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May 9, 2012
Green. (Manga) add (All reviews)
Perhaps I set my standards to high when I'm over-critical of a shoujo-ai manga, but it's just who I am and what I do. This manga just...wasn't that great.

Story: The storyline is kind of all over the place for a 6-chapter shoujo ai manga. The thing about storytelling is that you give the reader a definite idea of what characters the story will focus around; you have a story that you want to tell and you tell it. Simple as that. This is especially important for short stories. Green doesn't do that. It provides unnecessary side-stories and love interests that don't add to the plot read more