Apr 29, 2024
TW - Dub Con - He starts feeling up on his D and butt hole when the MC is sleeping but then the MC wakes up and consents to sex. Later on the MC thinks it was still rape but then realizes he taught him everything he knows so I he doesn't see it as rape again, not sure but putting this here incase you need the TW!
The art is good and okay in other scenes.
This story had a lot of potential for a really good plot had it been longer.
The MC/uke plays videos games for fun & to destress, and when
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he creates a perfect new character & class it ends up coming out of his screen and into the real world. Thus the story begins, he teaches him a lot of things and he experiences a lot of firsts. The Seme/ML loving the MC was understandable however the MC loving the ML...it felt rushed.
Not to mention the other character, TW maybe? He allowed a tentacle monster to feel up on the MC and he just stood there and watched.
The ending felt rushed and a shame it wasn't a longer plot it had potential.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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