Let me first say that the premise behind this story is amazing. There is so much potential from what I have read so far, but it does begin falling flat when it comes to the romance between the main characters.
This story seems to focus on the semantics of the spirit world which is great. I was reading this for the love story though, so I am biased. If the story starts picking back up in the romance department I will end up scoring it higher, but for now, I am only pleased.
Overall, a great story is forming.
The main characters are probably my favorite, but they
need a little more development. After awhile the author shifted to secondary characters as the main focus for some chapters, even leaving the precious bunny out :(