The art varies too much and it could get jarring. The body shapes are often too masculine because the author is more used to drawing male bodies that it's easy to forget that they're meant to be young women. The faces needs a lot of adjusting to as well. The gags for the most part is great and I love them but it can be a bit tiring especially since most readers are reading for the development of the two main characters. She already does a lot of BL on the side so I don't understand her need to focus on men in her GL story. That's just my opinion but it does strike me as weird.
