http://www.fanfiction.net these are some sites in which you can with easy get some directions and some experience...but they are not for publishing.... google a little bit... and you will find even better sites for that, than this what i found now.. http://www.animemegaverse.com/index.php?id=Webmasters/Fan%20Submission.html Thank you very much. |
| I can't say much about the zombie story. I didn't actually read all of it completely. But I did enjoy the first story. (Though maybe it's because i'm partial to darker story's) I liked the ending. |
| Here is super powers in full detail. Here is where their is diologe along with the explanation of whats going on. Super powers chapter 001: We become super heroes. Random kid: HELP! Bully leader: Shut it as no one will help you. Get ready for a wedgie. A kid is in trouble as he upset a bunch of bullies during recess at Blakes creek elementary school. They being the process of the wedgie until. Bishop: Hey stop right there. Bully lackey: Who are you? All four: We are the amazing four as we fight for truth and justice! Bully group: HA HA HA HA HA HA! But they soon regret laughing as they begin to fight. They all have amazing reflexes and they dodge a lot of the bullies punches and kicks. They use team work to defeat them which cause them to retreat. Bully leader: We will never forget this! Cindy: Are you ok? Random kid: Oh thank you very much! Your really are my heroes. Once school ended. The four walk with every kid clapping their hands and cheering for the four as they are well know for helping any kid in need. As they walk to their homes, they being to talk about their day. Zeke: Man I never thought that today will be even better than last time. Zeke is a young energetic Mexican who always acts with its fists rather then thinking. He is the strongest when it comes to close combat. Cindy: Ya I never thought we go up against bullies. Cindy is a soft hearted girl and her combat is weak but she make up with her thinking of the situation by using objects to help her in body movement. Some say she has PSI Trisha: Well we are amazing and we could of done it without our leader and best friend. Trisha is a blonde hair girl who is well known for her speed and can be shocking to say the least. Bishop: Oh you guys. Bishop is a tough boy who suffer a lot when he was in the first grade. He decided to stop suffering and start doing something as when he started the fifth grade. All this friends have one thing common and that's their passion for super heroes. They are all big super hero fans that much that they hope that one day they'll become like them. Bishop: I hope that we all get are powers someday and when that comes, we be able to help everyone and stop bad guys. The rest: YA! After a few days, the weekend starts and Cindy is hosting a sleep over. They do what do in a sleep over and that is having as much fun as possible. Once it got to about 1 am, they all fell asleep except for Bishop. Bishop: Oh I don't want to sleep yet. He tip tow quietly and he decide to go watch a little T.V upstairs. When he turn it on, he saw a commercial that got him interested. Seller: Do you ever want to become a super hero but don't have any powers? Well look no more as I have got what you need. All you have to do is pick up the phone and call by 555-555. Don't wait as this offer will be gone soon. In an instant, he pick up the phone and begin to order. The very next day, he got the package and is so excited about. He called his friends to tell of the big news. They all meet at the school and they put them on. Cindy: Ok I don't think its working. Bishop: Are you sure? Zeke: I think you got rip amigo. Trisha: Yep. Zeke: Ah man I was so hoping for it to. He punches a tree and everybody is surprise that it did gave them super powers. They all got a power depending on what they are wearing. Zeke wears power gloves that give him increase strength of his combat plus it gives him knowledge of other fighting artes. Zeke: This is mucha beuno! Trisha wears the boots that gives her super speed and along with its rubber coding, gives her electricity. Trisha: does anybody want a churro that came from Mexico? Cindy wears nerve senesces which gave her the power of telekinesis. Cindy: Wow I'm actually levitating 3 heavy cars. Finally Bishop has flight and super strength just like Zeke. Bishop: I can't believe we got super powers. I must be dreaming. Zeke: "Pinch" Bishop: Ow! As they all talk about how amazing it is to have powers, suddenly a person appears. Mysterious person: So how is the products kids? |
| Here is my story,although its not finished: The Haunted Mansion June 1944 Aaron`s parents never talked to him much but instead they paid more attention to his younger sister, Elizabeth. Elizabeth had a weak body and was always sick. One cold winter evening, Aaron went into Elizabeth`s room, he put his scarf on top of the heater and told her that he was going to play a trick on their parents and make them worry about him. Before Aaron left the room, he turned the heater without looking at what was on it and completely forgot that he had left his scarf on there. Aaron went into his room and hid in the closet and laughed at the sight of his parents worrying. His parents were sleeping and Elizabeth had fallen asleep as well. The house started burning due to the scarf that Aaron had left on the heater. They tried to escape, they screamed “HELP HELP!” But no one came and the house was burnt down and the family died along with it. 12 years later…. August 1956 A new house was built in the same place as the house that had burnt down 12 years ago. The Phantomhive family had moved into the house and had settled down to enjoy their happy life in their new home. Their happiness didn`t last long because strange things started happening and one by one, each and every one of them were murdered. 50 years later…. October 2006 One day, as Isaac was walking home from school with his younger sister, Christine. Christine started running and she told Isaac to hurry up. Isaac chased Christine and she started running even faster than she was before. When Isaac finally caught up with Christine, he grabbed her hand and tried to remember the way to get back home. He looked around but he finally came to the conclusion that they were lost. Isaac and Christine kept walking and tried to find a way to get back home. 6 hours later…. It was night fall but they still hadn`t found a way to get back home. They were scared and hungry and there was no one around because they had wondered helplessly into the woods. They walked and walked, and from afar, they spotted a house so they went to the house, hoping what the person that lived in there was kind enough to offer them food and shelter. When they arrived at the house, they realized that it was an old and broken down and that no one could possibly be living in there. It was getting cold and it seemed like there was going to be a blizzard. So they went into the old house, hoping that it would give them shelter for the night. 12:00 midnight…. Christina and Isaac woke up because they heard a voice calling out to them, the voice said “HELP HELP!” Christina and Isaac were curious about where the voice was coming from so they followed the voice until they reached a room. When they reached the room, there seemed to be no one there put they could feel that a mysterious presence was in the room with them. They were really scared so they ran out of the room, they slammed the door shut and went back to where they were before they had heard the voice. They pretended that they had never heard the voice and fell asleep. The next day…. Isaac and Christina were hungry and cold but they knew that they had to leave the old house for they had to find their way back home. When they opened the door to get out of the old house, they saw a garden with a family having fun together instead of the forest that was there the day before. Isaac closed the door and went to the back door hoping that he would see the forest. When Isaac opened the back door, he saw a fire with the same family dying and calling out “HELP HELP” he then closed that door and decided to go to the last a final door. When Isaac went to the door, he saw a family being murdered, one member of the family was choked to death, the other tortured to death, another had their head cut off and the youngest and final one was shot to death. Isaac was really scared and so he covered his sister`s eyes, not wanting her to see the horrible thing that he had just seen. |
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| Awkward moment ... |
| Don't depend on anyone, because even your shadow leaves you, when you're in darkness... |
| I like where you going for the story Angel. |
| It was a joke ...( awkward moment) but no one got it...damn i suck at this don't I hahah Angel..the story is very good...but why not opening it in a new topic..it would easier for you and for us to read it :D |
| Don't depend on anyone, because even your shadow leaves you, when you're in darkness... |
| Here is the second detail chapter of Super powers. Enjoy :D The three gets their guard up but Bishop knows who the person is. Bishop: Hey don't worry, he is the guy who advertise the gear we have for our powers Cindy: Oh so he must be a nice gentleman. But when the guy heard that, he laugh like it was a very funny joke which cause the other to be confuse. Mysterious person: Sorry for the burst of laughter. My name is Noko Fertewa and for now on, you work for me. He speaks in a very calm and low voice tone. Trisha: Why? Bishop: I say it's a good idea as he can alert us if there is any trouble. Noko: Ya something like that. Anyway be ready as you might get it faster then you think. After that, things for the four of them thought it would be the best turn for the greater good. But all that is about to change in an instate as soon as the school day ends. Zeke: Today sure is boring with all those lessons. Cindy: Ya and we didn't even get any new from Noko yet. Bishop: I'm guessing it might of a been a slow- Just before he finish that sentence, he notice a person wearing a ski mask trying to break in the car. Bishop: I think this is our time to use are powers into good use. They get close to the crook and gets ready to face him. Crook: You kids shouldn't be seeing this. Now I'm gonna have silence you. Bishop: Stop what your doing or else face the wrath of the amazing four. The crook begin to burst out laughing but stops in a instate once Zeke shows his strength by punching the car. He began to run as quickly as he can but Trisha keep blocking his trail every turn he takes. They all surround the crook but he pull out his gun and begin shooting at them randomly. They dodge it but Cindy got scratch by the bullet which really frighten her. She stay away until the others caught the crook. They heard sirens showing that the cops are here so they all decided to leave to avoid unwanted attention. Zeke: Yes we are able to face are first bad guy. Well not like those villains but its still awesome. Trisha: The crook put up a fight but we show that crime never pays right Cindy. Cindy? Cindy: Oh umm ya it never pays. says with a soft voice. Bishop: Lets just remember this, the crook is just the ticket for what we can do. We will soon face those that have equal power to us and that will be are most memorable memory. Zeke and Trisha: YA! Cindy: Ok As time past, it came night time but luckily for Cindy her parents aren't home. But once she got home. Cindy: I gotta get some rest after what happen. I wish I could tell them but- Noko: You didn't want to ruin the mood? Cindy: Huh!? Noko: Don't worry I'm not here to hurt you. Cindy: What do you want? Noko: I'm here because I seem to take an interest in you. I don't know why but you seem different from most kids I saw. Cindy: Get out. Noko: Sure but let me give you a warning. Things are only gonna get harder from here. Don't think its all fun and games like you see in those Tv shows. I'm saying this to you because you look like the weakest link compare to the others. He left with a smirk on his face. Cindy now is even more afraid of what's up ahead now. |
| Now he is a detail look on my walker story. Mic: Hey be careful I use them for helping people! Jonny: Shut your trap you piece of shit. Get ready for a whole new level of ass wooping. Mic is an average teen who thinks he can solve every ones problems. But real life takes a turn and starts to show how it would not always end on a happy note. He is always stubborn but he never leaves a person in pearl. Buck: So what should would do with him for messing up are time with the nerds? Gabe: OH OH how about the football to the nuts? Jonny: That is a great idea : ) He grabs the footballs that he got from practice and begins throwing one. But then Mic is save by his best friend Name Marcus who happens to be the jock of the team. Marcus: Really dude? Jonny: Oh Marcus of thought you went home? Marcus: Well I decided to get some extra practice today. : C Both Buck and Gabe: Ok were letting him go! Stop staring at us like that : ( Marcus is a strong natural born Playboy but he is also one of the nicest people of the team. He always cares and help his friends out of trouble. Marcus: You got about 5 seconds to leave or else I'll tell coach. All three: Run! Marcus: Why didn't you ask me for help? Mic: I thought I could handle this myself ok! :O Marcus: Look you gotta have to face facts that you can't solve everyone's problems just because you wanted to. There are some things you can't change at all. Heck even I knew that. Mic: You just give up when the going gets tuff!? I'm going home. Marcus: Mic wait! Huhhhh. I didn't mean it like that but. Uforntionaly for Mic, he cannot escape the cold hard truth of what his friend said. Even at home, he gets the same exact words. Mic's Mom: Have you got into another fight!? Mic: I have to do something right!? Mic's Dad: Son you gotta face the facts that there are some thing you cannot change all! Mic: I'm going out for walk Doors slams. Mic's Mom: I'm really worry about him. I just cant think of what will happen if those symptoms shows up. Mic's Dad: Please don't mention that as I want to protect him ever since that day. While Mic is taking a walk. He begins to think what both his friend and his dad on what they say. Mic: ( I wonder if all I'm am doing all this time I've have wasted all what I was ment for?) Huh? Just then, he spotted a person eating something. When he gets close to him, the sight that he have seen, is not what of he have seen at all. Mic: Ahhhhhh! More of them suddenly came that make Mic stumple as he gets surrounded by them. As he is about to suffer like the body laying around. A mysterious girl came and kick them away. Mic: Who are you? |
