5-TSU NO HAJIMETE-UBAWARETE MO II, KIMI NI NARA REVIEW
Some story strike the heart of the reader even if it is short. Most story won't. This one will leave you in amusement at how fast pace it was. The love attached into it is fragile and the reason behind is too unbelievable. It will make you feel that this kind of bond can be easily crumpled and a body contact is just what it keeps the relationship going. If this story is just a draft of a long one, I think it will be great as other flavors can be added to make
it more interesting.
I don't believe a girl who's not used to guys can easily be fallen to one. Suddenly holding your hand by a guy is not romantic at all, it will be creepy. A love story was called a love story 'cause there's two people flirting with one another, I know. The character just lack some main character's attitude that can attract you, it's hollow.
Hands up on the art. It cute and the girls expression is awesome. It feels like the girl's art was really focused on and it was very detailed. All of the characters are really good looking, sadly just an extra characters on the story.
The cute art will make you enjoy reading the story. Since the emotion is fully expressed, reading made lighter. Adding the body contact and intimacy of the characters shown properly is kinda cool to see, but the expectations failed you. As it dropped the excitement, it will also affect the enjoyment.
If it is real, they won't last long. Sounds bitter to me. Every story has a twist. Isn't that an unspoken rule? It is what makes the story interesting. It is the key on making the character grow. Some endings are not meant to end the way it is.