Just personal scratch.
Advised, possible spoilers.
Opinion & Informal
Interesting but seemed rough. The proportions and anatomy were a bit off in a few cases such as over-sized heads or tiny heads. The shading and detail were pretty good. No impact shots. No expansive or art showcase shots.
Panel Progression: 5/10
Clear enough. No bits that were confusing. Pacing was fine and didn't seem too fast for such a short manga. Page layout wasn't interesting and use of panel flair wasn't there.
Small and simple cast which is a plus because it didn't make things too complex. Character designs were mostly inapplicable because both the main characters
were naked for more than 60% of the manga. Character development was interesting but I didn't feel that it was too sad.
Plot: 5/10 Interesting plot but extremely simple, not much to develop on.
Development: 6/10 A twist that I sort of saw coming only just because I read the synopsis but it wasn't too crazy overall. The twist was a bit predictable just based on the initial setup of the plot in the first few pages.
It was a surprisingly acceptable conclusion for a two chapter manga. I'm personally not into incest, but whatever it was an interesting plot and development that I wouldn't have fully anticipated for such a short manga.
Nothing special and nothing worth mentioning. Short and simple read that had a modicum of plot and development.