| Ok here is another story I'm writing. Its called Pure lovers which follows a Tomboy name Tina who wanted to make her third year in highschool the best year yet for her as well as her friends. But is stalk by someone. Later she finds out that it is her old baby sitter and childhood friend Bruce who came back to for fill his promise they made of marring each other and he wont take no for an answer. The more he shows his love to her, the more she believe its. “Rinnnnnnnnnnn..” Today is gonna be a start of a very fun year. Tina’s Mother: Breakfast is ready dear. Tina: Thanks mom but that’s ok, All I need is toast. Tina’s Dad: Just be careful when walking on lone ok Tina: Ok dad I will(sometime I think you worried to much =-=) Tina: (Hello their my name is Tina lowll and I way look a lot like a boy with a girls name but I am a girl and I get that I look like a prince. Today starts my third year in Tree hills high school and I’m hoping to make it the best year yet for me as well as my friends.) As Tina walks to school, she felt that someone is following him. She begins to get very nervous so she turn around really fast but when she did, Nobody was their. Tina: I could of swore somebody was behind me. Maybe is just my imagination.(I can’t believe I let dad allude me with his worries -__-) Little that she knows that her assumption is true as someone is follow her. Mysterious Person: Tina.(deep voice) I have found you Once she has made it to her high school called Tree hill high, Tina heard her name calling and sees that here friends are waiting for her. Mimi: Tina Hey! Clowey: Hey Tina how is it going. Tina: Hey there. They are both twins but they are completely different from each other. Mime is the one with pig tails and is the hyperactive one who always act childish while Clowey is the self mature one. Like any friends they walk to class with each other and begins to talk about the latest gossip which Tina isn’t interested but this is an exception to them. Clowey: Have you heard Tina? I heard that the popular transfer Japanese student talks about you a lot. Mimi: OOOOH I think Yuki has a crush on you. Tina: REALLY!? I mean. I don’t know what to… Just then a shadow figure appear that is watching her. She check quickly but nothing is there. Both: Tina is there something wrong? Tina: No nothing. Once they got to class, Tina could not get that feeling off of being stalk. She gaze at the window thinking who could it be as he feels that its something similar. Its like he know the person. At the end of the day she decides to walk home to shake that feeling off. Mimi: Uhhhh do you have to go? Tina: Ya because I just feel like it for some reason. Clowey: Ok take care. Tina: I really letting this get the better of me. I hope a good night sleep wi- Just then a bunch of guys put the jump on her. Guy 9: Ohh what do we got here Guy 4: Why this one, She is too much resemble of a boy. Leader: Hey its my pick. So how about we have a little fun? Tina never felt this afraid ever since she was a child. She close her eyes tight hoping this is over fast but when she took a peek, she sees that some one is fighting them off. He grabs the leader and put his neck on the side walk Leader: Please let me go ugh! Mysterious person: Don’t you ever do that again and if you did, I’ll kill you >=) The leader and the rest head out and run in fear. Tina: Thank you very much <=) But as Tina got close to him, he hugs her out of nowhere acting like he have never seen her. Mysterious person: Oh Tina I finally found you <: ) Tina: I’m sorry but I’m confuse? I don’t remember making older friends. And also can you stop hugging me as its getting a little creepy. Saying that made him make a threatening face. Tina backs away from him as he leaves but before he leaves he had this to say. Mysterious Person: It seems that I’ll have to put the memories back into you >=) The very next day during class, Tina could not shake what he said. She thought long and hard if she ever made any older friends but just couldn’t get any results. History Teacher: Tina would you repeat what I just say? Tina: OH ummmmmm? Assistant principle: Tina could you come with me a bit. Tina: Sure!( That really have save me from embarrassment <:D) Assistant principle: I have call you because your cousin came and he wanted to talk to you. Tina: Really because the last time I have saw, he is living in Montana.(He could of at least told me. That idiot always like to surprise me. -__-) Just as they have enter the room, She is shock to see that it’s the same person she saw yesterday. The assistant principle left for them to talk and Tina wanted to say something but could not say a single word as he closes the day to let them talk. |
| Your new story is very interesting, and I liked ( honestly i think i saw it for the first time in here ) that the lead character talked to the reader, as it was in an anime episodes, very clever. I think you wrote it first since we share stories. But there were parts that i didn't get the story right, maybe because of personal pronouns,( he, she, it )I have the feeling you made mistakes in some parts, or is it just me. I rarely comment grammar mistakes, but very often personal pronouns are the key in getting the story right. Although I'm not the one to talk about it hehehe But you probably have the story in your head already, but your unable to put it exactly as it is in your head, because that happens with me a lot. And i got the feeling you were rushing the introduction of the story. She already got in some mess, and already someone who followed her saved her life. Try to slow down the fable in the story. And the end was good, intriguing ! |
| Don't depend on anyone, because even your shadow leaves you, when you're in darkness... |
Mafortion said: Your new story is very interesting, and I liked ( honestly i think i saw it for the first time in here ) that the lead character talked to the reader, as it was in an anime episodes, very clever. I think you wrote it first since we share stories. But there were parts that i didn't get the story right, maybe because of personal pronouns,( he, she, it )I have the feeling you made mistakes in some parts, or is it just me. I rarely comment grammar mistakes, but very often personal pronouns are the key in getting the story right. Although I'm not the one to talk about it hehehe But you probably have the story in your head already, but your unable to put it exactly as it is in your head, because that happens with me a lot. And i got the feeling you were rushing the introduction of the story. She already got in some mess, and already someone who followed her saved her life. Try to slow down the fable in the story. And the end was good, intriguing ! Ya sorry about that. Its just that this is a tradedy, Phycological, romance and I thought I plan it that way it would be understandible. |
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| Second chapter of Pure lovers. Mysterious person: Are you really that surprise to see me Tina. Tina becomes really nervous when he saw him again. But she stand ups to him. Tina: Ok! Who the hell are you and how do you know me!? >:O When she ask that, He gets very furious and slams one of his left arm on the table. He than quickly smile and gets close to her. She backs away but he grabs both of her arms while she struggles. Tina: What the hell are you.. He then kiss her which Tina is took by surprise. She couldn’t resist but she snaps out of it and slap him hard which only made him smile deeply. Mysterious person: (laughing softly) Oh Tina, you are always cute when your angry. Tina: Ok you really are freaking me…Wait! Huh! Bruce is that you? Bruce: Hmm. I’m really glad that you remember me. You see, I have always been in love with when we first met. I have been looking for you for so long but know that I found, I will never let you go. After that event, She could barly go through the day at school. Once after school, she goes to her home as fast as she could. Tina’s Mom: Welcome home. Tina: Umm mom is dad home? Tina’s Mom: He is still at work. Tina: Oh thank goodness <: ). Umm anyway I wanted to ask you something. Tina’s Mom: Sure what is it. Tina: Do you remember any person name Bruce by any chance? Tina’s Mom: Oh ya I remember him. It is so glad of him to help us at the state we were in back then. Oh did you met him today. Tina: No I just wanted to ask. I’ll be at my room. She heads to room and lie on the bed as she started to remember about the past. Tina: I don’t get it. I remember that I was a very hyperactive child but I was also a very fragile child who gets in trouble. Bruce has always been there to protect me and knows who I really am. I have always remember that smile as well but now that I look him after for so long, I wonder what happen to him after all those years. When Tina goes to sleep, she starts to remember about that certain moment when Bruce is crying that he has to move. Tina: Don’t cry Bruce: I can’t “Sob” because I like you “sob” <: ( Tina: I like you to. Here take this. Its my moms ear ring. She told me that if you give this to the person you like, you’ll be with each other forever. Bruce: Ok I’ll take this as a promise. If we ever see each other again, We’ll be together forever. Tina: I’m hoping for it. Right after that, she makes ups as the sun rises. Tina: I’m guessing I didn’t remember the promise until I slept. I was a young kid back them. I don’t even know what I ment is true.(Pause) I wonder where I put that ear ring. Later she gets dress and decided to go to school early. Tina: Oh I sure hope that my math teacher gives me the credit for this paper( He really is one harsh teacher O_O) Then suddenly a harsh wind blew her paper away. Tina: OH NO I’M NOT LOSING THAT CREDIT >: ( But just then, Bruce came and got the paper. Bruce: Here is your paper. Tina: Umm thanks =__=. Hey I wanted to talk about yest- She notice a blink of light on the side walk. She wonder what it is so she pick it up and notice it’s her mom’s ear ring. Tina: Is this the ear ring. Bruce: Oh, I’ve been taking care of that for a very long time. Hey where is yours? Tina: Well I don’t know where I- He then suddenly grab her and puts the ear ring on her ear by force. Tina: OWWWW WHAT THE HELL! >:O Tina didn’t wanted to be near him so she run off to the school quickly. |
| Third chapter of Walkers. Enjoy. Everybody begins to panic and run as the walkers begins to attack them. Every person begins to think for them selves. Mic and Marcus tries to escape the hell hole that is once their school. Marcus: Tell me do you know where you are going. Mic: Look I know where we could be safe from all of this. Mic leads Marcus to a crack in the wall Marcus: This is just a crack on the wall. Mic: Ya but it leads to the stair well that takes us to the roof top. As they enter, a teen comes up and is all scared and confuse. Teen Boy: Please help me! Mic: Ok. We can But a bunch of walkers came up and grab his legs. Teen Boy: HELP ME! They both tried to pull him back as he scream in pain. The many walkers begins to eat his his hips. It reach to a point where it rip him in half. The look on the boy’s face really made them feel really sad how he die so young. Marcus: Come on Mic. Lets get going up stair. Mic: But I just can’t- Marcus: He is dead now! There is nothing you couldn’t do. Mic: Ok lets go. Once they head up to the roof top of the school, they are so happy to see that there are no walkers around. Mic and Marcus heads to the edge of the roof and sees all the chaos that is happening around them. After seeing the sight, the turn around only to see a point of a rifle point close to his face. Rifle teen: Stay where you are! Mic: Ok look we are not hostile! Marcus: Me nether! Rifle teen: Your not bitten are you? Mic: What do you mean about that. He then turns and throws a knife at upper body walker. Mic goes to get an up close look and sees it’s the same one that got ripped in half. He is in deep shock of finding out. Rifle teen: That is why. You’ll become one. Marcus: Thanks for the tip. I’m Marcus and that over there is Mick. What is your name? John: My name is John and I already know who you two are as know how popular you two got. Marcus: Oh I see. So are you a student here? John: No. I just came here to prepare when this happen. Once he said that, Marcus came up to him and grab hold of his shirt all angry. Marcus: WHY DIDN’T YOU WARN US! John: You wouldn’t Believe me. Marcus: WHY YOU SON OF A BITCH! Before it got out of hand, Mic came in and stop the commotion. Mic: Stop Ok. Beside we wouldn’t believe him anyway. Hell it’s the same thing when the girl said that to me. So what do we do now? John: Well we could- He gets interrupted when they heard the cell phone ring coming from Mic’s pocket. He answers it. Mic: Hello? Carly: MIC! Mic: Carly! Or you ok!? Carly: Yes we are fine. I’m in the car as well as Ben as well. We are in the car as Mom and dad are taking care of those bad people outside. Mic: Are they doing ok!? Carly: Yes. Listen they want me to tell you to go to the border of Canada as its AHHHH! She is in so much shock after seeing a walker up close in person that it made her drop the phone. Mic: Hello!? HELLO!? What does she mean about Canada? John: I know what she mean. I heard the public announcement from my radio saying that all people who are still alive out there must reach the Canada border. Mic goes strait to the door. Mic: Come on guys. We need to head out now. John: Sorry but count me out. |
