Jun 27, 2021
***THIS REVIEW CONTAINS SPOILERS***
AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
It had so much promise. As in like, it was funny, and not just ecchi sex played for laughs.
At least for the first 10ish chapters, that is.
These 4 most recent chapters are absolutely dreadful, and ruin any enjoyment of the story that I had.
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Let's start with chapter 11. Throughout the rest of the story, the lack of sex our MC experiences is played for jokes, and none of the girls are ever really assaulted in any way by any thing. No tentacle rape, no worm rape, none of that. There was nudity, for sure, but it was relatively tasteful.
And then chapter 11 rolls up and the entire thing is just tentacle rape. (Well, tree root rape, but who the fuck cares). For like 8 straight pages. Why? This doesn't move the story along, and if the author wanted all the girls naked there are easier ways. The chapter is made a bit better with some character development for one of the twin girls, but still is an overall sour taste.
And then chapter 12 rolls along and blows all expectations of quality out the window. The entire chapter is a yandere dream sequence nightmare where the MC is convinced that he ate his roommates in bean-form and must fuck the dryad to get them to come out as children. Just... what? Why? And of course, its then revealed to be a dream sequence and nothing in this chapter matters.
Chapters 13 and 14 are connected, and they consist of the NTR ('bait') arc. Basically we're now following this random pervert who woke up in our MC's body after our MC saved him from truck-assisted suicide to *purposfully* isekai himself. After waking up, he sees that he's surrounded by beautiful girls, all of whom are interested in him, and proceeds to molest and fuck numerous of them.
It's not enjoyable, it doesn't make sense plotwise, and it leaves a sour taste. Rape, molestation, non-con, and NTR are *not* what I want from my happy friendly ecchi-comedy manga. And yet it's what I get. At one point he gets an aphrodesiac to make fucking the elves even easier, and the light elf straight up calls him out on not being the MC. He's like "yeah but ima stab myself with a fork", and then aphrodesiacs her before fucking and mindbreaking her. WHY.
EXCEPT THEN IT TURNS OUT HE'S NOT SOME RANDOM DUDE.
This entire arc has actually been following our protagonist, but after *someone* in the apartment decided to mess with his personality to cause a war between the 'otherworld' and Earth.
And then the chapter ends, and nothing new has been published in half a year.
This manga had promise, with high points including chapters 1 and 10, only for it to be ruined by a set of bad, poorly thought-out, incomprehensible, and completely tone-inconsistent chapters.
Chapter 15 edit: the whole thing was an illusion.
Story: 3
Art: 7
Character: 4
Enjoyment: 2
(16/40)
Overall: 3/10
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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