Mod Note: This review was initially posted for the one-shot, Apple, and was subsequently merged into Koi no Kamisama.
[b]Story:[/b]I have to say, the concept and all was very interesting and everything, but I found the story to be quite rushed. I seriously think that it could have been extended into a much longer story.
[b]Art:[/b] The art was very nice, however... there were some scenes that I felt could have been drawn better, where the details were overdone and such.
[b]Character:[/b]The character development is another thing that I felt could have been extended out more then what it had.
[b]Enjoment:[/b] Mine was very low... end of story.
[b]Overall:[/b] It may just be me... but I kind of felt that this was great and all, but it could have been a lot longer and more developed then what it was.
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[b]Story[/b] The best way to desribe the story is to say that is is like Greek and Roman mythology, except with comedy instead of tragedy. If one were to read this, they would understand what I was saying here. Another difference is the hero isn't some uber... in fact, he has no big major power except determination.
[b]Art[/b] It had an ugly place, but... here is the but, the ugly place was used to help furthur the manga storyline rather then to hinder it and helped to add emphasis to that one point in time. In other words, it was used effectivly.
[b]Character[/b] It was a one shot, so not much character development. So, since it was a one-shot, the characters came across as likable. That was what the author intended.
I do admit that I hadn't a clue what to think of the guys grandmother, she was extremly off the wall... and acted like she was so cool, yet she was in charge of a temple.
[b]Enjoyment[/b] I at first thought the guy just had bad luck, then I kept laughing at the fact that... well, it is one of those things that one has to read to find out... if I tell, it will spoil the story line.
[b]Overall[/b] I have to say... pick it up once to give it a shot... you'll likely have a good laugh at it. Expessully the subtle humor about Manga's in it.