| Fouth chapter of walkers. Enjoy. At a government base somewhere located at the desert of new Mexico. The main sargeants and generals began discussing on what to do about this situation. So far nobody is agreeing to the words both sides have to say. General 1: There is now way I going for this plan! General 2: Are you saying that you will abandon many innocent people General 1: I’m not saying that! I’m saying that we couldn’t save that many people The conversation continues with many of the captains and generals arguing with each other until one made a suggesting. General 3: I have something to say. Everybody puts their focus on what he is about to say. General 3: How about we get everybody to go to the fort that is build at the Canadian border. General 1: What! No that cant be done. I don’t know if we have enough room for everybody!? Sargeant 1: What are you talking about? General 1: Oh yes. We didn’t mention this to the rest but we have build a fortress at the border between America and Canada after the fighting that took place their. Sargeant: Oh I see. When the terrorist has launch a full out attack. That day we call the border the attack zone. General 3: We have a fortified fortress there and it has lots of room enough to fit over millions of people. Everybody begins to think and they have made a decision. General 1: All in favor of going with this plan say “I”. Everybody: “I” Sargeant 2: Alright I’ll contact all the T.V station to sent the message. General 1: Alright people we head out and help those people in need. But before they head out, they have heard gunshot noises. They open the door and then they suddenly got attack by walkers. Everybody begin to fight back but there is just too many of them to handle. One by one they all got torn to shreds and having their guts eating as they scream in pain. Sargeant 2: Damn it! The sarge did all he could to hold them back but is too late and ended being food for the monsters. But then they suddenly stop as they heard a command from someone. Mysterious person: How are you feeling. Sargeant 2: ….. The sarge is all in shock that one of the sargeants are in the same as the walkers. Sargeant 3: Eat him. The walkers begin eating him. After that, he receives a phone call from one of his subordinates. Henchmen: Magioun the boss wants to see you now. Magioun: Ok I’ll be there. Hangs up. It seems that our plan to annulated the humans is in motion. He leaves the base while an eye ball reflects on him. |
| Fifth chapter of walkers. Enjoy. Both Mic and Marcus are confuse on why he decided to not leave with them. Mic: Why not John? Can you see what is out there right now. What about your family? John: DON’T TALK ABOUT THEM! The two of them notice that he has family troubles. John: You two can go ok. I’ll stay here where its safe. Mic: John I way have only met you but I know you have at least someone who cares about you don’t you? When John heard about it, he begins to grab his bag and head out the door. John: Well what are you waiting for!? Lets go. Mic: Don’t worry, We’ll go check to see that you family is ok once I check if mines is ok. John: Ya whatever. They head down stairs but see that the crack on the wall is fill with them pushing threw. They decided to keep going down stairs. Once their, Marcus peeks his head and sees that nobody on the basement level. Marcus: Ok its clear. But what they didn’t suspect is a surprise attack when a walker just grab Marcus’s leg. Mic: Marcus! Loads his gun John: Wait! The sound will only attract more of them. Mic thinks of a way to kill it without making a sound. He looks around and sees a pen laying on the floor. He grabs it and use it sharp point to hit the head. Marcus: Thank you Mic. But then they heard footstep and sees that a bunch of walkers are heading this way. They all head to the nearest 4oom which happens to be the tools room and close the door before they pass by. Mic: That was a close one. Marcus: Hey Mic can you help me on something? Mic: What is Marcos. Marcus: Can you build a weapon for me. Please I need something to defend my self. Mic: Ok give me a second. Looks around for material. John: Can I ask what you are doing? Marcus: Oh ya, you may not notice, but Mic is very skilled when making new weird stuff out of two object. Whether its simple or complicated, he can build it with just about anything. Mic: Ok here. This is the broom bow blade I made for the both of us. (Items: Broom stick+ Bamboo blade. Marcus: Thanks. Just then, they heard screaming so they head up and see that there are a bunch of students and a teacher being surround by walkers. Male Student 1: Stay back! Teacher: Look out! The walker attacks but then Mic and Marcus manage to clear them all out. Mic: Are you all ok? Female student 1: Thank you so much! Marcus: We can’t stay here. Lets look for a room shall we ladies. Male student 2: Show off. They head to the nearest classroom so they can rest for a little bit but its hard to do since everybody is freaking out. Marcus: SHUT UP! Everybody calm down. Male student 3: Calm down! How can we calm down when those things are out there! Mic: Look if we work together then we can get threw this! Male student 1: He is right. If we want to get out of here then we have to work together before this entire place blows sky high. Marcus: What do you mean? Female student 2: You haven’t heard? The announcement said that we got a year before they nuke the entire USA border Sky high. Mic, Marcus, And John are in shock of what they hear. |
| Sixth chapter of walkers. Enjoy. Mic: What do you mean they are gonna blow up America!? Female student 2: Well they said that they are not gonna let this walkers to spread across the world. Marcus: Looks like the intensity just been ramp up. Teacher: Can I suggest something here. John: Go right ahead. Teacher: While I was checking the window, I notice that there is a bus just at the entrance of the school. Plus there are no walkers there. Male student 2: HELL NO I’M NOT GOING OUT THERE AGAIN! Marcus: He is right. Unless we think of something, there is no way we could pass all those walkers. Mic? Mic sees outside and wonder something. Mic: How come they don’t eat each other? He took a good long look and notice something. Mic: Hey Marcus come and help me with something. Marcus: What do you need help on. As two walkers pass by. Mic and Marcus sneak up on them and give the killing blow to the head. They bring the two bodies back to the classroom. Female student 1: Ok why did you bring those things here? Mic: Because I have a plan. You see I just notice this. Why doesn’t the walkers attack them selves? Its because they eat fresh flesh from the living. They don’t like eating rotten flesh which is why they don’t attack. That is why, opens the body by force, and use it to cover our smell. Teacher: Good idea. You seem like a very smart student. Mic: Well as smart as I could be. Male student 2: No way I’m covering my self in dead flesh. John: Then stay here and be annulated then. Male student 2: … Mic cuts up the body and everybody begins to spread the guts and blood threw out their body. Mic: Ok everybody follow us. We will walk into dangerous territory and the slightest mistake will prove fatal. Everybody: Got it! Everybody heads outs. They head and see a bunch of walkers. Everybody is scared to move on. Seeing this, Mic decide to head on to see if this work. Once he head to the group of walkers, he becomes a lot in stress but is calm when he sees that his statement is true. Mic: Come on guys. Everything goes as plan. Mic, Marcus and John takes the front and leads the survivors out of the school. Once they got to the parking lot, they see that the walkers are everywhere. John: Come on. Don’t stop. They quickly run out of the parking lot as fast as they could. Everything goes well until they heard a thunder noise. Teacher: Did you hear that? Then drops of water came in. Male student 3: Its raining!? Marcus: Hey you don’t think? As the water washes off the smell, a walker pass by them. Hoping that they are ignored, he suddenly attack Mic but manage to slice his head off before he was able to bite. Mic: EVERYBODY RUN! Its now a hell zone they need to run threw. |
| Third chapter of Super powers. Enjoy The next day they are all at Bishop house designing their costume. They have a lot of fun and laughs as to making their outfits. But one stands out from the trio as Cindy couldn’t stop thinking about what Noko said. Noko: (Sure but let me give you a warning. Things are only gonna get harder from here. Don’t think its all fun and games like you see in those Tv shows. I’m saying this to you because you look like the weakest link compare to the others.) Bishop notice her face expression. Bishop: Hey are you ok? You look kinda down. Cindy: Oh its nothing. I’m just felt a little queezy that is all. Bishop: I know your hiding something. Cindy: Umm. Bishop: Don’t worry about it. Tell me if you feel like talking about it ok? Cindy felt a little comfort after hearing Bishops strong sense of words. But even that she still didn’t want to tell them about what happen yesterday. After a few hours, they costume are ready. Bishop: All right now its complete. Look at mine costume guys. Bishop’s costume has a simple look to it. Basically it’s a red cape with a red mask but the cape has the mark of a beast face. Zeke: Wow it looks good. But not as great as mine. Zeke costume has what any karate outfit look like only except its in a different color. Its has a blue color around black out lines and has a fist on the back. Trish: Ok? Well I think mine just look cute. Trish’s costume has the designer look with a glitter like shirt and pants that is in her favorite shade of blue that matches her shirt. Cindy: That looks like any normal girls wear. How would that hide your identity? Trish: I got this mask to help. So how about you? Cindy: Well. She shown her the costume. Its mostly only thick black lines that she made out of paper. Trish: Your seems fine? Bishop: I think I like it. It has a very simple look to it and plus it doesn’t look complicated. Cindy: Umm Thanks. blushes. Bishop gets up and begins to say something. Bishop: Ok everybody, today is the day that we become something. Ever since the first grade when we first met, we have one thing in common, super heroes. We always want to be the crime fighters and protect innocent people from villains evil wrath. Since then we have swore to help anyone in need. Today we are really now called the amazing 4. Trisha: Ya! same time. Zeke: Si! same time. Cindy: Sure. saids in a soft voice. The next day while they are walking to school. They happen to met up with Noko. Noko: Step this way. Bishop: Why not just tell us here? Noko: I don’t want people to see me. I’m keeping a low profile. Bishop: Oh I see. Is it so that nobody will know that we are super heroes Noko: Sure. They head to a part of the neighborhood where there isn’t any people around. Noko: Good news. I Just found some work for you. Trisha: You mean we get to face a villain!? Bishop and Zeke: YA! Cindy: Ya perfect(DAMN! I didn’t thought this would happen fast.) Noko: Here is a picture of him. Noko shows them the picture of the villain. The 4 took a look and see a man who has a skeleton look. Noko: His name is the screamer. He will be your first assignment. Hope you are ready? Bishop: We sure are. So where is he? Noko: He is in san-Francisco robbing a bank. Bishop: Umm that is far away from where we are here in Denver. Trish: I could get there. Zeke: And let you have the fun!? Noko: Don’t worry about. Noko claps both of his and manage to teleport them in front of the of the bank in san-fransico. Trisha: Wow! Noko: Your villain is up ahead. Good luck. said with a smirk as he leaves. Bishop: Oh crap! Zeke: QUE! Bishop: We forgot to put our costume. They all head to the nearest phone booth to change into their costume. Bishop: Ok is everybody ready? Everybody: Yes. Bishop: Lets go then. They all head to the bank and sees that there is commotion. The police have the whole place surround. Bishop: Lets go. Cindy: Are you sure we should be out in public? How about we find another way in and once we capture him, we’ll catch everybody by surprise. Bishop: Hmmmmm? People do like surprises. Ok. They head around, avoided people to not attract attention. Once they got to the back of the bank entrance. Once inside, they see that there is lot of damage done and people lying around. They check to see if they are ok. Zeke: Oye? Estance bein? Trish: Hey are you alright? Bishop: Their ok. They are just knock out. Zeke: Ok that is proof enough that he is here. So lets split up and look for him. Bishop: Ok. Cindy: Umm I don’t think that’s a…good….idea? Everybody left before hearing her words. Cindy: I can’t believe this is happening. But what Noko said, I’m starting wonder if this is even good. I could not say anything to my friends because this ment so much for them. Ok I got to lighten up. But when she turn around, he sees someone in front of her and it happens to be happy to see her. Uforntionaly Cindy isn’t as it’s the villain that they have to stop. Cindy is tremefied with fear |
