Right. If I wouldn't have decided to read the whole of Kemodo series because I liked ...Virgin Love, the third manga in the series, so much, I would have dropped this one. I'm not big on kids and there was also a scene I didn't like in Happy Yarou Wedding♡.
I was already familiar with some of the characters here so I figured it out pretty quick how the main characters relate to the others. About the main characters, I didn't like Toudou that much, but he is trying so I'll give him that. I felt a bit sad for Yuuhi, he got some shit that
he did not deserve. He's such a gentle guy, he should be showered with love and affection from all sides. What he got instead was distrust and Kazuki (whom I liked in ...Virgin Love and whose actions I understand—he has some shit of his own to deal with) being a jerk to him.
Toudou was pretty terrible too about Shouta. I get that he wanted to be with Yuuhi as much as possible, but it felt like his priorities weren't in the right place. He should give all of his attention to Shouta and put Shouta first, but instead he acted immature.
He was bad at communicating too. So yeah, I didn't really like Todou, Yuuhi could do so much better.
The art is not the greatest, the characters look so big (the semes especially) and Yuuhi's face looked quite disproportionate in a few panels. There were little mishaps here and there, but I didn't mind it. Having 100% accurate proportions is not a must for me, I'm here more for the story than the art.