Jan 7, 2025
(Contains very light spoilers)
Does this manwha think I have no critical thinking skill???? Bc surprise surprise I do have some brain cells.
This is a story that at its core is a mystery, and what it presents as the main mystery is incredibly fascinating. I love the way it shows parallels throughout the story, such as the killer using one weapon and the copy cat another. That is when the story truly shines. It is the main conflict with the killer that is honestly the only reason I kept reading.
The bad things are very prevalent through the whole story, things that make absolutely no sense.
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Example is a kid that somehow kills his father and NO ONE found out??? Along with one of Jonathan's friends being a creep and he somehow just doesn't see it or doesn't care?
The plot is not paces well at all, sometimes it's horribly slow then suddenly like 5 things happen. Making it so at the end of the story there are things that are left unresolved, and characters under developed.
Adding to there there are a couple plot holes that I can not stop thinking about. The main one being how Jonathan looses his phone and not even the next day has a new one. But that's not even the most frustrating part. The person who stole the phone do not even use it??? Which brings me into the most infuriating thing of all. ALL the characters are so dumb, none of theme ever really think anything through except mayyyybbeee Kister. Not even the reader is treated as someone who has any brain cells. The clues that are shown through are always explained to us in a text bubble even for the simplest of things. Which is just super disappointing because there are some really great puzzles in here that just feel useless when you explain them. This is mostly due to the fact that when creating a story that involves drawings, it is always better to show not tell.
Overall I don't think I can't recommend this to anyone because it was mostly disappointing except for one character which was Kister. He was the only reason I kept reading.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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