| Fourth chapter of Super Powers. Enjoy. Cindy is terrified with fear when she looks at him directly. The person begins to smile evilly making Cindy's feel very scared. Person: Hello, what is you name? smirk. She couldn't answer as she is in very deep fear which cause her to loose her voice at the moment. The villains started to notice on what she is wearing and begins to laugh very mentality. The Screamer: Well I should tell you that I'm am The Screamer and it looks like you're my new opponent. With all the fear she is having, she begins to attack. Focusing on the objects around she lifted them up and throw it at him. The screamer smile like nothing is wrong. The Screamer: You think just by throwing things will help you? He breaths in heavily and lead out a big wailing scream. The scream sounded like a explosion from a atomic bomb. The scream manage to blew away all the objects. Cindy doesn't know what to do but then she heard cracking on top of her. She looks up and sees the wall cracking. It tumbles down on her but she puts her hands up and stop it from falling on her. But the Screamer comes close to her as she is wide open. He screams and it begins to hurt her. Her ears and eyes begins to bleed. She wanted to attack but could let the rumble fall down on her. Cindy: (NO NO NO! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!) But then the screamer stop and notice the other that are here. Bishop and the others came and see what is going on. Zeke: Que pasa aquie? The Screamer: Oh it looks like you not alone. Bishop: OK come on we can take this guy when we work together. Lets go full force! Cindy: NO! You'll get killed! Bishop and the other begins to surround The Screamer. Zeke heads in when he sees a opening but the screamer stops him from making that punch. Zeke: UGG! The Screamer: You'll really slow. Trisha: Well then this is my chance to attack you. The Screamer pulls Zeke and hits her with him. They flew until they hit the wall. Bishop: ZEKE! TRISHA! The Screamer gets the jump while he is distracted. Bishop didn't had time to react. He gets blast with his wailing scream and having to face it up close didn't suit with his ears. He fell down and could not stand up. The Screamer grabs his throat and begins to choke him. The Screamer: Oh boy are all of you very dumb? I have encounter kids like you before. They are such dumb asses to think this will be easy. Now You'll die just like all the other kids before. Cindy: No. Bishops begins to loose his breath as the Screamer slowly chokes him. Cindy: No. No. NOOOOOOOO! Cindy push The Screamer with her telekinesis powers and pushes him up and down, back and forward on to the walls. She soons stops. The Screamer: UGH! spits out blood. Well it looks like I met my match. My time in this world has been use up. Cindy's eyes begins to go into a shadeless color. She looks at the Screamer. He suddenly feels funny. His body begins to inflate and once it reach its limit, it explode. Splattering guts and blood are all over the walls. Bishop goes up to her and tries to get her back to her sense. She blinks her eyes and snaps out of it. Cindy begins to cry on Bishops shoulders. Cindy: I'm sorry! I'm so sorry! Bishop: Its ok. I know you didn't mean this. Then suddenly the place started to rumble. Bishop: Crap! Hey we got to get out of here. Bishop and Cindy grabs hold Zeke and Trisha who are still knock out. Bishop: Wait what about all the other!? Cindy: We don't have time! Bishop: But! Cindy: We cant save everyone! Bishop takes Cindy's word and they both leave. Outside the swat team has just came to handle to the situation. But then the bank crumble down as everyone watch in shock. |
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| Seventh chapter of walkers. Enjoy. Everybody begins to run as fast as they can. Mic, Marcus John begin to clear the way of walkers for the survivors to go threw. Mic: Damn it! Why did it have to rain today. Marcus: Forget about that! Lets just focus on getting out of here without getting eaten. The three fight their way killing any walker that gets in their way. Teacher: They are to many of them. John: Stop acting like a dumbass and keep moving. Uforntionaly not all of them were lucky enough to get out alive. Female student 2: Get off my leg! Walker bites her leg. AHHHHHHH! Mic: Don't worry I'll- John: Stop! Mic: But I John: Its already to late for her. John targets at her and blast it her face off so that she wouldn't suffer. Mic: John! John: We have to make choices now that the would is like this. They continue to run to the bus but they soon loose two more survivors. Male student 2: Get away from me! Breathing heavily. Stay back. Punches the walker in the face. AHHHH! He gets pile on as the walker eat him alive. The third male student runs right pass him but the second male student his legs. Male Student 2: Please help me! Male student 3: Let me go! A walker comes up and grabs hold of them. They both are now prey to the walking corpse. With only 3 survivors, the rest manage to make it to the bus. But once they got their. Mic: Oh shit! Teacher: What is it? Mic: There are no keys here! Marcus: Leave that to me. Lucky for you I know how to hot wired vehicles. Marcus to work on the bus engines. After trying all the wires, he manage to get it started. The teacher grabs on the wheel and begins to drive the bus. Teacher: Ok are next stop is the border. Mic: Wait before we can do that, can we go to Broadway and avenue as- Female student 1: LOOK OUT! They see that a roof from a house is heading right towards them. The Teacher drifts to avoid it but cause the bash to whirl out of control and crash. Mic slowly opens his eyes and see that the rest are dead. As he gets up, he felt a thumping noise. As he looks, he see it came from a walker but it has muscular strength. Mic: Shit! I cant move. It seems I'll be eaten by that bulk up walker. The bulk up walker head right towards him grab him with his huge buff up hands. He begins squeezing him trying to get the brains out of him. But then John and Marcus came and stop the Bulk up walker. The Bulk up head charging toward them. John tries to shoot the head but he manage to block it with his arm on the side. Marcus: Look out! Marcus John out of the way but he wasn't lucky as he was hit heavy by the arm. Marcus: UGGG! Spits out blood. He flies off and land on the hard ground. Mic stands up and makes a very angry face. Mic: Hey fuck face! The Bulk up responded to his call and begins charging at him. Mic grabs the broom bow blade and launch it at him, striking his head making him fall flat and skid on the ground and stop in front of him. Mic: Ha! I…kill…you. He fainted and fall flat on the ground. Once he open his eyes, he sees that he is in someone's bedroom. Mic: Where am I? John: Your in my house. Mic: Oh. I'm guessing it was a pain for you to carry. John: You and Marcus. Mic: Marcus! Is he- John: Don't worry he is ok. He was lucky that he is wearing his football playing uniform or else that could of killed him. Mic: Oh John since this is your house, is your family ok? John: I haven't seen them but I don't know if I want to see them. Mic: If you have family troubles, then lets find them. I want to help you. John: … Marcus in. Marcus: Hey! Mic: Marcus! How do you feel. Marcus: Oh I'm fine. Who would thought this equipment we got from the foot ball team is really made of hard stuff as I only felt a strong push from that walker. So what are we gonna do? We pretty much lost everybody and are ride. Mic: Well he is what we are gonna do. We are gonna Broadway and avenue as there are two things I need to check. One is to see if my family is their, and to find that girl. She might have the answers to this. Marcus: Well I think its stupid for you doing this but you are my friend and I will stick with you. John: I'm guessing I have no choice. Mic: Ok then. Mic and the others prepared them self's as they are ready to move on. John check threw his scope to see the area. John: I don't see any of those other bulk ups. Just the normal ones. Mic: All right then. Everybody lets go. Walker information: Bulk-ups These are the older brother that tries to protect their siblings. These have very strong muscles and biceps that can take out an entire house if not an entire blockade. Once it sees its pray, they'll run to it as fast as it can. Every step they take cause a huge thumping noise and rattles the ground like it was nothing. These are hard to kill as you got to sneak then go by force as it know where its weak spot is and he'll do anything to protect it's head. Just hope you don't have to go face to face to it as one hit from their arms could cause major damage or worse if you not protected. |
| Third Chapter of Pure Lovers. Enjoy. Tina runs quickly threw the Neighborhood to get to her school as quickly as possible. Once she got in, there is barley much students at this time. She goes to the nurses office and sees that she is not in her office at the moment. Tina: Great she is not here. Ow. That Bruce is one mess up person but for some reason, I can see his feelings twards me <: (. She shakes her head, Ok why am I thinking about this!? I need to get this ear ring off some how but he really twisted it. Bruce: What are you doing? Tina: Huh!? Ok what are you doing here!? Ugh never mind just leave before any student sees you ok. But then he smash the window with a gem stone that he got on the nurses table. Tina: WHY DID YOU- He then picks her up off the floor and puts her on one of the nurses beds and lays on top of her. She fights back but then hears him crying. Bruce: I'm sorry, said with a wipering voice, I know that what I'm doing is weird and not natural but I have always love for so long. I know it because I couldn't fall with any other girl and I kept thinking about you. And I also thought of you being with another person which made me unhappy and angry. Can't you see it Tina? Tina is capture by his emotional face and couldn't resist him. The two gets closer to kiss but then the nurse came back. Nurse: What the hell happen here!? This interrupted them. Tina: Ok I think you should leave. I'll go distract the nurse so that you- Bruce grabs hold of her and puts her on her lap. Tina: Hey what are you doing! Bruce: You know I heard some boy in your school is interested in ya. Am I right? Well I won't let him have you >: ). He then commits sexual acts on her Nurse: Who is there? Tina: I can't fight back, I don't why!? Isn't because I like it? No I must resist before the nurse see this. The nurse barges in and sees Bruce laying on the bed in which she mistakenly took him as a student do to how his face looks very young. He hides Tina next him under the covers. Nurse: Was it you who broke the window. Bruce: I'm sorry. I just got a massive headache which made me go delusional and break the window. Nurse: Do you need any medication or something: Bruce: No that is ok. Tina: ( I can't believe that I let him get away for what he did.) When the nurse left, Tina gets out in shame after what happen. Tina: UGH! I can't believe he did that! How could someone I use to know would do those thing to me? But when think about, what he did is something I couldn't get from most guys. I have dated many other guys but they all them only care for one thing. She looks back to all the memories of those brake ups. Guy 1: I'm sorry you not my type. Guy 2: Its just that you look to much like a boy Guy 3: Sorry but I just can't stand how you look Guy 4: You just don't got the looks. Tina: But when Bruce shows his passionate love, its what I was looking for in a man. Shakes her head. No I cant let this go threw because if I did then this will never stop. The next time I see him, I'll let it down nice and easy. The very next morning, She looks around in her room for that science homework. Tina: Where is it! If I don't find then I'll get scold and she is even worse than my math teacher O_O. Yes I found it! Huh? Is that the other ear ring. She looks at herself at the mirror on her desk. Tina: Well I guess it wouldn't hurt. As she walks threw the neighborhood, Bruce is right up in her sights as she expected. Bruce: Hello Tina. Tina: I knew you pop up. Bruce: Oh I see that you have found the other earring Tina: Well I thought since you put the other earring, I figure that I would complete the look. says in a sarcastic matter. Bruce: You look even more beautiful then before. Tina: Listen Bruce I want you to stay out of life for now on. Bruce: What! Tina: Look I am flattered about your feelings about me. In fact you're the first person who confess to me. I will never forget that but I just don't think it would work out and I think we should date people are own age. I'm glad that I was able to see you again ever if our meeting isn't what I expected. Tina leaves for school but didn't see what his reaction is of what she said. Bruce: Tina? <: O During fourth period, all goes well just like any other day. Tina is all focus on her work and not letting anything distract her. But while everybody is focus on their work as well as the teacher eye balls to make sure they are not distracted. They didn't notice Bruce who is look threw the window. He puts both pairs of his finger nails on the windows and started scratching the glass making an uncomfortable noise. The class heard it so they check but he left before anybody notice him. He heads to the school parking lot and begins to talk to himself. Bruce: Oh Tina you have change. You are a lot different now then in the past. He slams both of his arm on the car. I AM NOT GONNA GO AWAY THAT EASILY! For all my life I have always have love you. You are I are destine for each other and seeing each other after all those years prove that! I'm not gonna let you get away from me >:) |
| Fourth Chapter of Pure lovers. Enjoy. As two days has gone by, Tina hasn't seen Bruce since then. When she walk through the streets, he didn't even make a quick appearance. She think that he accepted the truth. During the lunch period. Clowey: Hey you seem very trouble. Did something happen? Tina: Oh no its nothing. I just had to take care of something. Mimi: Just remember that if you need any help, call us because we three are like the brave musketeers! Everybody begins to stare after that loud state mate. Tina: Ha Ha Ha ok I take that in mind( I don't know if you two couldn't even handle this=_=). While they talk, The popular Japanese boy Yuki comes up which stops the conversation admittedly. Yuki: Um can I sit here? Clowey: Oh sure. Hey Mimi I think I heard the bell ringing. Mimi: But we got only 15 min.. Oh I see what you mean. They both leave the lunchroom. Yuki: Hey I believe this is the first we met so Hi I'm Yuki. Tina: Oh umm hi. Said with a blush look.( I can't believe that he is talking to me.) But as Yuki sits on the chair, it suddenly broke which made him fall off and hit his head on the metal bar. Tina: Oh my god Yuki are you ok!? Yuki: Don't worry I'm fine. Luckily for me I have a metal cap place in my brain. Tina: But doesn't that increase damage? Yuki: Not if you get hit from the left side of the head. It is lucky that he didn't suffer to much damage, but she then notice something wrong with the chair as its missing a stance in between where it balance the chair. She has a bad feeling of how that happen. After lunch, Tina heads to her fifth period which happens to math and she is not hoping for it one bit it as Mr. Charles is a very mean teacher and has a mono tone voice that can put anyone to sleep. Tina: (Geez when is this class gonna end!) Mr. Charles: Hey you better be listening Tina! Saids with a mono tone voice Tina: Ya I am! Mr Charles: Oh really then repeat on what I have to say? Tina: Oh um…um..huh? Yuki: Here. Said in a whispered voice. Yuki shown her of what the teacher said in his notebook. Tina: We have to turn to pages 145 on our work books and solve problems number 23-25. Once you are done then turn to page 147 for the written part of the assignment. Mr Charles: Your actually listen for once. Tina: Thank you very much. Whispered Yuki: No problem. Whispered As they turn to their work, she notice something just sparkle behind her. She check and sees that it's a needle. She widen her eyes in shocked as she remember how it got there. When she sit down and thank Yuki. A needle pass by in high speed. Its starting to make her suspect that it might be him but just couldn't accept the fact that he would do this. By the end of the day, every student heads to their after school clubs or heads home. Tina wanted to talk to her friends about something. Tina: Hey I gotta ask this but what would you do if- Suddenly she is interrupted when Yuki came by. Yuki: Hey. Tina: Oh hi. Yuki: So I was wandering that if you want to walk together with me. My place isn't far away and I wanted to spend some time with you. Clowey: Take the offer. Whispered Yuki: Yes. :D But the happy mood is come to a close quickly as a big rock knock Yuki on the left side of the head so hard that is cause him to bleed. Everybody begins panic when they see a student lying on the floor. Tina check where the rock is thrown and manage to get a glimpse of someone leaving the school. She heads there as quick as she can. But when she got there, he wasn't there but begins calling him on who he suspect. Tina: Bruce I know your out here! She constantly call out for him until he appears behind her. Bruce: Oh hey Ti- Tina: Don't hey me like everything is normal! Bruce: I see that you saw my attempts that I did. Tina: So it really was you! Said with a shocked voice He suddenly grabs hold of her arms and puts her on the wall. Bruce: Listen I want to make one point clear to you. He puts his mouth next to her ear. I won't accept any rejection and I'll make sure that no boy will ever take you away from me and if they do, I'll show them punishment they'll never forget. |
