Sep 30, 2025
This manga could have easily made my top 10, but why didn't it? Let's break it down.
I think my biggest problem with it is that it tries to go ALL over the place. It has loli, shota, teacher, orgy, stomach deformities, black skin, a TON of stuff. Instead of focusing on a few elements and exploring them to the fullest, it kind of goes easy on everything.
I LOVE a milf getting hammered by three or more shotas, and as much as they explore that well here, unfortunately the character design doesn't help much.
You know, the lolis aren't that loli, the shotas aren't that shota, and
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the milfs aren't that milfs. It's somewhere in the middle where everyone seems to be the same age and only their physical appearance changes. And that's fine, but the shotas, I think that was the biggest mistake, there's a chan missing from the author's character design... and I think that would be solved if the entire manga had colors, yes, the few covers we see in color, give a much more unique vibe to the author's style, but then when we're in the pure manga, without colors, a good part of the essence of the art goes with it. This ends up merging with another big problem, which is the excess of characters. Like, it's okay to have a good character in an orgy, after all, we're going to see a teacher being raped by six or eight of her ten-year-old students. But then, in the middle of the fuck, put a subplot about some loli girls having a romantic relationship with two boys, and then there's one who's shy and then everyone gets together, and OMG, the comics don't help much either. There's too much on the screen, too many characters trying to be relevant, a bunch of text balloons that you end up forgetting to masturbate. Because you're so lost trying to understand the confusion created by the bad comics and all these bad subplots, that you even lose your desire.
So, as I said, if the characters and the excess of information were more balanced, even with the bad comics, it would be enjoyable, but it ends up being chaos. Probably the colors would also help differentiate the amount of characters. Now, getting back to the fact that the manga goes all over the place, that's about it. In the first chapter, it was everything I wanted, it just lacked polish and the problems I mentioned. Then in the second, a new character and a new dynamic. Of course, the orgy between a child and an older woman was still maintained, but the dynamic changed. They tried to address other fetishes, but they didn't go into depth. Then there's the "brothel" and a new teacher. But then there are some black guys with giant dicks and I don't know what, man... Like I said, it's very polluted, it's so much information, you can't process things and then something else is happening and there's no way to masturbate like that, lol. You don't feel the feeling of the characters and the orgasms, it just becomes a slideshow of orgasms and the giant gallery of characters fucking each other without you understanding anything.
And like I said, instead of delving into some fetishes, they just throw them in very disjointedly and kind of on the weekends, and the author remains in his comfort zone. All that said, it's not a bad hentai, the rating is there, but it had everything it needed to be a 10, but the author doesn't know how to manage all that well. I'll read more of his works to see if it improves.
But the lack of colors and overall care would have made this thing one of my favorites. That said, it's fun if you ignore all the lost potential it had, anyway. I recommend it.
Btw: I used the translator to put the review here, strange words and lack of cohesion in the lines are very likely
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
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