English subtitled
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Category:Romance
Tags:Fem-dom, incest, m/f, vanilla
Story
A rarity in terms a female aggressor or superior. One could say not rare. True, i can think of some others but not many of them are on a soft core level. Aside from the 'standing officer' in terms of relations with the family not bad. In fact i found the interaction sweet.
Introduction wise was wonderful. Not only was story based but stressed uniqueness of one of the main characters. In short a story and some facts.
As for the conclusion better but could have been improved. Show could have ended after a sexual scene but didn't. Rather included a brief moment of reflection. A chance for the other main character to express his stand being the sub.
One suggestion for a more welcoming ending is while keeping the alone fact in mind the characters are found in school. At school the dominatrix looks through the door's window. Catches the attention of her sub with her stern glare and proceeds to have a private exchange moment. Here it could go for comedy spin or maybe a romantic spin. For endings are good when they are kind but to have some unexpected element is a bonus.
