Apr 27, 2010 5:44 PM
Stories!!
My Sories
Most of my stories are incomplete,but any i share i will post in my blog.
My Stories titles
those are the stories i have so far and only one is complete. and that one is "Ookii: Start of the World" it was a assignment at school. it turned out ok but i'm working on a side story to explain a few thing right now though. you can find a few in my blog right now. i only post part of the stories first to see if anyone wants to read them.if any one wants to read all of them just leave a comment... Although most of them are not finished yet. the only thing i ask is for you not to steal them(not that they're worth stealing...) and leave comments^^ criticizim is welcome^^
It all Started When...
It all started when I decided to go up on eagle hill and read my book. The book I was reading was, more or less likely, about vampires. I wasn’t entirely sure yet because I had only read to chapter 4. It was called Cirque du freak and it was written by Darren Shan. So far I thought I was a very good book, all the characters reminded me of me and my 3 friends, Alex, Tom, and Carl. Alex and Tom were my cousins and Carl was my friend, well sort of particularly because of the incident in grade 5–which I will not talk about, seeing as how embarrassing it was. But enough of that, I’ll get on with the story.
I was sitting on the couch at my little brother’s house and decided I wanted to go up on the big hill in the backyard. When I got up there I found a tree that had fallen over and I walked out on the trunk until I got about 5 feet high then sat down. Because I was reading a book I assumed to be about vampires, I started to ponder the possibility that one could reside on the hill. Then I remembered my step dad telling me that the people from the native high school down the road were going up on the hill to the tipi that was up there–we lived on a native reservation, I was only half native on my mom’s side– and performing some type of ritual for the past couple of nights. Then, I know this is going to sound really weird but, a squirrel told me to get off the hill. And don’t start thinking I’m crazy. The reason I knew it told me to get off the hill was because all of a sudden it started spazing and freaking out at me. Then I thought ‘Oh, crap.*(o.o)* What if I broke a barrier or something?’ So I decided to hurry the hell up and get off the hill.
I went home and the rest of the day I felt like I was being followed.
When night came I decided to stay up late so I could read more manga.
Well you wouldn’t believe what happened next. A weird shadow formed in the middle of my room then a boy appeared he didn’t look much older than me, maybe, 15, 16 years old.He had jet-black hair, and blood red eyes and pale skin. He was thin, and looked muscular. His eyes were sharp. His fingers were slender and his finger nails were long and sharply pointed. He was wearing all black; his shirt was short sleeved with an open collar, and his pants almost looked like black jeans. He had a gold chain around his neck, and thick skin tight gold wristlet.
“You freed me from the barrier that was keeping me on the hill.” He said. Oh my god! There really was a barrier! I thought, but what does he want with me?
“I shall grant you my loyalty,” He said as he knelt down before me “May Anne.”
His words were cold as ice, yet, soft and gentle. “How do you know my name?” I asked rather stunned and scared. “I know because, well... I can’t tell you that” He told me. “Then what is your name?” I asked him
“My name is Christopher Exenda Jacob Crow.” He said. “That’s a long name. I’m going to call you Chris.” I stated. “Then I shall call you Mistress” he told me. “No.” I said clearly enough any one could have heard me, but apparently Chris didn’t.
I won't post what happens next unless at least 3 people reply saying they want to read it.
has been updated. in the original post
to read the original post go here.
My Name is April
My name is April. I am 13 years old. I have red hair and green eyes. I’m good at art, and I'm a fast learner. I only have 2 good friends, Noir and Leo. Noir has only been my friend for 2 years. She has black hair and golden eyes. Leo has been my friend for four years. He has brown hair and blue eyes. Leo taught me how to fight–he comes from a long line of ninjas and he wanted me to be able to protect myself. Noir taught me how to play the violin–she’s the only one in her family with musical talent.
“I am so bored... hey what’s this?” I wondered as I picked up a silver medallion. “It looks real.”I bit it. “Ouch, yeah it’s real.” I bit it a little too hard because my teeth hurt afterword. It was real silver, it was diamond shaped like with a spade on the top, a heart on the bottom, a diamond to the right and a clover to the left. At the top there was a silver chain long enough you could wear it as a pendant. The only thing written on it was a couple of characters I couldn’t make out.
The next day came and passed I was on my way home. When I got home someone else’s car was there. They must have been important because they had a limo. The people must have gone inside already because I didn’t see anyone outside.
I heard arguing but I couldn't figure out what they were arguing about, probably because I was still trying to figure out what the silver medallion was.
I tried to not be seen by anyone but, it didn’t work. I was seen by a boy. He somehow looked familiar, but I didn’t stick around long enough to figure out why. I quietly rushed up the stairs, being careful not to be heard. The boy started chasing me. Just as I got to the door he threw a knife to prevent the door from closing. As he got to the door he pulled the knife out and told me to be quiet.
I won't post what happens next unless at least 3 people 2 more people reply saying they want to read it.
has been updated. in the original post
to read the original post go here.
Most of my stories are incomplete,but any i share i will post in my blog.
