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Used an MAL Affinity Search and you came up actively as my highest compatibility with a 71% lol. Even more surprising is that you're the first person I've seen that has a higher average score than me in terms of show I give ratings to!

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it

Haiji claims your English is fine. I would disagree. I wouldn't say 'fine,' but it certainly isn't bad. I did see quite a few grammatical errors in your review, but those are easy to fix. And let me tell you this. If you ever need a proofreader in the future, I'll be more than happy to correct any mistakes you have.

Now, on to the review. Mister Simonian below me brings up pretty much everything I was going to say. Your review is fairly short, which doesn't give the reader a lot of information about what the series is and what was wrong with it or what it succeeded in. Some other problems I saw were your inexperience with romance in general. A word of advice: Don't review something you know nothing about. Watch some other romances, get familiar with the genre. Then when you've become a sort of Master of Romance, if you will, your opinion will be taken more seriously with the general public of MAL.

One final thing: pessimism. A very important thing about reviewing is to never show weakness. You are the reviewer. If anyone has a problem with your opinion, that's their own problem. You don't need to state that things you liked/disliked about your topic are your own opinion. That shows that you expect to be attacked for your opinion, which gives leadway for you to be attacked in the future. Just write your review. Don't pay attention to the audience. Have them pay attention to you.

For a first review and someone who doesn't speak fluent English, your review wasn't bad, but not worth a 'Helpful.' It was good enough to not warrant a 'Not Helpful,' so that's an achievement in itself in regards to this site. I hope to read more of your reviews in the future. Later, buddy.

I gave you a helpful rating for the effort alone. Your review was too short and lacked detailed information but you gave the rough outline of the anime and told us what you liked about it.

Not bad but you certainly need more practice.

I totally agree what you said about ef: A Tale of Memories.
You did good with your first review if you ask me :)
And don't worry, your English is fine!