| Fifth chapter of Pure lovers. Enjoy. The weekend has just started and while the incident left many student's surprise, that doesn't change the fact that they are ready for the weekend. While others are not bother with it and see it as how life can be ruff, it has a huge impact on Tina which is why she stays in her room. She begins to talk to herself. Tina: I could not stop thinking of what he said to me. She starts to recap of what he said. Bruce: Listen I want to make one point clear to you. I won't accept any rejection and I'll make sure that no boy will ever take you away from me and if they do, I'll show them punishment they'll never forget. Tina: Is he really that in love with me that he'll do anything to keep me. I don't get it? What ever happen to the nice kind person who I always known. Takes a deep breath. Did something- Then a beeping sound came from her phone. She answers and sees that is Clowey on the line. Clowey: Tina are you still at home? Tina: No. Clowey: Tina don't think of this as you fault. Tina: But it is my fault. Clowey: Come on nobody blames you for the crime and beside the doctors manage to heal his wounds. He'll be out by in a week so cheer up. Tina: Look you don't understand ok. I'm gonna hang up. Clowey: Ok but just try to cheer up ok. Mimi will be very sad if you were a in a sad mood and I don't want to hear here horrid crying _. Tina: Ok bye. Hangs up She hid herself under the covers again but then hears her mother calling. She sound so excited. Tina's Mom: Hey Tina we got a very important guess that you must meet! :D Tina: I don't care who it is, I just want to lay on my bed. Tina's Dad: Come down Tina as its someone who you have a close friendship with! So with the costly yelling of her mom and dad, she heads down stairs to see who it is. Tina: Ok I'm here so who is this- Comes to complete shock Bruce: Hey there Tina, its been a while since we met. Tina's Dad: Can you believe its him. After all those years he have never change. She didn't expect this to happen. Bruce who has a very dark personality, has hidden it with a very upbeat personality. It remind her of how he use to be but if only it wasn't fake. She didn't want her parents to know whats her true emotions are so she pretend to be happy for seeing him. Tina's Mom: So Bruce you want stay for dinner? Bruce: Sure. Everything at the dinner table became a very settling atmosphere for Tina's parents. But Tina isn't fooled by him so easily. Tina's Dad: So Bruce how have you been since the last couple of years. Bruce: Oh I have been doing fine. I just bought a house next to the school and I just open a bar. When I saw Tina exiting the school, I thought I get to meet all of you after all those years that pass. Tina: ( You are full of crap D:) Tina's Mom: Its been so long and I as well as the rest wanted to thank you for helping us back then when we are at our darkest hour. Bruce: Well lets just say that I did something that had to be done. Tina: Can you excuse me I'm gonna go use the bathroom. She heads to the bathroom and once inside, she punch the wall. Tina: I don't get it! Why didn't I say anything! Takes a deep breath. Ok! This time I'll tell them everything and lets see how he likes it. Just as she open the door, Bruce happens to be on the other side of the door. Tina: If you want to use the bathroom then be my guest. Bruce: I overheard what you said and I don't like it. Tina: I see that you heard of what I said. Well like it or not I'm going threw with- But he then push her down and lay on top of her. Tina: Hey what are you- Bruce: Listen to what I have to say. Smirk. Your not gonna tell them because I happen to be the only lover you got. Just before you wonder why you didn't say anything at the table. I'll tell you why, you just can't see an old childhood friend in any danger. That decision you just made now about telling them is a lie you said to yourself. You are a very confuse girl just like before after what happen. Tina: Don't remind of that memory. Bruce gets off of her and said to her this. Bruce: Let me give you the abridge version of what I said before. You are mine and I'll make sure of that. After that, Tina head to the front door to see that Bruce is about to get ready to leave. She uses this opportunity to tell them. Tina: Mom, dad can I tell you something. Tina' Mom: Sure what is it? Just as she is about to say it, she couldn't. For some reason she could not say a single word as if she has lost her voice. Tina: Never mind, I'll be heading to my room. Tina's Dad: I wonder what she is going to say? Bruce: I'm pretty sure it was nothing. Once in her room, she grabs a pillow to put on her face and begin screaming loud in anger. Tina: I really don't get it. What do I see in him! Clenches her fists. It looks like that this will not end sooner than I hoped. |
| Six chapter of Pure lovers. Enjoy The weekend is over and everybody gets ready for school. Tina barley recover after what happened in the weekend but she didn't wanted her friends to know so she kept it hidden from them. Clowey: You see Mimi, Tina wasn't sad. She just got sick. Isn't that right(Please play along XC) Tina: Ya I was sick, nothing more. Mimi: You should of told me so that I could of help you recover. We all stick together and never leave a friend behind. Tina: (I don't know if you would considered me a friend since I'm keeping this secret I have to myself. I really wanted to tell you but I don't want you to be in trouble.) They all head in once the school bell ring but right as the school starts, there is a van with high tech equipment that parked in the school parking lot. As the door opens, A guy with the highest model camera steps out. Dan: So this is where the crime scene is. He head to the main office and meet up with the principle and the other teachers. Ms. Just: So you must be Dan. Dan: Yep I'm here to take on the case. Ms. Just: Mr. Charles, make an announcement. Tell every student to come to the auditorium right now. Mr. Charles: Yes mam. Once the announcement is made. Every student from 9-12th grade head down. The place is pack with bunch of students that begin talking to each other like its not a care of the world. As Miss Just goes on stage and taps on the mike, everybody stops their conversations as the principle has a very scary voice when she yells. Ms. Just: Well it looks like I don't need to use my loud voice like last time. Ok the reason that I call you here is about that incident that happen last Friday. I have called some one that can find the culprit of who ever has done this to one of our students. Please introduce your self Dan. Dan: Hello there everybody. I'll make sure that I'll capture the culprit and make your school safe. Ms. Just: Ok thanks for the introduction. Now he'll be questioning the people that have witness the crime and I hope that everyone who is there has their full corporation. That is all I wanted to say. Once everybody is out, they begin to comment on how awesome Dan is. Especially Tina's friends. Well one of them anyway. Mimi: Dan is so awesome and I can't believe I saw him in person. Tina: Umm who is Dan by the way? Clowey: Well basically- Mimi: He is the awesome under cover reporter! He is known for solving cases that is too hard for the police to handle. He has everything that any undercover detective needs. High tech Equipment, very focus at his work, and best of all, good looks! Clowey: Ya she happens to be a big fan. Tina: Ok thanks for telling me. I'll see you later then. ( I don't know why but I don't want Bruce to be caught by this guy. I still have that feeling that it is my fault that I didn't make it clear to him before he done those things. But why do I care? It looks like Bruce will have to learn it the hard way then. But then she started to feel guilt for the rest of the school day. She couldn't focus on her work and started to feel queasy. She hates to admit it but she wanted to warn him about the detective so once school is over, she head to the bar that he mention before. Tina: I can't believe I'm doing this. Walking up the hill. So this is the bar that Bruce mention. Not what I expected? At first she fought the bar would be damp and dirty but to her surprise, its well structure and cleaned. That is what she gets for watching to many movies that has damp bars scenes. She takes a peek and sees a bunch of people drinking and having fun. She is a little nervous but she walks in without hesitation. Tina: Umm is anybody by the name of Bruce here? But then he gets hugged by Bruce himself which she punch him in the stomach Tina: Don't hug me. Bruce: Your punch is like a one way ticket to heaven. Ouch! Tina: Can I talk to you for a second. They both went outside. Tina: listen. Just to warn you, there is some one that you do not want to meet. So stay away from as far as possible ok. Bruce: That is very nice of you. Tina: Its not what you think as I'm using this as a way of saying "stay away from me." She heads home and Bruce goes back inside the bar. Claris: Hey who is that girl? Bruce: She is my destine lover. |
| Fifth chapter of Super powers. Enjoy Trisha and Zeke woke up and see that they are at an ally way. Zeke: What happen? Trisha: Hey what happen to that Villain! Cindy: … Bishop: He was killed. Zeke: QUE! Bishop: It was ether us or him and I think you don't what it to be us. Zeke: But we heroes don't kill. Have you not have any idea what a super works!? Bishop: So are you saying that you would rather die by that person you called a villain! Noko: So you survived. I never expect this since most kids with cocky attitudes usually get killed so easily. Bishop: YOU! Bishop heads full force ready to punch him in the face. But with just one touch from the tip of his finger, he stops it. Bishop: What? Noko smiles very deeply then flicks his finger to knock him back, crashing into the wall. Cindy: Bishop! She heads toward to him. Are you ok!? Bishop: UGG! Noko: Hmm, hmm, hmm. Well lets get you out of here shall we. With the clap of both hands, he transported them back to their neighborhood. Trisha: Ok we had enough of this! Noko you can have your junk back! Zeke: Count me out as well. Bishop: Noko I want to return these as well. Noko: Sorry to say this but I cant do that. Cindy: Oh its that no refunds huh. Well that is not gonna stop us. She begins to take off the nerve senses but something is wrong. They don't seems to come off. Cindy: What's going on!? Why cant I take them off!? The others are freak out so they check to see if they are in the same situation. They tried as hard as they can but can't seem to take them off. Trisha: Are you kidding me! Tell me Noko why are these feel like they are stuck to us? Noko: Smirk. Oh once you put them on, they will never come off. You see you are now own by me. Bishop: You don't own us! Noko: Oh but I can. You see its your job to stop villains who runs amok and I'm really running out of heroes. Cindy: Oh my god. Noko: You see, I created the special gear and send them to all the kids who wanted to become super heroes. Once they saw the commercial and got the gear to become one, two outcomes will happen. They ether accepted and fight to survive or just wimp out and get them selves killed. You think that being a super hero will be all easy and fun as hell like you seen in those kids tv shows. But nope its very dangerous and one mistake will cause your death. They are very shock to hear those kind of words. All their dreams of becoming super heroes and having much fun will always be a dream. Noko: Better gets some rest because you'll gonna need it for the next time I call you which could be in 2 weeks or 3 days or maybe tomorrow. Cindy: Wait! Before Cindy could laid a hand on him, he disappear in a instant. She falls still on her legs and begins to cry. Bishops closes his hand to make fist while closing his teeth. |
