I enjoyed the story it was very cute and there was solid development to the love however it was to much to fast and they story should of been longer.
Now a breakdown of my scores.
*I gave the story an 8 because for being a one shot it had a great deal of story to it but this was also it's flaw it was a cute love story and had major potential but I feel the mangaka tried to put to much into one chapter.
*I gave the art an 8, the art was really good it had the shoujo feel too and the female lead was pretty but not over the top and the male lead was handsome but again not over the top. The side characters were not thrown to the side they had uniqueness to them.
*Characters get a 7. The down side to one shot manga is that there is no time to describe the characters to the fullest but this artist managed to get the basis down very well.
*Enjoyment was a 9. I really enjoyed the story but it had so much potential to go further then one chapter.
So overall I gave it a seven it was enjoyable but really should of had more chapters it was to much to fast.