My Stories titles
- •ACE (incomplete)
- Middle of Nowhere (incomplete)
- My name is April (incomplete)
- Ookii: the Start of the World (complete)
- Ookii: side stories (incomplete)
- Other Side of the Mirror (incomplete)
- Alice's story (incomplete)
- It All Started When... (incomplete)prologue complete
- A bloody love story (incomplete)a horrible name for the story(don't take it seriously)
- (i don't have a name yet)(incomplete)
those are the stories i have so far and only one is complete. and that one is "Ookii: Start of the World" it was a assignment at school. it turned out ok but i'm working on a side story to explain a few thing right now though. you can find a few in my blog right now. i only post part of the stories first to see if anyone wants to read them.if any one wants to read all of them just leave a comment... Although most of them are not finished yet. the only thing i ask is for you not to steal them(not that they're worth stealing...) and leave comments^^ criticizim is welcome^^
It all Started When...
It all started when I decided to go up on eagle hill and read my book. The book I was reading was, more or less likely, about vampires. I wasn’t entirely sure yet because I had only read to chapter 4. It was called Cirque du freak and it was written by Darren Shan. So far I thought I was a very good book, all the characters reminded me of me and my 3 friends, Alex, Tom, and Carl. Alex and Tom were my cousins and Carl was my friend, well sort of particularly because of the incident in grade 5–which I will not talk about, seeing as how embarrassing it was. But enough of that, I’ll get on with the story.
I was sitting on the couch at my little brother’s house and decided I wanted to go up on the big hill in the backyard. When I got up there I found a tree that had fallen over and I walked out on the trunk until I got about 5 feet high then sat down. Because I was reading a book I assumed to be about vampires, I started to ponder the possibility that one could reside on the hill. Then I remembered my step dad telling me that the people from the native high school down the road were going up on the hill to the tipi that was up there–we lived on a native reservation, I was only half native on my mom’s side– and performing some type of ritual for the past couple of nights. Then, I know this is going to sound really weird but, a squirrel told me to get off the hill. And don’t start thinking I’m crazy. The reason I knew it told me to get off the hill was because all of a sudden it started spazing and freaking out at me. Then I thought ‘Oh, crap.*(o.o)* What if I broke a barrier or something?’ So I decided to hurry the hell up and get off the hill.
I went home and the rest of the day I felt like I was being followed.
When night came I decided to stay up late so I could read more manga.
Well you wouldn’t believe what happened next. A weird shadow formed in the middle of my room then a boy appeared he didn’t look much older than me, maybe, 15, 16 years old.He had jet-black hair, and blood red eyes and pale skin. He was thin, and looked muscular. His eyes were sharp. His fingers were slender and his finger nails were long and sharply pointed. He was wearing all black; his shirt was short sleeved with an open collar, and his pants almost looked like black jeans. He had a gold chain around his neck, and thick skin tight gold wristlet.
“You freed me from the barrier that was keeping me on the hill.” He said. Oh my god! There really was a barrier! I thought, but what does he want with me?
“I shall grant you my loyalty,” He said as he knelt down before me “May Anne.”
His words were cold as ice, yet, soft and gentle. “How do you know my name?” I asked rather stunned and scared. “I know because, well... I can’t tell you that” He told me. “Then what is your name?” I asked him
“My name is Christopher Exenda Jacob Crow.” He said. “That’s a long name. I’m going to call you Chris.” I stated. “Then I shall call you Mistress” he told me. “No.” I said clearly enough any one could have heard me, but apparently Chris didn’t.
I won't post what happens next unless at least 3 people reply saying they want to read it.
has been updated. in the original post
to read the original post go here.
My Name is April
My name is April. I am 13 years old. I have red hair and green eyes. I’m good at art, and I'm a fast learner. I only have 2 good friends, Noir and Leo. Noir has only been my friend for 2 years. She has black hair and golden eyes. Leo has been my friend for four years. He has brown hair and blue eyes. Leo taught me how to fight–he comes from a long line of ninjas and he wanted me to be able to protect myself. Noir taught me how to play the violin–she’s the only one in her family with musical talent.
“I am so bored... hey what’s this?” I wondered as I picked up a silver medallion. “It looks real.”I bit it. “Ouch, yeah it’s real.” I bit it a little too hard because my teeth hurt afterword. It was real silver, it was diamond shaped like with a spade on the top, a heart on the bottom, a diamond to the right and a clover to the left. At the top there was a silver chain long enough you could wear it as a pendant. The only thing written on it was a couple of characters I couldn’t make out.
The next day came and passed I was on my way home. When I got home someone else’s car was there. They must have been important because they had a limo. The people must have gone inside already because I didn’t see anyone outside.
I heard arguing but I couldn't figure out what they were arguing about, probably because I was still trying to figure out what the silver medallion was.
I tried to not be seen by anyone but, it didn’t work. I was seen by a boy. He somehow looked familiar, but I didn’t stick around long enough to figure out why. I quietly rushed up the stairs, being careful not to be heard. The boy started chasing me. Just as I got to the door he threw a knife to prevent the door from closing. As he got to the door he pulled the knife out and told me to be quiet.
I won't post what happens next unless at least 3 people 2 more people reply saying they want to read it.
has been updated. in the original post
to read the original post go here.
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