Nov 10, 2022
Imagine being a self-insert and giving moral support for the yandere bf you desire. Thats it. Thats the story. I would rate if lower but I am a yandere simp so we stan.
Characters - 7/10
Its a mixed bag. The story revolves so much on the male leads that it drowns time to flesh out the female leads. Aseph is such a charming yandere man with great backstory, if you put her beside Elizay (the supposed main lead) she is like a sad stick. The story didn't give her agency on anything. Most of the time she just cried and pity Aseph (and didnt progress the
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story.) She really is just an outsider shoehorned to the story. The orginal MC is more fun and girlboss.
Story - 6/10
After a day of reading it, you can easily forget about the whole thing. (just like how Elizay forget her past lol). Oh no i have fatedd mark and my love doesnt have it. more twist of events, yay my lover has the mark. The story could have tried to pair elizay to the antagonist and have his mark ripped away more more interest, even give Elizay more roles. The story revolves more on ML that the title doesn't make sense. Might as well call it "the villian" since the FL only cries for the whole series.
Art - 8/10
banger art, they all look pretty, Aseph's wardrobe is iconic. he is almost princely. Awesome work on fight scene. Wish they used stronger colors or different ones. Elizay and Aseph looks too similar that being high fantasy setting feels wasted to make them look more fun.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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