Yuusha to Yobareta Ato ni: Soshite Musou Otoko wa Kazoku wo Tsukuru

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6.8/10


I keep coming back to this manga despite dropping it a numerous of times, making more progress each time, however, there’s just a massive flaw within the story that keeps making me disinterested: The story is so tropey and bland.

You can’t expect much from the plot of these kind of stories, and this is no exception. There’s this huge overlying theme of the psychologically broken mc, and it’s slowly but surely going to get fixed and warmed by the fmc, however, that’s all there is; to be exact, the whole “psychologically broken mc that gets fixed by characters” trope isn’t a bad concept, however, ... it’s rarely done right due to the introduction of plot being amiss — likewise, there’s random developments and a weird pacing to the story that makes the story have a clunky and awkward progression.

The characters are a double edged sword to the story: On one hand of the spectrum, they provide quite the enjoyable comedy with how silly their interactions are, however, this also takes a lot away from the seriousness that the author “secretly” planned out, and the characters become nothing more that — becoming one-dimensional and trapped in their set archetype, which gets boring after a while. The side characters also only serve to provide humor to the story and have no logic behind most of their actions, which is quite sad.

I wasn’t going to speak on this, but the world building of this manga kinda sucks. By kinda, I mean it really sucks. There are some flashbacks here and there to get further characters connection and exposition, but it’s done in such a forced way that it becomes uninteresting. The villainous characters are also so focused and like noted before, they act so stupidly for the sake of plot and comedy.

Though the comedy is the major saving grace of this manga, it’s also what holds this manga back from being anything more than a time waster and comedy relief due to the shallowness of the characters and the idiocy of the world immersion.


Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”

Heyo, Adding up some things in addition to Huang-Teizan.

Its plain boring....The end.

On a more serious note, it really is boring I would say it's a lousy concept taken from Ryoumin 0-nin Start no Henkyou Ryoushusama. The same strong hero sent to a remote region to find a wife there and having adopted children. It's more serious with better comedy, romance and involves actual progression. + Art is better in my opinion.

Plot 5/10
It's simply copy cat stitched together with other mangas. The first chapter showed hope at chapter 26, i see it only spiraling downwards. Like Huang-Teizan ... told we have a broken MC but what Huang-Teizan forgot to tell you, mangakas are almost narrow mindedly moronic they like to stick broken people together and make them a "party" or a "family". Which wouldn't be a problem if it wasn't like plague in manga world, they do not mix all kinds of people they mix broken people with broken people and give us a story how broken people heal each other.....Yeah as if this helps in real world practice. We don't keep mentally ill people in wards for decades for that very same reason, sick people if surrounded by sick people never truly heal or return to our mundane world.

In any case comedy is quite OKAY, but nothing mind blowing. Romance is dead fish until author is "forced" to progress, because popularity is falling. Then there is action, which is probably one of the main points of this manga (sadly).

This plot is boring, overused full of cliches. It almost infuriates me when someone becomes "married" but there is no "plot" or why couldn't they make not adopted children but real children? It's mind boggling.

I know it's shounen but still, you can tailor it for shounen public not mislead them thinking that having dysfunctional, sexless marriage with adopted children is completely fine and something to aspire. I think mangakas don't realise that any literary work leaves a mark on their reader especially young ones.

Characters 6/10
We have a mix of broken MC's with comedy sketches. They are not bad but they are overused templates. MC is emotionless, stoic and powerful. FMC is quirky, bubbly and emotional. Children..........I forgot (read it 20minutes ago, i guess me forgetting them tells us more that few sentences). In short, characters will have 2 forms, BROKEN and REPAIRED.

Art 7/10

It's quirky. MC stands out, I get the feeling as if mangaka reused or copied backgrounds and some animals and characters while MC is made solely by one person whose only mission is to draw MC and MC stands out compared to background. It's as if an amateur drawing on everything else. Whilst background can be spectacular and some characters (females, yeah...) are drawn okay others especially MC is like a lousy attempt of drawing something.
Speech bubbles and panel placement up to standard.

Enjoyment 6/10

It was a mix of boredom coupled with some anticipation for something better. Chapters are short, what I wanted to see I didn't see, it is a carbon copy of other myriad of mangas with the same concept.

Overall 6/10

If you are new to this, please enjoy, it's not bad for newcomers but for hardy veterans with over 1000 mangas behind them, it might be too boring.