I’m glad it was just a one-shot. The art was very pretty.
I heard many people complaining it was unoriginal and predictable... I went in with an open mind. All I can say, if you’ve ever touched shoujo manga, or even romances in general, you will know the ending and how it will lead up to it. The gimmick was revealed too early and too obviously. And it was a little rushed at the end.
To improve this manga I think senpai’s “words” should be moved to the start. And maybe the gimmick written on paper, without the boy commenting on it. Also, there
should be more fluffiness and cuteness. Because the way it is right now, it’s just a story that’s neither cute nor deep.