Jan 19, 2024
6.0/10
This is just an alright revenge story. From the tags alone, you can pretty much guess how all of the plot developments are going to unfold —especially the introduction — and it doesn’t expand much from the same old basic formula of revenge stories.
Regarding revenge stories as a whole, the objects of revenge and the ultimate satisfaction moment is why you’d read the story, but every scene was sort of underwhelming — deaths were either too fast and lenient or the characters never really got an important backstory to be truly hated.
To briefly touch on the plot, which contributes massively to the reasoning
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of reading this story, it was just so flawed and stupid — there are countless plot holes that I could list, and it was all for the sake of making dislikable characters, but it didn’t even do that well. Speaking of characters, they’re all so exaggerated to be bad, which was annoying to read.
I’ve grown out of my revenge addiction phase, but I still appreciate a well-written revenge story every now and then, but this just didn’t cut it. It’s readable and probably enjoyable for a revenge enthusiast, but objectively, it was underwhelming.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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