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This is the prologue of a story I've just started, feedback would be appreciated :)

Prologue

Our story begins 15 years ago; as nations all across the world seemed to be prospering, a select group of individuals were plotting to form a World Government. This group of individuals called themselves The Order, The Order consisted of 13 of the most powerful people on the planet. The Order had an army of 50,000 soldiers whom were the finest in their art form, and could not be rivaled. Numerous nations and resistance groups went up against The Order’s army, but not one prevailed. With the 13 members of The Order leading the army nobody could stand in their way. Many lives were lost during these dark moments in history, but not just soldiers lives, the army was ordered to attack villages and towns which The Order deemed unnecessary in their World Government. Soon it would become clear that there was no chance of victory against The Order, the remaining leaders of the world called a meeting with The Order and surrendered the world. With no more obstacles in their way, The Order had succeeded in taking control of the world; hence the World Government was formed. The World Government is divided by four factions; the first faction is the Eclipse Faction, the Eclipse Faction occupies the northern hemisphere and are the most independent and solitary faction of the four. The second faction is the Aurora Faction, the Aurora Faction occupies the southern hemisphere and are said to be the most easy going and friendly of the four. The third faction is the Celestial Faction; the Celestial Faction occupies the eastern hemisphere and is rumored to be the strongest and most feared faction of the four. The final faction is the Yami Faction, the Yami Faction is a safe haven for fugitives of the World Government, and the Yami Faction is the most corrupt of the four. Each faction is lead by two members of The Order, the two members of The Order are given the number one and two rank in their faction. The number two rank is Warlord; the warlord is the first to go into battle if needed, the Warlord is sworn to protect the number one even at the cost of his or her life. The number one rank is the Over Lord; the Over Lord is the most powerful being in each faction, the Over Lord only goes into battle if the Warlord succumbs to death or if the faction is in danger. The five remaining members of The Order are called Heavens Hand, the members of Heavens Hand has total control over the World Government and cannot be rivaled in strength by any being known to man.

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