Jan 7, 2025
4.9/10
I’m going to keep it short because it’s 2:45 a.m. and this erotica sucks like the rest of them. It’s the same old cliche trope of “humans so evil and demons were actually good rawr.” Oh, and the demon king is, of course, a hot female because why wouldn’t she be?
He characters are incredibly bad in this, as the mc is yet another spineless wimp despite being a hero who has faced the battlefield before. He’s not the spineless type where he shudders at a female’s reactions and stuff, but he just follows the age-old mantra of “I shall not kill” and “everyone is good,”
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so despite being betrayed he has no ounce of hatred because… he’s just dumb.
As for the side characters/heroines, they are all too good to the mc for basically no reason. There’s some half-@ssed reason with him being a good guy, but there’s no point in going that far for him.
As for the plot, it is one messy, sloppy mess. The introduction was honestly so confusing because there wasn’t a complete introduction; instead, it was a short flashback, cut to main scene, another flashback, and then another cut to the main scene. It made no sense; no characters or names were properly introduced, so it made the entire interaction wack.
As for the plot from there, you could get the gist of it from how bad the character interactions were.
Okay, this took me like 5 minutes, and I just saved you 5 minutes and a headache from reading this slop. Thank me never and goodnight!
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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