This is a oneshot, so it only has one chapter.
It has potential I guess, but so far it's just mediocre.
-I like Yoichi, he is the standard cool dark hero, but I like him, works every time.
-The humor is kinda funny.
-I like the art , I think it's good as it is.
-I like how it's possible to make a bow so durable and shoot it with such a force. Maybe some kind of haki or just firm material? Anyway IF it's implemented in a good way it can be good.
-I like the varied monsters and the seemingly extensive adventurous world with endless possibilitys.
But it has a lot of flaws:
-Ryu's father was once the strongest, therefore he will be way stronger than Yoichi someday. Ryu is now a loser, so it's the standard from zero to hero saga.
-I don't know if it's just about the Wenkamui or if the arc about them does continue for a while longer, but they're kinda similar to chimera ants.
-Lets make a peaceful world for us 3 childhood friends although we haven't seen each other for a longer time than we've known each other but we haven't made any new connections and are still so close. I think that's kinda silly and also feels familiar.
-And the worst and only totally intolerable flaw of them all is the allmighty sword, that chooses a blessed random person in a wondrously way. I hate it when a story is build on such an absurd principle.
It's boring when someone is the chosen one and gets carried in such a manner. NO ONE except the chosen one can defeat all evil... read more