Apr 23, 2020
"What's this, the enemy army is advancing in a pike formation, you've got my interest! The pikes are a little short, but yo-"
"Oh so they're just going to charge at the protagonist one by one."
"Oh he's just going to cut fully armored men in half."
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"I guess I shouldn't have expected too much from the action side of things, but the protagonist has a cool grizzled aunt who governed a border march and made it prosperous."
...
"Oh you're just planting death flags in her back like a colonial explorer."
"Oh and now she's dead and it's not even chapter four yet."
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"Well maybe there will still be an interesting political situation that will-"
"Oh so the protagonist's reputation as a bloodthirsty coward willing to do anything to save his own skin doesn't even last two chapters."
"Oh everything bad can be blamed on a second born prince and his evil lackeys who hate commoners."
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While my expectations were not high, this was nevertheless disappointing.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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