Lyrical Muscle Encounter
Rhythmic Muscle Encounter

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Hmmm.

The middle feels dragged. The first chapter goes in with full force of a lewd fantasy and at first I thought "oh, yes, full lewd smut shenanigans", but then the next few chapters seems to be spent pulling back, adding tension that does not need to be added instead of going full force with the smut.

And it's one thing if all the delay gives out more of the main characters but...it's not. The chapters after the first throws the main characters into a repetitive push-and-pull, not adding much to the main characters and making the delay feel more unnecessary and forced. The main characters ... initially look interesting, but by the end I feel mostly tired and exhausted.

The art is okay, but it's not enough to improve things, I feel.