| Sixth chapter of Super powers. Enjoy. Late at night, Bishop just couldn't sleep at all after the experience he and his friends had. He kept turning into many positions on his bed but couldn't get to a comfortable spot. By the next day, he is tired as hell. Bishops's Mother: Hey wake up! Its time for school. Bishop: Takes deep breath. Ok. Right now he is not in the happy the mood that he been like he is before not even his favorite breakfast, chocolate chip pancakes could not bring that happy mood. Once he head to school, he sees his friends. He goes up to them but suddenly they run away before Bishop could talk to them. Bishop: Guys? He is confuse on why they would do that. Once he got to his school, it got a lot worse. For some reason, his friends are doing what ever they can to ignore him. During the early morning of class. Bishop: Ok lets work on our pro- The others leave. Bishop: …? During lunch. Bishop: Oh guys can I- Leaves the lunch table. Bishop: …? And in gym. Gym teacher: Alright its time to do some sit-ups. Be in groups of four. Blows whistle. Bishop: Hey guys lets- Trisha: Sorry but we already have someone else. Bishop: Ok. By the time school ended, he decided that enough is enough. He went to find his friends but as he heads to the playground, he got ambush by the bullies. Bully leader: Hey there. Bishop: Look I don't have time to deal with you. Bully leader: Oh am I'm interrupting something? Well to bad. Snap his fingers. Other of his crew came and is ready to attack. Bishop: Ok then! I can handle you by myself. Bishop takes on the entire clan of bullies. Dodging fists being thrown at, he thought he could handle it. But then bad luck strucks him as he got trip over when the leader swing his leg. Then the leader holds both of his arms and let each of his peers to punch him in the stomach. Once they are done, they grab him and takes him to the dumpsters' behind the school. They are about to dump him in but his friends comes in. Zeke: Hey! Bully leader: Get them! The other bullies head right towards them. The one by one they bullies get defeated. Bully leader: Crap! runs away. Zeke: Bishop are you ok? Trisha: Lets get him to the nurse. Zeke, Trisha and Cindy take Bishop to the nurses room. Nurse: Ok you'll just need to rest a bit. I'll call your parents and give the principle a notice of bullying. The nurse leaves the room and then it became very silent for a few minutes. But they decide to leave. Bishop: Stop! The other stop walking and face at Bishop direction Bishop: Tell me why are you avoiding me this entire day? Zeke: … Trisha: I'll tell you why, its because its your fault for getting us involve. Bishop: Oh I see how it is. If I not mistaken you guys gave full support on this idea! Trisha: Sorry but I didn't knew that giving our lives and facing danger would be part of it! Bishop: I didn't knew that is what a super hero means! I thought it would be easy like we saw on TV. Cindy: Would you please stop! Bishop and Trisha: … Zeke: Look I don't like this either ok. But just as they started to talk about the situation, Bishops mother came in. Bishop's Mom: Bishop are you ok my baby! Bishop:… Ya I'm fine. Bishop and his mom quickly head home. Once there, Bishops begins to think a lot more about the situation he and his friends got in. He got out of bed and heads to his mother. Bishop's Mom: Hey what are you doing out of bed? He starting to shed tears heading to her lap and cry about. Bishop's Mom: Its ok. Let all of it out. Bishop: I'm really sorry mom! Bishop's Mom: Its ok its not your fault. His mother doesn't know what Bishop is really saying. He stops crying. Bishop: Mom I want to go hang out with you friends. Bishop's Mother: No way you are still recovering from all the bruses the bullies did to you. Bishop: Please! I promise I wont over do it and beside there is some home work we need to do. Bishop's Mother: Ok but promise me you'll come back before midnight ok? Bishop: Thanks mom. Bishop quickly runs to his friends house as he needs to tell about what to do at this moment of their lives. Bishop: I just hope they could accept on what I have to say. |
| Seventh chapter of Super powers. Enjoy. Bishops heads to all the houses of his friends. He goes and tells them to meet him at the park that is the middle of many stores. Bishop: Hmmm. Where are day!? He looks around and just spots them. He heads to them. Zeke: Ok Bishop you got something important to say since you told us to bring the costume as well. Bishop: Ok gather around as I have this to say. The other pay attention and put their serous faces. Bishop: Look we can't just ignore that this happen to our lives. We became super heroes which we thought is the best thing to happen. But after our first experience, we see that our dream became a nightmare. But I don't want to let this continue haunting us. If this is gonna be part of our lives, then lets be prepared for it when it comes. Zeke: I agree with him. I don't want to die that easily and I never run away from a fight. Trisha: I'm in as well. If I'm going to die, I want them to remember me for what I did. Cindy: Umm Ok. Bishop: Good. Ok lets start the training. We don't know if Noko is gonna- Noko: Appear and take you to another mission? All of them turn around and shock to see that he is here now. He is about to snap his fingers. The other charge right at him to stop him but didn't reach up in time before he snap his fingers. A flash just cover over where they stand and once its over, they are in a abanded church. Bishop: Ugh. Huh? Zeke! Trisha! Cindy wake up! Zeke: Aye que pasa? The other wake up and sees the abanded church. Noko: I see you are awake. Bishop: Damn you. Noko: Well its how it works. Anyway here is your next villain to fight. Noko throws the picture to them. The group sees a pic of a Mexican who has a deep tan and wearing a Priest uniform. He has a army like hair cut and his nose happen to be deform. Noko: His name is Girem Merodes. He happen to be in a cult that sacrifice people to his god. Cindy: He is not like the last is he? Noko: Nope. Cindy: Takes a deep breath. Noke: He is much more powerful then the last one. Cindy: Gulp. Noko: I'll leave this up to you. Bishop: WAIT! He disappears right as Bishop's touches his elbow. Trisha: Well this is perfect! What now Bishop? Bishop: Lets just put on our costume and end this as quickly as possible. They went to the different room to put on their costumes. But when Cindy opens the door, he encounter a person who is a wearing a deity mask. She scream as loud as she can to alert the others. The mask person grabs out his knife and is ready to kill her. She could of use her powers to easily stop him but is to scared to focus. He raises his knife up in the air and press down. She close her eyes quickly. Once she opens her eyes, she sees that Bishop stops him with his bare hands. Cindy: Bishop. Bishop: Its ok. It does hurt like hell. Man: So there are other? Trisha: Ya well here is something for hurting my friend. Trisha speeds right at him. She jumps giving him a kick that is electrifying and knock him flying out the window. Zeke: Isn't that a little to much? Trisha: Well we are fighting for our lives so its natural. Bishop: Cindy are you ok? Cindy: Yes. Zeke: Lets get out of here as there might be more of them here. They head to the front door of the abandon church but once they open it, a bunch of people, man and women wearing deity mask are at the front door. They begins to attack them. There are about 40 of them. Bishop: Spilt up. Woman: Get them! They each take into groups of 10 and head to one of the kids. Bishop Flies up but they begin to throw knifes at him. He quickly dodges them with only a few scratches. Bishop: HA! Looks like you cant even… huh!? Wait there are only nine. Where is the other one. He looks around but when he sees above him, a person is atop of him on a shandleer. He jumps on top him and struggles to stay on him as Bishop shakes him off. Bishop: Get off of me! Zeke begins to fight them. He dodges them and heads to the middle of the group. He gave each of them a very hard knocking in their stomachs knocking them out. But one got on him and stab him. But luckily he only got him by the hand. Zeke: UGH! Its gonna take more than that to stop me! Trisha speeds around them causing them to loose breath. But one manage to put his leg in front and trip her. Trish: Wah! She landed where are a bunch of glass ordainments Trish: Ouch! I just need to- UGH! She ended up spraining her ankle. Cindy is having a tough time as she is too scared when the diety mask people are getting close. She couldn't focus but when she sees her friends in peril, she focus on helping her friends outs. She levitated every mask people and put them all together into a ball like form. But as all this happen, Bishop notice that her eyes are colorless like last time. Cindy: You are a bunch of pathetic humans. She lifted them up and throw them out of the church. Her eyes became color after that is done. Bishop heads to here. Cindy: Breathing heavily. I did it again did I? Bishop: Its ok. You did what is right. Zeke grabs one of the mask. As he got a close look to it, he notice something. Trisha: What is Zeke? Zeke: Oh its nothing.(No it cant be. I refuse to believe it!) Bishop: Ok lets get out of this church. Once they got out of the church, they that they are in a middle of a town which Zeke happens to know of. Zeke: I know this town! Bishop: If you know then tells us? Zeke: Its my home town, Veracruz. |
JacobCarter said: a little taste of whats to come... Well hi there, my mane is Jacob and I’m dying on the ground again. For some reason I've always ended up this way, dying and coming back to life as a different person. However that’s not the problem it’s whose killing or should I say what’s killing me that’s the problem. You’ll learn more about that later but for now let’s see how my latest death plays out.... Has a very interesting start. Nice job on getting me hook. |
| Seventh chapter of Pure lovers. Enjoy. Dan begins to question all the people who witness the crime. So far, he didn’t get any useful information. But there is one student left before he is done. Dan: Tell me. What did you saw when the event happen. Tina: Well all I saw was the rock hitting him hard. I’m sorry but that is all that I remember. Dan: I wish I could say “that is all and thank you for you corporation” but I got a feeling that you are keeping something from me. Tina: No I’m not! I swear on my behalf. Dan: Hmm? Alright. Thank you for you time. Tina leaves the van. Dan: Something tells me that she has something interesting in that mouth of her but I‘m note sure of it. Dan decided to head to the crime scene and checks if there is any evidence found. Dan: Is this all you got. Cop: Yes. Unfortionly who ever did this, is really good in covering his tracks. The rock didn’t show any prints which means he was wearing gloves and the position where he threw it didn’t left us anything. Dan: Ok then. Without any answers, he thought he talk to the victim of the incident. He heads to the hospital where Yuki is. Dan: I’m here to visit Yuki. Office clerk: Oh sure. He is in the fifth floor. Once he got there, he sees that his parent are there as well. Dan: Hello there. Yuki’s foster Mom: Who are you. Dan: Oh allow me to introduce myself. My name is Dan and I’m here to talk to your boy. Yuki’s foster Dad: Are you here to investigate what happen. Dan: Yes but I would like to speak with him in private. Yuki’s foster Dad: Ok then. Lets go honey. The parents leaves the hospital room. Dan: Your foster parent are really nice. Yuki: Are you here to ask me about the incident. Sorry I don’t have anything that is useful. Dan: It seems that this is bothering you. Is it because you have something to don’t want to remember. Yuki: I SAID I DON’T HAVE USFUL TO SAY SO GET OUT! Dan: OK, OK. Dan heads out of the room. Dan: From the looks of that face, I can see that really didn’t have anything useful. Yuki’s Fosters Dad: Were sorry. Dan: Oh you guys. Yuki’s Foster Mom: Its just that he had a very rough childhood and he doesn’t want to remember those memories at any cost. Dan: I’m guessing after what happen to him, it reminded him about something he wanted to forget. Yuki’s Foster Dad: Yes. But I know this, he is a good person. He never has any enemies and manage make friends with everyone he meets. Dan: Ok then. Well I leave, thank you. walks out. Hmmm? Well this is really starting to get complicated. It looks like I have only one lead left and its that girl. Time to pay her a visit then. Tina and her family spend their night playing a board game. The evening is going well for them as they are having much fun spending time together. But while all this is going on, they heard the doorbell. Tina’s Mom: I’ll get it. She opens the door and is Shock to see who it is. Tina’s Mom: You, you, you, your. Dan: Dan. Tina’s Mom: Come in, Come in. When Tina saw him, she isn’t happy to see him. Tina’s parents happens to be huge fans of Dan’s work. Tina’s Dad: Dan it is an honor to meet you. I as well as my wife have been big fans of you work since we were young adults. Dan: Well its nice to meet a fan. Tina stay quiet threw out when her parents are talking. She didn’t want to stay any longer so she head to the kitchen with Dan noticing her. Tina: I need a drink. Dan: Seems like you have a very uncomfortable atmosphere back there? Tina: Hey I just wanted a drink of water. Dan: I know that you had something that is on your mind. Shall I say it has something to do with the incident. Tina: As I said before, I don’t anything that happen there. I just witness what happen. Dan: Well I leave now. Oh and just to let you know once I find out who it is, I’ll also find out who is involve as well and you don’t want that right? smirk. Tina knows fully well on what he met. She goes up to her room and lays down on her stuff animals and begins thinking. Tina: I never understand what I’m doing. Damn it why am I confusing? As Dan walks to his car, he bumps into Bruce. Dan: Oh sorry there. Bruce: Oh sure. Oh by the way, try not to bother the family to much as or else someone might think your stalking. Dan takes a pic of him. Dan: Just in case. Bruce: I see. Being honest might be your best and worst trait of you. He leaves. Dan takes a look at the pic he took. Dan: You a very interesting person. |
