| I know this poem seems a little choppy the way the stanzas are organized but the assignment was to write a poem using rhythm.I tried to do this by making the lines in the stanzas 3 syllables long then two, then 3, then ending with two. any way here is what I came up with. hope you like it. Creation Quietly like a gentle breeze she comes with Hair green like spring. Encased in white robes she lightly kneels down touching the soft earth making a small indent with her tiny finger she drops in a small green acorn watching it slowly descend. Falling in to place Standing up she backs away from the indent patiently she waits for the seed to sprout from beneath the mud creation begins. Slow at first then fast sprouts shoot up, skyward. Reaching past the clouds into the unknown becoming a tree piercing the heavens. Turning her back to her new child she flies away her task finished she returns homeward please tell me what you think, i need all the help i can get |
| I like it I believe this is what you call a free poem? |
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