I'm not entirely sure what score to give this, but I just gave it 9/10 because apparently, this was funny. I am not sure if I am burnt out from memes or just overdosing on "so bad it's good", but I am beginning to lose a laughing response from stories of this type.
But I am going to say it anyway, man this was great. So my 9/10 stays.
For someone who doesn't read too much yaoi, I am not entirely sure if the whole genre looks as silly as this did, or if this is just a one-off that happens, I will believe the latter. But yeah, this story is dumb and follows no logic which is exactly the kind of stuff I like, and probably you too if you have tastes like I do.
Unfortunately though, this title and, well, we will call it "attention", are misleading in the fact that this is incomplete, the technique that is, so I am probably going to down my score to an 8/10 for disappointing me in what was lost potential. That's it I guess.