| Here is a bonus gender reversal story. As lunch time starts, Tina heads to the table where her friends sits. Tina: Hey there Clowey and Mi..mi? Mimi kept looking at the wall with his hand shape of a fist on her chin. Tina: Um what is she thinking about? Clowey: Well lets just say during our science class, we saw a movie about different Para well universes and she started to wonder if those exist. Tina: Oh ya I forgot that when ever she find something satisfying, she wonder if does exist or not. Clowey: Well it does make you think about it. Tina looks at the window and zooms in to the sky. Now in a different universe in the same place Tina lives only different. Tin: Today is a gonna be my kind of day and nobody is gonna ruin it. Tin is a boy who is just entering his junior year. He may look close like a girl but he is really a guy. Tin's Mom: Hey before you leave, how about some breakfast? Tin: That is ok. I'll eat at the school. Tin's Dad: Hey at least eat some toast. Tin: Ok. Tin grabs toast and leaves for school. As he walk, he comes to a crosswalk. As he waits for the walking signal, he notice a woman across the street where he is standing. He notice that she is looking at him but then the signal comes. Tin and the woman cross and went right past each other. Woman: I have finally found you. Tin: Huh? Tin look at the woman and ask her. Tin: Hey did you say something to me? The woman just left Tin: Hmm. Driver: Hey kid! Tin: Huh? Driver: Move out of the way! Tin: Oh sorry! Tin quickly gets out of the driver's way and heads to school. Woman: After all these years, I have finally found you my love. Tin heads to the front of the school and sees everybody hanging out with their group of friends. Tin looks for his friends. Tin: Where are they? Macky: TIN! Tin: Huh? Looks up. Wahhh! Tin sees him jumping off the roof and lands on him and begins hugging and rubbing his face from his. Macky: Tin its good to see you again! Tin: I'm happy to see you too but can you please get off of me! Clam: Macky! Macky: Ok. Clam: Hey there Tin, its been a while. Tin: Ya. These are the two twins, Macky and Clam. Macky is always the playful and cherry one like a little boy and Clam is always the more mature one. Tin had known them since the first day of summer break and since then, they became good friends. They heard the school bell ring so they head to their first period class. Clam: Hey Tin we just got some news that you will like. Tin: What do you mean? Macky: Well we heard that Yukari the Japanese exchange student has a interest in you. Tin: Oh really? blushes. That really- Just while they are walking threw the hallway, a shadowy figure appear which Tin notice. He turn quickly but nothing is there. Clam: Hey are you alright? Tin: Ya I'm fine. Come on lets get to class. For a moment Tin thought that he saw that woman again from before but just couldn't thought that was possible. Once the school day ended, Tin quickly head home. While running, he bump into someone causing them both to fall down. Tin: OW! Oh I'm sorry Mam, let me help you Woman: Oh that is ok. Tin: Oh you're the same woman from before. Gee this must be fate that I get to see a pretty woman. Woman: Yes and I guess its fate that brought the two destine lovers together. Tin: Huh? Suddenly the Woman hug him. Tin: Sorry but I don't know who you are. You must of confuse me with someone else. The woman slowly back away and shows a very sad but sadistic face. Woman: Perhaps this would jog your memory. She gave him a kiss in the mouth which Tin is surprise by. Tin: Hey what was that!? Woman: Don't you remember me? Tin takes a good look at her and notice who she really is. Tin: Wait is that you Briyana? Briyana: So you finally figure out. |
| Chapter 8 of walkers. Enjoy. Mic, Marcus and John head to Vrain street peri averner where Mic met the girl. They make sure not to be out of the open as they witness more of many people getting their bodies rip apart and screaming in pain. Mic: … Marcus: Mic listen. Mic: I know lets just keep going. They head to the big bushes and hide behind them. Mic: John can you scope out the area. John looks around to see if there is an open path. Mic: Any luck? John: Are chances of avoiding encounters is very slim. There are just to many around the area. Marcus: Well how about- Just before Marcus suggest something, a scream is heard. Mic: That sounded close! He quickly run to where the scream came from: John: Wait! Damn it! Marcus: Lets follow him. Mic quickly runs avoiding every walker passing by. Once he got there, he saw a little Japanese girl being surrounded by a bunch of walkers. Mic quickly barges in and tries to kill every walking his path but there is just too many of them to get threw. He got surrounded by some of the walkers. Marcus: Damn it Mic! John: Wait you cant go in there! Marcus: But! As the walkers goes for their meals, suddenly Mic felt blood on his shirt. He looks up and sees that something pierce their heads but all there was is a shadow. All the walkers fall down. John: Well I’ll be damn your not dead. Marcus: Tell me how did you- Mic: I didn’t do anything? Oh the girl. Mic heads to the little girl to check if she is o.k. Mic: Hey are you o.k. little girl? John pointed his gun at her. Marcus: What are you doing! John: I’m thinking ahead. Mic: Uh can I check if you didn’t any bite marks? smile. Little girl: Ok then. Man: That won’t be necessary. Mic: Huh? Turns around. Little girl: Yukito! Your all right. Mic: Oh so you must be the father. Yukito: Actually I’m her body guard. Yukito slaps her in the face. Mic: Hey why did you! Yukito: You didn’t even listen to me!? I thought I made it clear to stay out of sight and yet you didn’t. You could of got bitten Mimico! Mimico: I’m sorry it just that I thought you were in trouble and the thought of you dying. Yukito: Takes deep breath. Look you know how powerful I am right? So you have nothing to worry about. Mimico: O.k. blushes. Mic: Well are you done? Ok then well my name is Mic Marcus: I’m Marcus John: John. Yukito: Greetings. bows down. My name is Yukito and this is Mimico. We came to America for some piece but I’m guessing it has its own problems to face as well. Mic: It is a hell hole right now. John: I hate to interrupt but I think we should get out of site. Yukito: Follow me. I found a secure place. They quickly ran out of the street and follow them to the location Yukito mention. Once they got there, it’s a house that is in perfect condition and not a single walker is around sight. John: Well lets invite ourselves shall we. Mic: Hey Yukito. Yukito: What is it? Mic: I wonder was it you who save me and Mimico? Yukito: I don’t know what your talking about. Mic: Its just that those walkers that attack us got their heads pierce and when I look, all I see is a shadow. I was thinking- Yukito: Look I don’t know what nonsense you saying. Mic: …? When they enter the house, they see three other people. Three of them are men who are middle age. Jim: Oh Yukito your back. Yukito: Hey there Jim. I found some survivors. Tommy: Hey there. Its good to see more people that are still alive. My name is Tommy, that there is Jim and that guy over there keeping a look out is Bob. Mic: Its nice to meet you as well. We can really us- Bob: Oh and who is this little one. Mimico: I’m Mimico sir. Bob: Well isn’t that cute. Don’t worry you’ll be safe here. Marcus: Hey you wouldn’t happen to have something to eat do you? Jim: Sure. Mic and the rest settle in the shelter they got. It is nice for them to be calm knowing that the place is secure. But while other settle ins, Mic started to notice that something is odd around here. The first thing he notice is while he was passing by, he saw Jim with Mimico showing his figuring collection. What is odd is that he place his hand on her shoulder and it slowly gets down. He quickly remove his hand once he saw Yukito coming in. Mic is sure that what he is doing was sexual. With that in mind he follow him to make sure but as he was following him, he sees Bob and Tommy with Mimico and notice that their arms are on her lap. Like before when Jim put his hand on her, they quickly remove their hand quickly once Yukito comes in. He now couldn’t stop thinking that they might be well secure as he hope. |
| Eighth chapter of Super powers. Enjoy. They see that they are in the home town where Zeke use to live. Bishop notice the look on Zekes face. Bishop: Hey is there something wrong? Zeke: Oh its nothing its just that I’m a little shock that the villain is here and my grandparents are in this area. Bishop: We’ll worry about that if that happens so lets find him before it could get out of hand. Zeke: Ok. They head out to look for the villain they had to face. But however once they head out in public, it attract a lot of attention to them. Many people begin to look at them. Trisha: Is there something on my shirt? Cindy: No I believe that we are in costume. Bishop: I wouldn’t worry. I bet they are thinking we are kids playing with our costume. Suddenly two kids come up to them. Kid 1: Te ves ridiculo. Kid 2: Creo que eres un poco Temprono como el dia de muertos es meses Trisha: Um I don’t understand so Zeke do you know what they are saying? Zeke: Its nothing. Basicaly they are just teasing us so lets- Old woman: Zeke!? Zeke quickly notice the voice and when he look at the direction, she is surprise to see who it is. Zeke: Grandma? Zeke’s Grandma: What are you doing here all alone? Bishop: Um hey there. Look we don’t have- Zeke’s Grandma: Ok come with me, I bet you didn’t eat in a while. The other have no choice but to go with Zeke’s grandmother but what they didn’t notice is that someone in the crowd wearing a mask. He picks up his cell phone. Mask person: Hey I think I found some new sacrifices. Yes they are wearing costumes, just like the last ones. Ok I’ll follow them. Bishop and the others got to the house where Zeke’s grandmother live and they are surprise on how the house looks. Cindy: Wow I didn’t knew your grandmother is rich. Zeke: I don’t like to talk about my family matters. Zeke’s Grandmother: Come in, I cook you up something and then you could tell me what happen. Trisha: Hey what does she mean? Zeke just ignore her response and head in the house. Trisha: Did I say something wrong? Once they head in, they begin eating. She set the table like a big buffet that have a lot of vararity of food that kids really like. The three eat to their hearts content but Zeke didn’t touch any of the food lay out. Zeke’s Grandma: So Zeke your trying to runaway again only in disguise so that your parents wouldn’t find you? Bishop: What is she talking about? Zeke’s Grandmother: Oh I see he haven’t talk about it. You see he has issues with his parents. So did you had a fight again? Zeke: No I didn’t but I just don’t care. Zeke’s Grandmother: Well your welcome to stay here as well as your friend for as long as you want. I see you made some great friends. Bishop: Umm I’m glad for the stay but we really- Zeke: Ok then. I’ll be at the bedroom upstairs. Bishop: ZEKE! He just ignore him and left upstairs. Zeke’s Grandmother: I’m guessing he needs his friends right now. Cindy: Come on lets try to knock some sense into him. They head up stair to the bedroom. Once they enter, they see Zeke all lay down and under the covers. Bishop: Zeke are you ok? Zeke: I’m fine its just that I’m tired ok. Trisha: Your not tired! Your just depress and when your depress, you always hide under something. Zeke: Ok you see I don’t get along with my parents that much. I’m pretty much a total stranger to them. Bishop:… Just outside the house. Leader: This is the place? Mask person: Yes sure. Leader: I never thought that I would meet you again like this. |
| Eight chapter of Pure lovers. Enjoy For a while, Tina just couldn’t focus as much as before as now she has two people that would bother her which is Bruce and Dan. One showing his love while the other is solving a case. This lead to her not being able to concentrate much on her work which result into her grades falling a bit. Ms. Jeremy: Tina wake up! Tina: Oh sorry I wasn’t sleeping, I was just laying down. Ms. Jeremy: Well I’m here to say that your grades are going downhill lately. May I ask what is going on. Is there something that is bothering you? Tina: Sorry its just that I’m not feeling well. Ms. Jeremy: Do you need to go home? Tina: No that is ok. I get into catching up on my work. She didn’t want to tell him so she does what ever she can to hide it. Once lunch started, after Tina gets her lunch, she notice a crowd of girls at the lunch room entrance. She wonder what is the commotion. She got a closer look and notice that Yuki is at the Center. She didn’t want to confront him as she still thought it was her fault that he was sent to the hospital so she decided to stay out of sight. Unfortionly Yuki spots her among the crowd. Yuki: Tina! Tina wanted to ignore him but just couldn’t. Tina: Oh Yuki I see you got out of the hospital. Yuki: Ya lets just say its boring being there all day. Tina: Listen I’m very sor- Yuki: Its Ok as I don’t blame you for what happen so you don’t need to worry. She felt very relive to hear that. Its like a gust of wind threw a hot day. Yuki: Listen Tina just to let you know that I will find out who did this and when I do, I’ll make them pay. Tina wanted to think that is something what guys would say to impress girls but the way he said it, just sounded so serious. Its to the point where she feels that he is not talking to the Yuki she knows. Yuki: Is there something wrong? Tina: Oh no. Well I’ll see you later then. Yuki: Grabs her by the shoulder. Wait Tina: Oh! Yuki: Look I was wondering that do you want to hang out some time? Tina: Well this is unexpected. Umm sure. Yuki: Ok. With that, she is able to stay focus threw out the entire day. She is very relieve and pretty happy. But once school ends for the day, she is reminded herself about Bruce and Dan which made her feel stress. Unfortionly he gets to see both of them today. Dan: Hello there Tina. Tina: (Just ignore him and walk away) He keeps barging in front of her. Dan: You know its very suspicions if you don’t answer question of a investigator. Tina: Look as I said before I don’t have anything useful- Bruce: I think its best if you take what the girl said. Tina: (Oh crap I didn’t expect you to come here!) Dan: Well hello there. Bruce: Go home Tina. I want to talk to him for a moment. Dan: Ya I have the same thought. Tina decided to take Bruce’s words and leaves. She has a very bad feeling that things won’t go as well as he hope. Dan: So tell me why are you so fixated to that girl? Bruce: I believe that is more of a personal matter. Dan: Maybe its because she does knows who have committed the crime and I would guess she is to afraid to admit it because she is threatened? Bruce: If you think I was endangering her then you are wrong. I would never do that to a very important person. Dan: You way of speaking is really is odd to me. It kinda reminds me of someone I know. Bruce: Well I should be going now. He leaves. Dan head backs to his Van but sees Yuki next to it. Dan: Hey there Yuki. Do you need something? Yuki: Listen about before. I was wrong as I do have something that might be useful for you. smirk. |
