Biggest problem for me is i'd say it gets hard to keep track of what's going on. It sometimes gets kind of confusing and i get characters mixed up.
At the start of the story the way the male MC was introduced was weird. We had seen him a couple times and then he shows up and the rest of the story starts.
None of the MC's tend to have much in the way of emotion of the fact that they've switched bodies and are in opposite gender.
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I also kind of feel that the story should've had the two MC's keep the switched bodies on and off. Don't think they should have stayed in the opposites bodies forever. But just have a thing where they switch on and off or so. Kind of bummed that it didn't keep it.
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Overall a fun little story to read.
