Oct 21, 2024
The idea behind this was solid, but it was poorly executed.
The dialogue often confusing and hard to follow. It ended up being exhausting to read because I often found myself staring at a panel trying to figure out wtf is even going on and what they are talking about.
The art isn't great. It was hard to read facial expressions and how exactly people were supposed to be moving etc.
Character motivations are somewhat hard to follow. There was a lot of infodump in the last volume but until then I was mostly just confused why people were acting the way they were.
For something seemingly being
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marketed as GL/yuri there is a huge focus on the two guys (one girls brother and the others ex). I don't mind them being in the story, in fact I dislike when a yuri manga seems to exist in a world solely inhabited by lesbian women... but this was way too much. I didn't add it up but I wouldn't be surprised if they had more total screentime than the two main girls.
That said I liked the core idea behind the characters past, personalities, and the overarching storyline. In an alternate universe this could have been really good.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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