| Chapter nine of Super powers. Enjoy :D Bishop and the other tries very hard to get Zeke out of bed but is too depress. It seems that coming here really doesn’t make Zeke to have that happy personality he always put during when everything is normal. Before he could speak to him a little more, they heard Zekes grandmother yell. Zeke: Grandma! Zeke quickly heads down with the others following behind, when they make it downstairs, they see that the same people they thought at the church are here inside. Mask woman: Get them! The other mask people charges in with knives, guns and swords. Bishop charges in to the guy with the machine gun. He manage to deflect the bullets and use this chance to get an opening on him. He gets ready to punch but sees a sword heading right toward his head. But Cindy manage to use her psychic abilities. Zeke and Trisha does a jump kick on two of the mask peoples faces. After that Zeke spotted her grandma just out side the door being drag in the car. Also he notice one of them is not wearing a mask and notice how his face look. He quickly head out. Trisha: Hey don’t go it alone! He runs out as fast as he could and once he got there, He is shocked to see who it is. Zeke: What. said in a soft voice. Leader: Well hello there. Its been a while since we last see each other. Zeke: No. No. No. Leader: You know you could save her if you offer yourself up as a sacrifice to our God. Zeke falls to his knees as he could move a single part of his body. Leader: I’ll take that as a yes I presume? As he is about to grab him, he side step to dodge the couch that is being launch at him. Bishop: Don’t touch our friend. Cindy: Hey it’s the one we saw from the pic Noko gave us. Leader: Well I guess I should be going. Trisha: What make you think we’ll let you go that easily! Leader: Oh but I have your friends grandma and I’m not afraid to kill some one that is very close to me. They do what he said so that they couldn’t endanger an innocent, especially since its their friends grandma. He enters the car and leaves and once he is out of sight, they quickly head to Zeke. Cindy: Come on Zeke snap out of it! You grandma is in danger, what is stopping you? Bishop: Is it someone that you knew before? The other two are surprise but wonder if its true. Zeke: He. He is pretty much my older brother. Carlos. Trisha: You kidding me! Zeke stands up and walks. Cindy: Where are going? Zeke: I’m heading to save my grandma. Bishop: Wait so your not affected of this in anyway. Zeke: Nope. smirk. Infact I’m pretty happy. The others are very confuse of the reaction he give. Bishop started to sense there is more then them being brothers. They all head to where the car go but got lost during the way. They have no idea where its been or how to track it. Cindy: Where to now? Bishop: Perhaps I could fly up to get- Zeke: There is no need as I know where he would be. Zeke takes the lead and heads on. Trisha: Ok I’m really started to get creep out right now. Bishop: ( Zeke.) The others have follow Zeke and see that they made it to a church that is just at the entrance of a forest. Zeke: Oh Carlos I knew you would be here. Lets go. Bishop: Wait! I don’t think we should go with out a plan. Zeke: Ok you do that. I’m going ahead. Bishop: Are you crazy! You cant ju- Zeke suddenly punch him in the face. Bishop: Ugh! What the heck! Zeke: … I’ll be going now. With that, he heads to the front entrance. The group of mask people surround him at gun point. Mask Man: Tell me why is a kid in a ridicules outfit doing here? Mask Woman: Wait! Its that kid with the weird powers. Mask Man: Oh I see that we are lucky. This outcast came to be sacrifice for the lord. Come in you demon scum! He gets put at gun point behind his back and is taking inside. Once inside, he sees that it’s the same church with the angels all around and with window having designs base on verses of the bible. They stop at the front of the cathedral and there, he hears clapping. With that, Zeke sees his brother with a deep smile showing how happy he is. |
| Chapter nine of Walkers. Enjoy. With Mic now thinking what the three men really are, it started to make him think if they should get out of here. Mic: There is no denying it. After seeing that, I think its best if we get out of here because if we don’t, the little girl we’ll be in danger. I gotta tell Yukito about this. Mic head to find him but didn’t notice that he is being heard by Jim. Mic goes around the house looking for Yukito but couldn’t find him. As he check into the next room, he encounters Jim which surprise him. Mic: Hey don’t sneak up on me like that! Jim: Oh sorry I didn’t expect to bump into you like that. Mic: Ummm hey do you know where Yukito is? Jim: Oh he went out to find some more survivors. I tell him to look from farther away from in hope there is some. Mic: Umm would it be dangerous to go out there your self? Jim: Oh don’t worry as I have high confidence on his surviving skills since he took good care of that beautiful girl. Mic: Uh huh. I’ll be with the others O.K. he leaves the room. Jim: I’m guessing we should teach this kid not to bother into adults matters. Mic heads to the living room to see if Marcus is there. But once he got there, he isn’t there. He enters but trips over something. When he checks, it’s the weapon that he made for him. He started to notice that something might of happen which made him realize about John. He quickly head to him and once he got into the room, he isn’t there as well and just as he thought, the sniper he use is still here. When he takes a closer look at it, he notice that he is not alone. When he quickly turn behind him, it suddenly went dark. Mic slowly opens his eyes and sees that he is in the basement. Mic: Damn my head. I see that I’m in the base- When he look around, he sees John and Marcus in a knock out state. He quickly tries to get up but couldn’t as he notice that he is handcuff. He tries to wake them up with his voice. Mic: John! Marcus! Wake up! The others started to open their eyes. John: Ugh what happen. Marcus: Hey I just remember! Those basterds! Mic: Wait do you mean- Jim: Yes. He means us. They all turn around and see Jim, Bob, and Tommy. Marcus: Hey tell me you dickheads! Why did you do all this! Mic: I think I know why. You are perverts are you. Marcus: WHAT! Bob: Oh don’t worry were not into men. Lets just say we are into more of a curve figure and has a opening between their legs. John: Wait you mean? Tommy: Ya that its! Jim: You see we are pretty much craving to touch a girls body. Mic: So you want to touch the body of a little girl. Jim: Not just that but also to share our body. With those things now out there, its hard to find some pussy that is still alive and they don’t try to eat us. I say the girl fits are needs and we thought we could all share but it seems that you guys don’t wanna or nor want us to touch her. Mic: … Jim: Well we will leave you here with our friend. Jim heads to the door and when he opens it, it release a walker that is chain. Jim: Meet are friend Richard. You see he is such a horn dog when it comes to boys your age. He just love the taste of licking teenage boys like you. Jim and the other leaves the basement. Marcus: Ok we really need to cut these ropes before that chain breaks. Mic quickly looks around and sees that its empty out. He takes a second look around and notice a pipe with a sharp edge. He heads there and starts to cut off the rope but the chain on the walker broke. Mic quickly cuts the rope in a rush. Just as before as the walker attacks. He cuts out the rope and dodge just in time as the walker head get pierce in the head. He breathes very heavily but stops as he heard a scream. Mimico: AHHHHHH! Mic: Oh no! Marcus: Go to her! Don’t worry we will catch up. Mic quickly heads to her. Mimico struggle as she is being held against her will. Tommy: HOLD STILL! Bob: Ok Jim she is ready. Jim: Don’t worry little girl. You will enjoy this as soon as this sets in. Mic heads up and tries to find her and the 3. He then heard more screams but it didn’t sound like a little girl. It sound like it came from an adult man and three of them. He follow the scream which lead to him to the back yard. Once their, he is shock on what he saw. There is blood everywhere with body parts scattered. The heads has a terrified look to them before they got decapitated. With Yukito in the middle who has blood all over his clothes and the shadow figure behind him. Mic: Holy shit. Yukito: Your afraid aren’t you? Mic is speechless. The others catch and are just as surprise as he is. Yukito: I guess we’ll leave now. Mic: Wait! Yukito: Hmm? Mic: How about you join are group? Marcus and John: WHAT!? Marcus: Mic are you sure? Mic: Yes. Beside it will be good for you and me Yukito. Yukito: What are you talking about? Mic: I hate to say this but you are terrible at hiding the truth. You see when we first met you, I notice those eyes says that you couldn’t face the fact that you can’t protect her all the time. Yukito: You are really observant. Mic: So do we have a deal? Yukito: Ok. John: I hope you know what you are doing Mic? Mic: I really hope I do. After that, they rest for a bit after what happen. Mimico still have a bit of trouble to forget what happen but she manage. After a day has past, they decided to head. Mic: Ok is everybody ready. Marcus: Sure. John: Yes Yukito: Yes. Mimico stay near me ok. Mimico: O.K Mic: Alright them. Lets go. |
| Heres my story. Feel free to point out any punctuation mistakes or things you think I should add. Black. I was surrounded by it; cold unforgiving darkness that kept hold and squeezed tighter and tighter. Just the idea of being alone would have been the worst thing if not for the thick red blood I was drowning in. It sent shivers through my body; I couldn’t breathe. I swayed my hands wildly trying hopelessly to reach the top, to breathe in air. In this ritual I was being born, born with all the information of the world. I remembered everything the earth taught me, but couldn’t really comprehend or grasp what any of it was. I would think things; I would think about what was happening, about what would happen if I just drowned here, would I die? The first light blinded me, something which threw me into a panic. Calming down I felt for the ground and it was soft. Gripping it I pulled myself up feeling a sensation of strain on my arms. ‘Strain’, I didn’t really understand what the word meant, but knew that it was supposed to go there. I rubbed my eyes vigorously, trying to stop the small white specks from consuming my pupils. As my view became clearer and clearer I remembered something, I was alone. I was born knowing that I was the only one here, the only person in the world. Knowing so much as I did seemed painful, for the simple fact that there was nothing here. Just seas of cold white and the burning light of day, the rough sand with the wild, uncontrollable sea, all for me, but just not enough. I needed something else as selfish as that was. But why would the earth create something like me, giving me its language, thoughts and knowledge? And then I knew, it was so obvious. The earth was lonely. I rose up and stood tall taking in my surroundings. Then another thought occurred to me. Why do I need something else, why do I have a selfish need for more, to have more? Why do I need such a useless emotion? My fear of being alone vanished, when I stared into that cold white sea of snow, which brought a feeling of joy, of happiness. Still I did not understand the words that came into my head, but I wanted to say them, wanted to feel them. My body responded differently, it didn’t feel the joy, just the coldness surrounding me. It shivered and curled into a ball grasping at the warmth of the sun, screaming at me to find someplace hot. I walked north of my position leaving a trail of red foot prints behind me, to be swept away by the wind. Despite the blizzard of snow my feet felt warm and full of life. Then suddenly a green glow appeared at my feet, it traced itself across my legs crawling slowly up my thigh. Soon the piercing green light consumed my body spreading its warmth everywhere. After the light disappeared I noticed something, or rather remembered something. That light came from me. My bodies’ need for warmth triggered it to come forth, helping in any way it could. The light soon disappeared leaving behind an imprint of the thing that I was. A thing which would never die, and therefore never leave the earth’s side. I couldn’t describe with words what it looked like, but felt happy because the earth created me this way. The earth was powerless in trying to help me. It could not change the weather nor the intensity. Even the slightest change would affect everything, the flow of the earth would be out of balance, but the earth was smart in creating me to never die, to be strong, and to help myself. The terrain began to change, it became rough and hilly, with the rocks cutting my feet, only to heal themselves immediately and start the whole process again. My breaths became quicker and I started to feel the pain of this trek in my body. But this was driven away by the sight of a tree. A single cherry blossom tree which stood tall and proud. It seemed to sparkle like the stars in the sky. My legs began to run with more force. I ran fast, faster than any animal that might live on earth, seeming to almost fly when I jumped over rocks and other obstacles. I finally reached the cherry tree basking in its beauty as I slowly sat down on the hard surface. “Thank you.” these where the first words I had ever said. I held my hand against the wood and smiled. It was my first smile. Just as this happened a voice came to life in my ears and it said “Will you be mine?” I was not startled by that ominous voice for it was the earth itself that graced me with its presents. I knew it was the earth by instinct. The earth’s pure desire to not be alone brought me into existence. It created me for a reason, so I will fulfil its wish, with that I answered “Yes.” That one word held a heavy weight, which would never be lifted, it would linger forever. |
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| So far so good but could you space it a bit as I got confuse where I was reading. |
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