This proved to be a challenge to rate, due to how short it was. I decided the whole thing was just fine for what it is (a quick love story), although it could have been better.
The story is nothing new (Girl meets boy, trouble in between, love at the end) but, at least, the dialogues sound more natural than your typical shoujo out there. I felt the situations were a mix of genre conventions and down to earth, realistic behaviors.
It’s a shame the art is not at the same level. Sometimes it’s hard to tell who’s who among the girls, and the overall
level of detail is very basic.
In the end, this is a nice short story that tries the most (and success) to live up to its title. While it’s not a gem by any means, I can think of worse ways to spend half an hour reading manga.