Dec 5, 2014
Story: 6/10
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Short, simple and sweet. I haven't gotten around to reading much manga that involves the main couple already married, so this was a nice change of pace to the slow grind relationships found in other manga. However, it wasn't your typical marriage and we aren't given much opportunities to experience their lovey-dovey relationship. What I disliked, was the pacing of the story. It alternated way too much between present day and the past. I understand and can appreciate panels with flashbacks, but these occurrences went on for pretty much the entire chapter. One chapter would show their marriage and love for each other, next
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chapter would look back to their first date, then the next chapter felt like a plot wrap-up but then the following chapter flashes back to before they even met each other. Oh, and technically the main story is wrapped up in 6 chapters. Chapter 7 is a side story on one of the female protagonist's friends and as for Chapter 8, I have no idea who the characters were. Not a huge negative, but a bit strange.
Art: 6/10
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Published in 2005, so I don't expect Picasso-esque detail but I have seen a few older manga with matching or slightly better artwork. Though with respect to the author, it did have a proper shoujo-like atmosphere with appropriate details to match. I.e-- the text sound effects, the monologue speech bubbles, the excessive blushing, the cutesy inter/reactions, and the zoom-ins over every little thing that might feel and look romantic. The character designs are so-so. I mean, nothing about them really stood out aesthetically but the female lead was pretty adorable.
Characters: 6/10
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Nothing memorable for the most part. The male lead is the same guy you'll find in typical shoujo romance stories and likewise for the supporting characters. No, wait- the supporting characters were pretty much trash. I don't believe they contributed anything outside of dialogue and being there as plot devices. The one saving grace of the story is our heroine, our narrator and female lead, Rena. Being a married high school freshman, it takes a lot of effort to pull off and there will oftentimes be mishaps, new experiences, and typical innocent-like situations. Rena went through them all with bravado and was such an adorable character to watch. She really fit the role of a young and inexperienced high school wife.
Enjoyment/Overall: 6/10
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Overall, given the faults of the story's pacing and narration, the "acceptable" artwork and the lack of genuine "characters"-- a 6/10 is what I feel this manga deserves. While the last two chapters were okay to read, one of them should have been written in earlier for a better effect and the other chapter seemingly comes out of nowhere. The manga is short enough to not take up a lot of your precious time but unfortunately not written well enough to satisfy the hunger of most shoujo fans.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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